02-25-2019, 02:42 PM | #1 |
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Cynic vs Incredible - CYNIC WINS
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Wk 6 Due Thursday, Feb 28 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree 24hr ext to be granted by opponent NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
02-25-2019, 09:17 PM | #2 |
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12, probably 10
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02-26-2019, 07:50 PM | #3 |
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10s good
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02-27-2019, 05:24 PM | #5 | |
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gg, well played Inc Swear I didn't read a word of that verse if your tryna rematch later. I owe you a proper battle now I'll elaborate in the next mag, all, but let it be known asap that this was just for fun, bleak matched me based on record, same as anyone else, and I would not have signed into the playoffs if I had somehow qualified Last edited by Sharp; 02-27-2019 at 05:36 PM. |
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02-27-2019, 06:30 PM | #6 |
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If it's a show down, the automatic shine, yours? flop,,, not mine
Sprayin until I see a solid red, like I'm a city worker repainting a stop sign Your bitch treat me like a God now, it is what it seems pal Said she like it quick n' easy, guess I made her not want the Cynic route Revolver spin like some slicks, make it click &&& put you in a urn clown Made it sequel but that smoke billowing up ain't from me doing a burn out Talk shit and I'll find you fast bet money I keep it a stack You'll see me up close on your front porch like that new doorbell app I saw the mag sharp thinks your on the right path Alias acts never lead to the road of greatness, won't gain enough weight to even make a track |
02-28-2019, 06:14 PM | #7 |
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03-01-2019, 07:13 PM | #8 |
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i sonned you on this already, but this shit wasnt inspired holmes your mags cant drive activity if theyre an activity for your drive home mod to mod, you aint done shit. sayin otherwise takes balls, son keep it 100? your best contribution is doing that for Allen’s W column im mean n direct. your verses generic, i swear it, the shit aint hard next to my personal gift, youre the wad of singles in ya kids unsigned bday card you fuckin peaked n you still suck. if i was you id be flippin annoyed this is your summit. n its amounting to nothing like that shit in Hanoi ill run up on Inc. clean kill cuz hes trash wit them gun lines when i spray, this garbage gettin wiped off the fuckin map. Mario Sunshine |
03-02-2019, 12:14 AM | #9 |
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If it's a show down, the automatic shine, yours? flop,,, not mine
Sprayin until I see a solid red, like I'm a city worker repainting a stop sign too simple Your bitch treat me like a God now, it is what it seems pal Said she like it quick n' easy, guess I made her not want the Cynic route really simple again but ok i guess Revolver spin like some slicks, make it click &&& put you in a urn clown Made it sequel but that smoke billowing up ain't from me doing a burn out erm...no Talk shit and I'll find you fast bet money I keep it a stack You'll see me up close on your front porch like that new doorbell app lmao I saw the mag sharp thinks your on the right path Alias acts never lead to the road of greatness, won't gain enough weight to even make a track ..ok .. i sonned you on this already, but this shit wasnt inspired holmes your mags cant drive activity if theyre an activity for your drive home lolz mod to mod, you aint done shit. sayin otherwise takes balls, son keep it 100? your best contribution is doing that for Allen’s W column cool im mean n direct. your verses generic, i swear it, the shit aint hard next to my personal gift, youre the wad of singles in ya kids unsigned bday card meh you fuckin peaked n you still suck. if i was you id be flippin annoyed this is your summit. n its amounting to nothing like that shit in Hanoi dece ill run up on Inc. clean kill cuz hes trash wit them gun lines when i spray, this garbage gettin wiped off the fuckin map. Mario Sunshine cool v/ sharp, wasn't close. incred is way too simplistic. start trying to at least use some wordplay or try to make everything less obvious. sharp had some cool shit and it was enough. |
03-02-2019, 02:33 AM | #10 |
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If it's a show down, the automatic shine, yours? flop,,, not mine
Sprayin until I see a solid red, like I'm a city worker repainting a stop sign ...ehh, needed better wording.... Your bitch treat me like a God now, it is what it seems pal Said she like it quick n' easy, guess I made her not want the Cynic route ...almost, might be an accent thing. Good np... Revolver spin like some slicks, make it click &&& put you in a urn clown Made it sequel but that smoke billowing up ain't from me doing a burn out ...forced... Talk shit and I'll find you fast bet money I keep it a stack You'll see me up close on your front porch like that new doorbell app ...coulda done more with it... I saw the mag sharp thinks your on the right path Alias acts never lead to the road of greatness, won't gain enough weight to even make a track ...nah... Vs i sonned you on this already, but this shit wasnt inspired holmes your mags cant drive activity if theyre an activity for your drive home ...dead. lotb... mod to mod, you aint done shit. sayin otherwise takes balls, son keep it 100? your best contribution is doing that for Allen’s W column ...damn... im mean n direct. your verses generic, i swear it, the shit aint hard next to my personal gift, youre the wad of singles in ya kids unsigned bday card ...ehhhh...... you fuckin peaked n you still suck. if i was you id be flippin annoyed this is your summit. n its amounting to nothing like that shit in Hanoi ...I can tell a teacher wrote this bar... ill run up on Inc. clean kill cuz hes trash wit them gun lines when i spray, this garbage gettin wiped off the fuckin map. Mario Sunshine ...ok... Overall: inc coming along and getting better but cynic first 2 bars killed it. Rest of his verse wasnt bad V. Cynic |
03-02-2019, 05:26 PM | #11 |
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Inc was better than last time i read his work.
cynic route was eh ok. had some wording issues to workout. liked cynics first two, & last two were pretty cool as well. yeaa this wasn't that close to me.. V - Cynic
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03-03-2019, 05:07 AM | #12 |
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This was a okay battle..both had some okay lines here..sharp..the mario sunshine line was pretty cooll..incredible had some cool lines as-well..but I have go give it to sharp/cynic here got better wordplay and punches..here..
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03-03-2019, 09:01 AM | #13 |
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solid red a lil too simple
cynic route was aight, funny burn out coulda been dope but wording was an issue doorbell app almost hit, another tight concept but needes more creativity didnt fuck with the closer vs driving home was funny allen was cool, good personal bday was ehhh hanoi was aight wasnt feeling the closer there were execution issues with Inc’s shit, better wording coulda turned things around for him, first 2 of Sharp’s verse were lotb and copped it for em v Sharp
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