Greed 3-5 vs Unfukwitable 4-4 - UN WINS

[Allen Knight]

NBL Season 7
Week 12

Due FRIDAY,friday Feb 21th

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

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NO swaying
NO feeding
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
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May God have mercy on your souls

@Greed @Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

[checkmate/]

[Greed]

Yeah

[Unfukwitable]

24hr ext.

[Allen Knight]

Greed sent 10

[Unfukwitable]

aka Pryde

Originally Posted by Greed

@KwaL!ty Remind yourself not to vote on my battles.

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You bitched about Kwal's vote, take the advice & get better clown,
you're as sensitive as that G spot on your girl that you never found.
Act animal like, I'll skin you and make tons of clothes;
Idc if you support PetaGreed, Throw paint on me you'll get KO'd from one of those.
You're a Gold diggers dream, You'd give your last amount of cash or paper,
so hoes take Pryde income often enough to mirror proud masterbator.
He fought a Barbie looking bitch & got his fucking nose dented
you let that Barb wire your jaw, & she had you looking like you jumped over those fences.
Plus, your girl ruined ya Jeep for being on Netcees cheating all week,
her Keys could champ NBL the way they left your Kar with long streaks.
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[Allen Knight]

Greed verse

You ain't about money bro you less then a bitch, I gets with the shits
last time you heard anything about 'your charisma'..
.. the hijackers words were cut off as he left in your whip
I'm uninterested in your work, I'm here to personally derail you
Even if I truly thought you were dope.... I'd just cut you to pieces and sell you
Respect the hustle, og here flexin muscle boy i know you dont spend cash
last time that this dudes knuckles flew.... sonic ended up catching him with a spin dash
Im in the mall bro you window shop from the dang rafters
Anytime you even in the maul.... police ask you to describe faces after
Im out here for the bread dog while you act like certain...other members who should get lost
I dont give a fuck about fuckwitable.... the fact fuck wit-esque i'm still cutting his fucking head off

[KwaL!ty]

Unfuk

Bar 1: I liked this .. Thought you where going to use a play on how he doesn't like quality votes ..
Bar 2: this I feel like you could have executed the wordplay for more impact but still nice concept
Bar 3: ehh not a fan of this nothing hard hitting and just a bland concept
Bar 4: dope bar liked the play and the personal this def a dope bar here
Bar 5: I'm guessing he got his car keyed by a female if so another nice personal if not wtf


Vs

Bar 1: was extra stretched and didn't make any sense to me ..
Bar 2: was this really a dope drug flip? I'm hoping I missed something
Bar 3: lol this made me laugh ... Due to confusion and not knowing where it was ever headed..
Bar 4: wtf huh?
Bar 5: I feel like you have up or tried to hard I dunno what else to say


Vote unfuk pretty easily

[tyler]

Pryde had barb wire
Greed had nothing

I see greed being able to make progress, just needs to get a better grasp on structuring a verse better and being more creative along with being able to create impact. As for unfu I've seen him come better than this bit he had enough with the 1 I quoted.

Vote - fuck

[Tettris]

He fought a Barbie looking bitch & got his fucking nose dented
you let that Barb wire your jaw, & she had you looking like you jumped over those fences.
Plus, your girl ruined ya Jeep for being on Netcees cheating all week,
her Keys could champ NBL the way they left your Kar with long streaks.

vs

Respect the hustle, og here flexin muscle boy i know you dont spend cash
last time that this dudes knuckles flew.... sonic ended up catching him with a spin dash

really didnt like any of Greed's verse...Un came with some decent hits for sure

v/Un

[Tic]

You bitched about Kwal's vote, take the advice & get better clown,
you're as sensitive as that G spot on your girl that you never found.
He fought a Barbie looking bitch & got his fucking nose dented
you let that Barb wire your jaw, & she had you looking like you jumped over those fences.
Plus, your girl ruined ya Jeep for being on Netcees cheating all week,
her Keys could champ NBL the way they left your Kar with long streaks.

vs.

I'm uninterested in your work, I'm here to personally derail you
Even if I truly thought you were dope.... I'd just cut you to pieces and sell you
Respect the hustle, og here flexin muscle boy i know you dont spend cash
last time that this dudes knuckles flew.... sonic ended up catching him with a spin dash

Fuk was more consistent. I didn't think Greed's verse was too bad, I liked a couple lines. I think Unfuk came a bit more personal and had some harder hits though.

V/ Unfuk

[Allen Knight]

4-0 un. Wins