09-04-2014, 04:11 PM | #1 |
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Contendership Match: Jilti vs. Camp Bell [Jilti Wins]
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09-08-2014, 02:08 AM | #2 |
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im a proven beast in 2 different leagues, gettin offers to join crews constantly
while your still in Training,Camp.. and it took a Gamble just to put u on a team Last edited by jilti; 09-08-2014 at 02:32 AM. |
09-08-2014, 07:26 PM | #3 |
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my plays wildly commended, this an easy defeat
his scripts hot? the shit stops after wat i kick drop until jay out of contention like the yeezy release
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09-08-2014, 08:03 PM | #4 |
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hmm interesting.
I rly like camps approach but jiltis was creative as fuk. nice line v jil good shit tho camp
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09-08-2014, 11:27 PM | #5 |
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jilti: Best line of the week. It was personal, clever and well-worded, and it didn't feel forced.
Camp Bell: OK, I follow the careers of Kanye West and Jay Z quite closely. I don't get it. Maybe you can explain it to me, but at that point, you've already failed. Vote: jilti
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09-09-2014, 03:21 AM | #6 |
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Jilt was solid with the flow n personal.
Camps didn't hit like last week with the three line approach Third line kinda fell off imo. Good shit from both tho. V jill |
09-09-2014, 03:33 AM | #7 |
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I've actually got Camp on this one. I liked the setup the cliffhanger and the execution. Idk if the Training Camp np has been used yet but at this point I'm kind of getting tired of the camp variations concentration/summer/band/training. I know it was a personal but the np that connected it just didn't wow me. The delivery was really choppy too.
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09-09-2014, 07:24 AM | #8 |
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J good wording....only.part I thought was rough was if he is still in training camp...he wouldnt be on a team yet...nahimean...but the gamble shit fit wit that..so cool
Camp....felt maybe the filler line coulda been shortened other then that pretty dope name punch... Close...but J has two seperate nameplays in one punch...thats what edged him for.me Vote..J |
09-09-2014, 09:05 AM | #9 | |
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Just wanna explain.. if someones in training camp, they are on a team. example; Broncos training camp, Eagles training camp, etc. Last edited by jilti; 09-09-2014 at 09:07 AM. |
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09-09-2014, 11:42 PM | #10 |
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Didn't really likes the three line punch, it can be effective but I didn't like this one tbh
Jails punch was dope and well executed Vote jil |
09-10-2014, 09:06 AM | #11 |
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I liked Camp's line, just hated that it took three lines to get out. Sure, three line punches can work, just not in a 1-2 punch league where the premise is that YOU ONLY GET TWO FUCKING LINES, IDIOT.
Regardless, I liked Jilti's more.
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09-11-2014, 06:58 PM | #15 |
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09-11-2014, 07:02 PM | #16 |
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09-11-2014, 07:07 PM | #17 |
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And Jordans were out of contention?
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09-11-2014, 07:14 PM | #18 |
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Kick drop.
And after the Yeezys came out, yes...until the next Jordans launch. Stop asking me questions. Jilti won anyway.
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09-12-2014, 10:05 PM | #19 |
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Camp was a bit too wordy n indirect to me while jil has the good personal/word play.
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09-13-2014, 11:17 AM | #20 |
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I got camp
jiltis was just too easy of a play v/cb |
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