10-24-2020, 11:24 AM | #1 |
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WEEK 4: Jayfresh 1-1 VS INF 1-2 INF WINS
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10-25-2020, 07:55 AM | #2 |
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10-29-2020, 04:14 PM | #3 |
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10-29-2020, 05:43 PM | #4 |
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Jayfresh verse:
ya girl a freaaaak yo. but, . . Fresh too gets rough n shaggy.. suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy" His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth. knives open u up. Prove u a damn bitch pull the blade outcha n comes back my shirt ironed with a ham sandwich yo i get mad ladies, the bed stay hot when we fuckin u barely keep the sheets cool.. bunch of dad jokes , jean shorts, & tuck ins & i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status |
10-30-2020, 04:13 AM | #6 |
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Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk
We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up. Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type. Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver. Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved. Last edited by Saint; 10-30-2020 at 06:09 AM. |
10-30-2020, 06:49 AM | #7 |
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Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy" Decent His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth. this is ok knives open u up. Prove u a damn bitch pull the blade outcha n comes back my shirt ironed with a ham sandwich Ehh yo i get mad ladies, the bed stay hot when we fuckin u barely keep the sheets cool.. bunch of dad jokes , jean shorts, & tuck ins Lol liked this & i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status Nice Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up. Don’t what pie-scene is meant to double up as? Cool name flip otherwise tho Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type. Nice Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver. Noice Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box Cool A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved. Nice Bit of a style clash here. Jayson has witty style but kinda old fashioned concepts. Pulls it off well. INF goes way more technical, sometimes i don’t get it but when it hits it’s great. I thought inf had the higher highs here so going with them. Vote - inf
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10-30-2020, 01:50 PM | #8 |
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jayfresh
first bar was corny to me, second bar first line was cool but it lead to no where, your other bars was more bragging than punching, and a lot of horrorcore type bars, try to be more creative with your punches. inf the american pie reference in first bar was smooth, first to deliver was cool, recipe in a box was dope... made it on been undeserved was killer. vote/Inf I got inf taking this due to landing better punches. |
10-30-2020, 03:54 PM | #9 |
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Damn INF brought it this week.
Jay- money booth and sandwich bars were nice INF - American pie, trump, hello fresh were dope Got INF in a close one
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10-30-2020, 04:01 PM | #10 |
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Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy" not bad His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth. hmm knives open u up. Prove u a damn bitch pull the blade outcha n comes back my shirt ironed with a ham sandwich not feelin this yo i get mad ladies, the bed stay hot when we fuckin u barely keep the sheets cool.. bunch of dad jokes , jean shorts, & tuck ins hah & i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status not bad vs Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up. okk Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type. fire tbh Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver. cool Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box hah A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved. cool inf got this. fiber type was lotb. jayfresh wasn't hittin too hard for me
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10-31-2020, 09:24 AM | #11 |
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Inf got this pretty handily
Jay fresh concepts were a little.... dad jokes was cool Inf had some mean bars in there Fiber type lotb V/inf |
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Fresh underdelivered. Inf I remember your wording being way different at one point. Or I dont know. Both you guys kind of thrashed around in this one I really only liked one line and Inf got it vote inf
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11-01-2020, 11:44 AM | #13 |
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& i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas
till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status vs Whole squaad aim sticks, blood & guts certain to trigger Trump promised a 'Red Wave w/ the Poles' u'll be the first to deliver. Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box This joint kinda hurt my head. We def need a clean up the wording on both sides. I get where u were going with that Hello Fresh joint, shit cuda been fireee. Poles was coo tho. V / - INF |
11-01-2020, 12:21 PM | #14 |
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Fresh too gets rough n shaggy..
suffers separation anxiety when I 'pull out' she screaming "daddy, daddy" His accomps fulla roast n cypher wins. Inf padding the truuuth When ya stats more stuffed than pockets 60 secs inside a money booth. & i'll fuckin' razorblade ya face into a canvas till ya forehead splits up, deletes all contacts n posts "new year new me" status sheets "cool" was an interesting concept but i didnt like how you executed it vs. Praised Orc after you lost. that moves basic as fuckkk We kno the Pie-scene; fishing for compliments is why Jayson Biggs up. Slooow death to ya. muscle spasm when it's ur time to die Eyes goin fast to a slow twitch prove WE ain't cut from the same Fiber Type. Ur styles choppy fuck yo girl lines, every week is a flop Mag'll read: Hello Fresh -- another season w/ a recipe in a box A Biden deal cant help Jay. Allll hype but nothin works He's no Hunter -- just the energy money made it on been undeserved. Red Wave was a coo flip as well but i'm personally over all the red/blue etc. color political concepts Jay you had someincredibly lazy wording this week but "conceptually" what i quoted were pretty fire to me... closer was jokes , speeration anxiety was swagg INF very solid throughout with some dope cocneptts....energy tie in made me quote the Hunter closer, Fiber type was flames This leagues weird to me right now...aside from maybe User vs Dave this battle is the most impressive to me in terms of creativity and concepts... Closeish but i have INF getting the W |
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