Flossaurus 1-1 Vs Allen Knight 2-1-ALLEN WINS

[Allen Knight]

NBL Season 7
Week 11

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@Flossaurus @Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

Check, 10

[Clash]

Reigncheck

[Clash]

I'm fuckin his bitch g-spot 'watch' me smash a ho,
She said I do it way better so i left that pussy in G-shock like Casio,

He been in it for so long and still just mediocre,
I'm leavin em stuck on the 'undercard' like I'm foldin lame hands in poker,

This dumbass can't figure out a 'techs' design,
You know his 'mags' don't spark up interest even with the 'Nine',

I been starvin so I'm carvin out a dude veins,
Then goin at his 'neck' jus to take a stab at the fuckin 'food chain',

I got them choppers that'll blast and end lives wit precision,
So i'm poppin em off and leavin his crew wit more 'flatlines' than my new television.

[Allen Knight]

10 kizzel

shank u while ur on a date w/ wifey, hit ya chest w/ the blade hard
have ur heart spillin all over her hands like she's holding a valentines day card
gotta mean jump hook faggot, my fist im slamin here
& give F-15 airstrikes till his eyes hanging out his head like a jets landing gear
all u do is take dick faggot, u work it till there balls shine
niggas wreck flo's rear end so much he'd have the highest insurance qoute of all time
ur gonna spit sum played shit, it aint gonna get me here
every concept u drops OldBoy & look like they been locked in a room for 20 years
bitches call me king in the sack, rip pussy w/ my heavy grind
shit wen it comes to sex F-bombs so bad his girl curses'em out everytime

Flo had some ok'ish concepts if worded/executed properly could have landed effectively. But the way they were executed came of statement'ish at times. G shock was blah, undercard was an ok concept but executed poorly, mags was a complete miss, neck/food chain was a miss as well, and flatlines could have been taken in a different direction, IMO. The execution was stupid.

Allen had some ok concepts as well which had poor executions. Spilling heart/v day card made no sense, poor transition, the F 15 was a dope concept but could have been takin in a different direction for more of an impact, the rear end insurance quote was lol, the Oldboy concept I just saw in that shadow box tourney from someone that I read earlier, and was blahhh, imo, the F bombs was a decent name flip but the execution didn't sit well with me.

Overall: I feel AK had less misses IMO so he takes it.

V/Allen

[CtrlF4]

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

10 kizzel

shank u while ur on a date w/ wifey, hit ya chest w/ the blade hard
have ur heart spillin all over her hands like she's holding a valentines day card
decent
gotta mean jump hook faggot, my fist im slamin here
& give F-15 airstrikes till his eyes hanging out his head like a jets landing gear
ok
all u do is take dick faggot, u work it till there balls shine
niggas wreck flo's rear end so much he'd have the highest insurance qoute of all time
meh
ur gonna spit sum played shit, it aint gonna get me here
every concept u drops OldBoy & look like they been locked in a room for 20 years
ok
bitches call me king in the sack, rip pussy w/ my heavy grind
shit wen it comes to sex F-bombs so bad his girl curses'em out everytime
no

Originally Posted by Flossaurus

I'm fuckin his bitch g-spot 'watch' me smash a ho,
She said I do it way better so i left that pussy in G-shock like Casio,
how do you leave a pussy in G shock?
He been in it for so long and still just mediocre,
I'm leavin em stuck on the 'undercard' like I'm foldin lame hands in poker,
eehh
This dumbass can't figure out a 'techs' design,
You know his 'mags' don't spark up interest even with the 'Nine',
I see what you went for
I been starvin so I'm carvin out a dude veins,
Then goin at his 'neck' jus to take a stab at the fuckin 'food chain',
ok
I got them choppers that'll blast and end lives wit precision,
So i'm poppin em off and leavin his crew wit more 'flatlines' than my new television.
nah

V/Allen...i enjoyed him a bit more

[God Of War]

well, floss you was wierd man, like its like you had the right idea, but you just didnt put it out right...like you new what you wanted to do but it didnt come out that way, the start of each bar i thought uw as bout to hit hard but it failed to deliver

knight u like boys but ur verse was consistent and thats all you really needed to win

v/knight

[KwaL!ty]

I been starvin so I'm carvin out a dude veins,
Then goin at his 'neck' jus to take a stab at the fuckin 'food chain',




vs



gotta mean jump hook faggot, my fist im slamin here
& give F-15 airstrikes till his eyes hanging out his head like a jets landing gear
all u do is take dick faggot, u work it till there balls shine
niggas wreck flo's rear end so much he'd have the highest insurance qoute of all time
ur gonna spit sum played shit, it aint gonna get me here
every concept u drops OldBoy & look like they been locked in a room for 20 years



obv-----

[Sharp]

I got them choppers that'll blast and end lives wit precision,
So i'm poppin em off and leavin his crew wit more 'flatlines' than my new television.


shank u while ur on a date w/ wifey, hit ya chest w/ the blade hard
have ur heart spillin all over her hands like she's holding a valentines day card
gotta mean jump hook faggot, my fist im slamin here
& give F-15 airstrikes till his eyes hanging out his head like a jets landing gear
bitches call me king in the sack, rip pussy w/ my heavy grind
shit wen it comes to sex F-bombs so bad his girl curses'em out everytime


floss had an alright verse but stylewise wasn't too effective... also never flip 'mag' or 'nine' into a gunplay line... been done to hell and back. AK got it with harder hits and consistency but floss did pretty well, stay up cause you're pretty good and I want to see more from you

v/allen

[Tettris]

He been in it for so long and still just mediocre,
I'm leavin em stuck on the 'undercard' like I'm foldin lame hands in poker,

vs

all u do is take dick faggot, u work it till there balls shine
niggas wreck flo's rear end so much he'd have the highest insurance qoute of all time
ur gonna spit sum played shit, it aint gonna get me here
every concept u drops OldBoy & look like they been locked in a room for 20 years
bitches call me king in the sack, rip pussy w/ my heavy grind
shit wen it comes to sex F-bombs so bad his girl curses'em out everytime

yea this was another one sided battle...Floss seems to have potential tho...

v/Allen

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

I been starvin so I'm carvin out a dude veins,
Then goin at his 'neck' jus to take a stab at the fuckin 'food chain',
I got them choppers that'll blast and end lives wit precision,
So i'm poppin em off and leavin his crew wit more 'flatlines' than my new television

Food chain line was ok but I like the way it was worded
closer had a nice concept...
U had concepts but need to develop them more...

shank u while ur on a date w/ wifey, hit ya chest w/ the blade hard
have ur heart spillin all over her hands like she's holding a valentines day card
gotta mean jump hook faggot, my fist im slamin here
& give F-15 airstrikes till his eyes hanging out his head like a jets landing gear
all u do is take dick faggot, u work it till there balls shine
niggas wreck flo's rear end so much he'd have the highest insurance qoute of all time

good verse...
v day card line was lotb...

AK was more consistent here...

vote- AK...

Bye...

[Plot]

Allen brought the Valentines and F-Bolmb lines,
Floss had the G-shock that almost worked.

Allen obv. did enough to win,
I think Flow isn't far from having good bars.

[Allen Knight]

8-0 allen wins