WEEK 3: Mac 1-1 VS Adverse 1-1 ADVERSE WINS

UPN Zuch · 10-16-2020, 06:49 PM

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Mac · 10-16-2020, 07:25 PM

yoo.. good luck my man.. 10 is plenty

Adverse · 10-16-2020, 07:39 PM

Good luck to you too sir

Adverse · 10-19-2020, 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zuch

Mac is fucking hot. Great body.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mac

I've tried writing verses in Spanish first but it didn't turn out well. The humor and puns are not the same, it screws up the wording. I feel more comfortable speaking English anyhow.

Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio
My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those?
I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed
Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed
The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset
Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck
And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez

UPN Zuch · 10-20-2020, 11:25 PM

@Mac where you at?

Mac · 10-20-2020, 11:26 PM

extendo pls

Mac · 10-21-2020, 03:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse

Bro your wife is more supportive of me than mine is lmao

do you even have a wife? thats a real question
last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention
so clearly that marriage has a conflict
his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped
have her stripped then ill fuck her with power
she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower
lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs
ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum
anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room

Wanderer · 10-21-2020, 05:46 PM

Adverse

Body and hard reset were the standouts. The rest was lack lustre to me

Mac

Nothing on par with ads standouts

I gotta say.. Mac, I’ve seen you come better but lately you’ve seemed off the pace or like you’re not putting much effort in.

Vote Ad

iSpaz · 10-21-2020, 09:54 PM

The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset

vs

not feeling much

v/adverse. Seems like Mac was trying to change up his style a bit, some cool concepts up in there, could be fire w/ some wording fixes imo.

Orc · 10-22-2020, 06:58 AM

For Ad:
Opener was nice, smooth
Complimenting body cool, I just flipped Barcotic body last week tho
Hard reset line was nice, smooth again

For Mac:
Wisdom was a cool idea
Wired up/FB server cool idea too

Next time you’ve written a verse send it to me and I will help with the wording

I’ve got Ad

Universe · 10-22-2020, 07:47 AM

Adverse:

"The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week"

"They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset"

Mac:

"anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room"

Kind of a nonchalant battle here. Adverse had a couple nice lines but you could tell he was coasting. I can always tell by the length of his bars how hard he tries lol. Mac, you started to get momentum by the end but by then it was too late. Maybe should've went 16?

Vote: Adverse

Destroyer · 10-23-2020, 01:46 PM

I’m gonna go against the grain here and vote for my boy Mac
No question that ad’s verse is crafted better and looks more polished...on the surface
But I was really only feeling his THIS body bar
My man Mac had the opener which was funny, and also the ad skipped, which were both good concepts. I can see this going to ad, obviously. But I preferred mac’s offering so I’m voting for him
Ahh fuck I read it again. I missed the hard reset bar. That’s actually a dope bar. Goddammit
Mac. Work on your wording. The concepts are there.

V/adverse

evaD · 10-23-2020, 02:15 PM

Liked both efforts but Mac’s felt a bit rushed. Ad had some bangers actually too and did enough for the W. Good effort both.

Vote - ad

Victor. · 10-23-2020, 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse

Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio
My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those?
u worded this off. I get it but I dont like it. good idea in concept
I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed
Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed
wording horrible on the punch concept was tough
The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week
same as above. why did u kill ur wording this week dude
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset
fire
Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck
And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez
no. fuck this bar

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mac

do you even have a wife? thats a real question
last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention
huh? spirits like liquor? intervention? iunno man lost in translation here
so clearly that marriage has a conflict
his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped
ok
have her stripped then ill fuck her with power
she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower
this is light but u worded it ok
lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs
ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum
no
anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room
eh

both struggled

mac seems burnt out or didnt try

adverse had good ideas he always does. but he shit the bed on every punch wording

v adverse

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-23-2020, 05:48 PM

Body line was flames
Hard reset was cool

Vs

Porn ad maybe

Vote adverse

Blue Bayou · 10-23-2020, 07:10 PM

The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week"
They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset

vs.

Nothing quotable really

Seen much better "Ad" bars then the porno one so its tough to credit it , spirits couldve been funny for a really old flip but the rushed setup ruined it

Adverse, while far from his best, got it

White LGI · 10-23-2020, 07:38 PM

Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio
My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those?

Decent

I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed
Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed

Wack

The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts
Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week

Blahnik

They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect
Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset

Trash

Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck
And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez

Trash

This verse sucked ad

do you even have a wife? thats a real question
last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention
Blah

so clearly that marriage has a conflict
his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped

Smh

have her stripped then ill fuck her with power
she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower

Ok

lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs
ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum

Ok

anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb
mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room

Smh

This sucked to...

This battle is terrible

But I will say AD won

10-21-2020, 09:54 PM	#9
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset vs not feeling much v/adverse. Seems like Mac was trying to change up his style a bit, some cool concepts up in there, could be fire w/ some wording fixes imo. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-22-2020, 07:47 AM	#11
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 999 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178702	Adverse: "The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week" "They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset" Mac: "anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room" Kind of a nonchalant battle here. Adverse had a couple nice lines but you could tell he was coasting. I can always tell by the length of his bars how hard he tries lol. Mac, you started to get momentum by the end but by then it was too late. Maybe should've went 16? Vote: Adverse __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

10-23-2020, 02:15 PM	#13
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 697 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156644	Liked both efforts but Mac’s felt a bit rushed. Ad had some bangers actually too and did enough for the W. Good effort both. Vote - ad __________________

10-23-2020, 05:48 PM	#15
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132751	Body line was flames Hard reset was cool Vs Porn ad maybe Vote adverse __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-16-2020, 07:25 PM	#2
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856619	yoo.. good luck my man.. 10 is plenty

10-16-2020, 07:39 PM	#3
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,741 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	Good luck to you too sir

10-20-2020, 11:26 PM	#6
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856619	extendo pls

10-21-2020, 05:46 PM	#8
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 587 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457538	Adverse Body and hard reset were the standouts. The rest was lack lustre to me Mac Nothing on par with ads standouts I gotta say.. Mac, I’ve seen you come better but lately you’ve seemed off the pace or like you’re not putting much effort in. Vote Ad

10-22-2020, 06:58 AM	#10
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	For Ad: Opener was nice, smooth Complimenting body cool, I just flipped Barcotic body last week tho Hard reset line was nice, smooth again For Mac: Wisdom was a cool idea Wired up/FB server cool idea too Next time you’ve written a verse send it to me and I will help with the wording I’ve got Ad

10-23-2020, 07:10 PM	#16
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week" They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset vs. Nothing quotable really Seen much better "Ad" bars then the porno one so its tough to credit it , spirits couldve been funny for a really old flip but the rushed setup ruined it Adverse, while far from his best, got it

10-23-2020, 07:38 PM	#17
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,034 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Your girl taking Jamie’s spot this week...so we celebrated with cardio My review’ll be like “dick game fire, tongue was dope” u like WAIT what bars were those? Decent I ain’t playing with these guns, better pray you’re not killed Tell em these ‘Mac clips’ll ruin his life’ n he think he’s being extorted for the gay porn that he filmed Wack The tables have turned, while you working out tirelessly I’m gorgin at feasts Still Zuch gon be complimenting THIS body instead after he sees how I tore you this week Blahnik They say you’re improving every week bro...but we’re yet to show any of ur bars respect Automatic, hold the button down on Mac till everything goes BLACK that’s a hard reset Trash Whether u Hyde from this Forman, or Sticom and Donna vest, just protect ya neck And why are all of these references ironic? Because you’re literally Netcees’ Fez Trash This verse sucked ad do you even have a wife? thats a real question last time she lift your spirits it turned into an intervention Blah so clearly that marriage has a conflict his sex life is equal to porn cuz the Ad is always skipped Smh have her stripped then ill fuck her with power she must love head & shoulders cuz what shes about in my shower Ok lemme make you a favor & rip ur body to crumbs ill bring out the wisdom in you & i didn't even have to lift the gum Ok anyhow the time has come so call the sewers ur tomb mac's leaving him more wired up than facebook's server room Smh This sucked to... This battle is terrible But I will say AD won