04-01-2013, 03:25 PM | #1 |
Mic Check
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Still Legit
Been a little while so its probly gonna take a bit
Livin in denial, but I’m always on some crazy shit All day with the greatest hits, droppin classic oldies The microphone can stay legit when CopyPat is holding Automatic flowing like I pumped through ya heart Ya ventricles exploding when I kung-fu these bars Straight karate kickin rhymes make ya body glisten People gettin wet expect to take it while they listen Bomb the mic suddenly, quantified pummeling Premeditated punishment for all the guys wondering Volatile summaries that blast from the page All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate It’s just a matter of taste, so let me platter this plate Before I splatter your face and spit some hazardous waste I got the canister aimed and the target acquired So rappers get slain when they started a cypher |
04-03-2013, 02:13 AM | #2 |
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cool Lil drop. welcome to the board man. Glad u finally made it..
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04-03-2013, 09:35 AM | #3 |
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I love the aggressive last half. Your quantified pummeling, volatile summaries couplet deserves 2X! as its annotation.
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04-05-2013, 09:23 PM | #4 |
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Dope.
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04-06-2013, 12:14 PM | #5 |
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i can imagine you in a park or a schoolyard spittin these in the middle of a cypher crowd and everybody just be vibing with it, and after your 16 comes the next dude.
i dont think this was some shit that would shut the cypher down but it was crisp and fresh flow coupled with some dope traditional hip hop rhyme-ology. straight bars. Volatile summaries that blast from the page All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate word thanks man 1
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04-07-2013, 10:29 PM | #6 |
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Pat the gawd.
Nice to see u droppin still. I shouod follow suit....soon Shit was vintage pat....crisp multies from start to finish an u never really get overly elaborate u just rock ur schemes an keep it lowkey, last 8 lines eere nasty def started to heat up. |
04-08-2013, 12:06 AM | #7 |
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this was some smooth shit man..cool drop for so little content. word up
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04-11-2013, 07:38 PM | #8 |
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ok, this was nice my friend, real smooth chill laid back vibe. do you freestyle your shit becaus eI agree with dead man, kinda had a cypher-esque feel to it. definitely have a nice grasp on your scheme and the way you thread words together. I always enjoy when I'm reading something and my head starts to bob-thanks for that. and thanks for reading my piece, i'll look for more of your stuff
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