Tic Tac 1-0 vs Wanderer 1-1 - TIC WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, May 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first


For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
Tic Tac Wanderer

[Tic]

Thanks for this Sharp

Check. How many? 12?

[Wanderer]

Check, cool

[Tic]

You’ll leave the league soon cuz you’re far from king
I’d label wannabe keeper but his punches neither harm nor sting
Ya style is reaaaaal hard to cop, you'll stomp the yard bro? Stop
Keep steppin & all you’ll see is 2 hands to the face….Movado watch
Feed on ya last verse? ‘Played w/ no impact, clever or fresh’
Idk what anyone sees in wan when ya punches date back to that era of text
Idgaf I’ll singe ya lips, like yea kid extinguish this
‘N finally when that long nose Extenze, you’ll leak all over…Strikta’s bitch
Ya old girl doesn’t play games, she left you rookie
It’s sad…the closer you are to Xbox the further you get from pussy
Prob a Harry Potter fan, that Spells faggot & I meant to expose ‘em
It’s simple. One punch’ll put wand in the air like expecto patronum
Wanderer

[Wanderer]

How can I take you serious? Ain't nobody in the NBL you can test
Only way I wanna see you Sign-In is if my blows to your head leave ya Deaf
You're a nobody, sleepin on medals and honours. Wanderer famous for the way he grabbing em
Shit son, with the headlines I'm making.. the ones on ya pillow look lame in comparison
Talentless bum. You ain't fresh or clean with text/hygiene.. I generally abuse your types
How is it fair that I Leak Hot Shit - yet you just SMELL like broken sewage pipes
An don't talk shit about game with chicks. Honestly, everybody knows you're a fake
In fact.. Only time I ever see T.bone is when I'm ordering steak
See.. Latino girls don't take they clothes off around him OR his impotent clique
Realised he can only shave his pubic hair to make a Brazilian strip
You can't intrigue an audience like me, you're such a lazy cunt I wanna stab you
When people assume you In-te-resting.. it's cos you don't produce anything of any value
.

[Xquisite]

That Movado line was fire... Tac got em with that bar alone.

[Destroyer]

tic had movado and his closer both were dope
the other guy...
grabbing em and comparison don't rhyme
the other shit you had was either played as fuck or just all around horrible

v/Tic

[Sharp]

You’ll leave the league soon cuz you’re far from king
I’d label wannabe keeper but his punches neither harm nor sting
Alright but doesn't really work both ways well
Ya style is reaaaaal hard to cop, you'll stomp the yard bro? Stop
Keep steppin & all you’ll see is 2 hands to the face….Movado watch
Dope
Feed on ya last verse? ‘Played w/ no impact, clever or fresh’
Idk what anyone sees in wan when ya punches date back to that era of text
season 1/sees in wan is a bit of a stretch for me
Idgaf I’ll singe ya lips, like yea kid extinguish this
‘N finally when that long nose Extenze, you’ll leak all over…Strikta’s bitch
ok
Ya old girl doesn’t play games, she left you rookie
It’s sad…the closer you are to Xbox the further you get from pussy
think I've seen something like this before
Prob a Harry Potter fan, that Spells faggot & I meant to expose ‘em
It’s simple. One punch’ll put wand in the air like expecto patronum
nice



How can I take you serious? Ain't nobody in the NBL you can test
Only way I wanna see you Sign-In is if my blows to your head leave ya Deaf
little stretched
You're a nobody, sleepin on medals and honours. Wanderer famous for the way he grabbing em
Shit son, with the headlines I'm making.. the ones on ya pillow look lame in comparison
OK but works better as some kind of flex bar
Talentless bum. You ain't fresh or clean with text/hygiene.. I generally abuse your types
How is it fair that I Leak Hot Shit - yet you just SMELL like broken sewage pipes
nah. Setup was way too wordy too
An don't talk shit about game with chicks. Honestly, everybody knows you're a fake
In fact.. Only time I ever see T.bone is when I'm ordering steak
been done
See.. Latino girls don't take they clothes off around him OR his impotent clique
Realised he can only shave his pubic hair to make a Brazilian strip
done before
You can't intrigue an audience like me, you're such a lazy cunt I wanna stab you
When people assume you In-te-resting.. it's cos you don't produce anything of any value
if you have to spell it out it usually is a bit of a stretch at least


Tic got it. Movado was fire and wanderers bars were usually played to pieces

V/tic

[Cred]

Movado watch, striktas bitch

vs

Tbone was aightt.

Not the greatest battle but cool. Tic had tge movado joint which.was lotb n another decent hit thst gave him enough to take the w here.

V tic tac

[Junto]

Ya style is reaaaaal hard to cop, you'll stomp the yard bro? Stop
Keep steppin & all you’ll see is 2 hands to the face….Movado watch
Prob a Harry Potter fan, that Spells faggot & I meant to expose ‘em
It’s simple. One punch’ll put wand in the air like expecto patronum

vs.

How can I take you serious? Ain't nobody in the NBL you can test
Only way I wanna see you Sign-In is if my blows to your head leave ya Deaf

Galactic had a good verse here. Movado LOTB, I liked that a lot.
Wand in the air was pretty nice... Season wan would be a good wan depending on accent.
Opener was off, but otherwise pretty consistent...
Wand's opener wasn't bad at all. He followed it up wit two I didn't like though.
T.bone was a cool jab, not real complex or tough. Then after that nahs.

Galactic decisively.

V/ Tic Tac

[Sn00p]

You’ll leave the league soon cuz you’re far from king
I’d label wannabe keeper but his punches neither harm nor sting
^aite, dece
Ya style is reaaaaal hard to cop, you'll stomp the yard bro? Stop
Keep steppin & all you’ll see is 2 hands to the face….Movado watch
^coo
Feed on ya last verse? ‘Played w/ no impact, clever or fresh’
Idk what anyone sees in wan when ya punches date back to that era of text
^liked it. didn't rly feel stretched to me
Idgaf I’ll singe ya lips, like yea kid extinguish this
‘N finally when that long nose Extenze, you’ll leak all over…Strikta’s bitch
^dece current event
Ya old girl doesn’t play games, she left you rookie
It’s sad…the closer you are to Xbox the further you get from pussy
^eh, seen this wp too many times
Prob a Harry Potter fan, that Spells faggot & I meant to expose ‘em
It’s simple. One punch’ll put wand in the air like expecto patronum
^aite

vs.

How can I take you serious? Ain't nobody in the NBL you can test
Only way I wanna see you Sign-In is if my blows to your head leave ya Deaf
^aaaite. flip could'a been harsher, but the concept was def there
You're a nobody, sleepin on medals and honours. Wanderer famous for the way he grabbing em
Shit son, with the headlines I'm making.. the ones on ya pillow look lame in comparison
^make ur setups shorter. concept was dece, but not too hard-hitting/impacting
Talentless bum. You ain't fresh or clean with text/hygiene.. I generally abuse your types
How is it fair that I Leak Hot Shit - yet you just SMELL like broken sewage pipes
^again, shorten ur setups. the 'talentless bum' part was unnecessary. shit wp is pretty old. u'd have to try rly hard to flip it in a way it becomes a hit
An don't talk shit about game with chicks. Honestly, everybody knows you're a fake
In fact.. Only time I ever see T.bone is when I'm ordering steak
^aite, not a bad line. but one letter nameplays are kinda lazy. u shud only use 'em as a last resort
See.. Latino girls don't take they clothes off around him OR his impotent clique
Realised he can only shave his pubic hair to make a Brazilian strip
^played, but this wasn't a bad idea
You can't intrigue an audience like me, you're such a lazy cunt I wanna stab you
When people assume you In-te-resting.. it's cos you don't produce anything of any value
^kiiinda forced. but the concept is decent. just the 'dont produce anything of value' part lacked sting & made the line fall flat

tic tac was overall better. wanderer has some nice ideas, but since he's new, he prolly just doesn't what's played and how to execute his concepts for maximum potential. once he gets that down, he cud be prtty good.
v/tic

[Allen Knight]

Ya style is reaaaaal hard to cop, you'll stomp the yard bro? Stop
Keep steppin & all you’ll see is 2 hands to the face….Movado watch
Prob a Harry Potter fan, that Spells faggot & I meant to expose ‘em
It’s simple. One punch’ll put wand in the air like expecto patronum

Vs

See.. Latino girls don't take they clothes off around him OR his impotent clique
Realised he can only shave his pubic hair to make a Brazilian strip


V/Tic, this was a cool battle imo, wander has his own style which is good to have now a days but only
thing he needs to work on concepts tbh i thought brazilian bar was good never
seen that concept,...
Tic had a real consistent verse one of those ones that is real hard to beat, props to both but tic took this.