03-10-2014, 07:39 PM | #1 |
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Creeps 1-0 vs kwal!ty 7-5 - Kwal!ty wins
NBL Season 7 Week 15 Due FRIDAY, March 14th Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on 4 battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Creeps @kwality
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03-11-2014, 02:09 PM | #2 |
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I'm going 16. You want 10 you better drop first kiddo
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03-11-2014, 03:19 PM | #4 |
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I took one look at your record, and knew why it's the source for numerous ***kles you've got a natural quality for making a name for yourself while losing your battles heard that your slut's a slut, and she'd suck the devils dick for crack rock it aint a mystery why that brown bitch's snatch is more sought out than that Malaysian planes black box speaking of which, all that <---------- shit in your lines is fucking wack and you know it you should take directions on landing a punch, when you're not too busy being an air traffic controller I'm a stud muffin, me and your mom have sex marathons with SVU on the tube while you're outside gettin her lawn in order and doing the Breakin scene with your broom she came an hour ago, now she's lookin in my eyes like my that was a mistake cuz I won't nut till the end of the ep, and when I walk out the room I'll scream" congrats on the rape" you aint winning the Lotto this match, I'm fleeing with the purse the ukraine/ \russian line shoulda been dumped in the Crimea River, cuz that's what I did after reading your verse Last edited by Creeps; 03-11-2014 at 08:55 PM. |
03-12-2014, 01:09 AM | #5 |
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Fuck nameplays ... BARS!
my punches will feed a whole team! yours just a salad bar Creeps punches arent dope,his Lines are known to Ware Off like a Dallas Star your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head & your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread your girl likes that im a RudeBoy & Bender back this Knight wont Drift in your favor if you voted on the conteder match il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out |
03-16-2014, 11:22 AM | #6 |
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03-16-2014, 03:13 PM | #7 |
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I took one look at your record, and knew why it's the source for numerous ***kles
you've got a natural quality for making a name for yourself while losing your battles played heard that your slut's a slut, and she'd suck the devils dick for crack rock it aint a mystery why that brown bitch's snatch is more sought out than that Malaysian planes black box ok but kinda awkward speaking of which, all that <---------- shit in your lines is fucking wack and you know it you should take directions on landing a punch, when you're not too busy being an air traffic controller lol coulda hit harder I'm a stud muffin, me and your mom have sex marathons with SVU on the tube while you're outside gettin her lawn in order and doing the Breakin scene with your broom eh she came an hour ago, now she's lookin in my eyes like my that was a mistake cuz I won't nut till the end of the ep, and when I walk out the room I'll scream" congrats on the rape" wut you aint winning the Lotto this match, I'm fleeing with the purse the ukraine/ \russian line shoulda been dumped in the Crimea River, cuz that's what I did after reading your verse been waiting for a Crimea river line.... not very good tbh my punches will feed a whole team! yours just a salad bar Creeps punches arent dope,his Lines are known to Ware Off like a Dallas Star ok, coulda hit harder your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head & your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread like the flip a lot but coulda been done more your girl likes that im a RudeBoy & Bender back this Knight wont Drift in your favor if you voted on the conteder match ok il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry eh your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots okish think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out played to hell creeps prolly couldve won if his punches were harder hitting. I thought his style was better but the punches themselves didnt do that much like the air traffic line. kwal was ok, the first two bars were cool flips that coulda done a lot more but i felt those more than any other lines. close call but i give kwal the edge, but stick around creeps you did pretty good v/kwal!ty |
03-17-2014, 04:43 AM | #8 |
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Vs. this Knight wont Drift in your favor if you voted on the conteder match il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out KwAl get my vote, creep them lines so damn long I lost interest, trim that unnecessary wording my nigga
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creep had some loooooong lines
The Malaysian one almost worked, but u gotta crisp up ur wording kwality had his Malaysian line, the contender match was ok, aero thread was an almost he just had much more to work with v/kwality |
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Vs. your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head & your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread il take ur bitch, im a threat you should worry cuz il leave your girl panting, you just make her get dressed in hurry your known to AirLines, im known for rage & violence mine connect, while yours are more off course then Malaysian Pilots Lol'd @ Panting. I feel like it's been done before but the execution was cool so I like it. Creep you have some ideas you just have to word them effectively. Cut down on your wording and get more direct. V/Kwal |
03-17-2014, 12:36 PM | #11 |
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Blackbox
Vs Drift, gateway drug v/kwality, creeps verse last week war better tbh this week way to wordy Lacked impact had acouple almost hitting lines...kwal had a solid verse Couple cool bars he was more consistent here he gets my vote.
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03-17-2014, 12:53 PM | #12 |
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Breakin, crimea
Vs. Aero, panting, contender Was being generous with the contender line but overall better misses V kwality |
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you aint winning the Lotto this match, I'm fleeing with the purse
the ukraine/ \russian line shoulda been dumped in the Crimea River, cuz that's what I did after reading your verse vs your thoughts arent sharp even with a narrow head & your sexuality, is known for seeking more Closure then an Aero thread think youl win? you got a better chance in a Greed bout since Pots a gateway drug, youd be a dope head after the lines you weed out decent battle here...didn't like Creeps longer bars...Kwal had better flow on continuity... v/Kwali
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Vs. Drift, gateway Creep was real wordy so nothing real connected imo, kw had drift n gateway which coo n won it V/kw |
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Creep I liked the blackbox line but feel like it coulda been executed a lot better like you could said "her black box was more sought out than blah blah blah" we know a box is a snatch so it would been more effective.
Kwal I like the contender match line that was dope maybe because I you flipped everyones names like that. I also liked the airline punch, it was more effective even though it was kind of simple, it stayed true to current events. Creep has potential but not effective with hits. Vote-Kwality |
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