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Split Eight
07-15-2015, 03:59 AM
Week 1: Character Sketches
[note that your verse does not necessarily have to be character sketch, that's just the catchy name I appended to this week's topics]

Witty vs. Dancake
Innovator vs. Objective
Ullr vs. Timeless
Genocide vs. Rawn MD
Pinot Grij vs. Zen
quaker oats vs. dead man
Dominate vs. Hush
Tyson vs. Ribbit
UnbornBuddha vs. Razah
Artificial vs. Mr. J
Soulstics vs. Dr Dog

Just a reminder that verses are due this Sunday before 11:59 pm PST

and votes are due by next Wednesday 11:00 pm PST

Mr. J
07-15-2015, 04:00 AM
why I gotta write 2 verses though :/

Split Eight
07-15-2015, 04:02 AM
why I gotta write 2 verses though :/

good catch!

anyone else, please hit me with a sanity check when necessary

Mag posted on either Thursday or Friday

Mr. J
07-15-2015, 04:05 AM
ooooooooooohhh Artificial you lucky he changed the topic...


I already had half a verse for you, but now I'm tired...so :{o

sral
07-15-2015, 05:02 AM
lemme know if someone doesnt check in

i can prob write on short-notice

failing that hit up my boy MMLP

oats
07-15-2015, 07:05 AM
Witty vs. Dancake - BOTW potential
Innovator vs. Objective - coin flip
Ullr vs. Timeless - don't know Ullr
Genocide vs. Rawn MD - Rawn gets abducted by aliens, no shows
Pinot Grij vs. Zen - BOTW potential.
Dominate vs. Hush - should be dope, both underrated af
Tyson vs. Ribbit - don't know ribbit
UnbornBuddha vs. Razah - don't know Razah
Artificial vs. Mr. J - will be good battle
Soulstics vs. Dr Dog - Split is dope, but will suffer Certain's season fate when he modded and participated at half-mast

good to be back in this, stoked to see these battles

TYSON
07-15-2015, 07:06 AM
Finally

Split Eight
07-15-2015, 07:22 AM
lemme know if someone doesnt check in

i can prob write on short-notice

failing that hit up my boy MMLP

You want a match vs soulstice?

ribbit
07-15-2015, 07:44 AM
Good to be back

Razah
07-15-2015, 09:39 AM
I just battled UnbornBuddha a couple days ago, poetry style.

This should be fun though.

Clutbuck
07-15-2015, 12:40 PM
nah busy week ahead

maybe next week

Woke
07-15-2015, 07:26 PM
Sign in for week two.

Rawn MD
07-16-2015, 11:19 AM
Lol quaker oats the aliens fear me, they've.heard of the perils I've endured and my success in the face of certain disaster roughing through several misadventures

Genocide where u at Anon?

Witty
07-16-2015, 01:17 PM
Dancake please show, we need to finally have a battle where we both post lmao
Certain (fuck u been?) Diode name change to The Witness please.

I'm back and ready to dominate.

Clutbuck
07-16-2015, 01:51 PM
KILL THEM ALL WITTY, YOU THE MAN

Mr. J
07-16-2015, 08:40 PM
I had that Gullible Travels verse going good for me Split...damn you!

either way let's get it poppin' Artificial

Split Eight
07-18-2015, 11:28 AM
Mag tonight

Witty
07-18-2015, 11:59 AM
Yeah dancake won't show :(

Pinot Grij
07-18-2015, 02:58 PM
Yeah dancake won't show :(
not a chance

Mr. J
07-19-2015, 03:27 AM
should have just left me with 2 battles I would have torn those verses up

oats
07-19-2015, 07:47 AM
should have just left me with 2 battles I would have torn those verses up

Frank

TYSON
07-19-2015, 09:32 AM
Mag?

TYSON
07-19-2015, 09:36 AM
Witty vs. Dancake
Innovator vs. Objective
Ullr vs. Timeless
Genocide vs. Rawn MD
Pinot Grij vs. Zen
quaker oats vs. dead man
Dominate vs. Hush
Tyson vs. Ribbit
UnbornBuddha vs. Razah ???
Artificial vs. Mr. J
Soulstics vs. Dr Dog

I dont know all the new people

Mr. J
07-19-2015, 12:06 PM
Frank

I would enjoy seeing Frank back with his 200 line frenzy..

I dont think I could match up with him though...sheesh

ribbit
07-19-2015, 01:29 PM
Lol I dont think anyone could tether like frank doe. Not the first time he's been called up from the past.

Mr. J
07-19-2015, 04:27 PM
Give Artificial that ext yo...

Split Eight
07-19-2015, 08:34 PM
Extensions will be offered this first week for those that need it, considering it's a new season & no one is quite on schedule yet

Witty
07-19-2015, 08:47 PM
Dr Dog i'll probably need that. if Dancake agrees WHICH HE WILL CUZ HE NEEDS IT TOO LMAO

I sent that stuff for the mag btw

PancakeBrah
07-19-2015, 09:51 PM
Witty I'm going to try to drop tonight. You can have the extension, it was kind of fucked up that I checked in so late. Especially considering my reputation for no showing lately.

Razah
07-20-2015, 01:03 AM
Extensions will be offered this first week for those that need it, considering it's a new season & no one is quite on schedule yet

So, besides that, there's no extensions??


G'luck with that homie.

Split Eight
07-20-2015, 02:11 AM
So, besides that, there's no extensions??


G'luck with that homie.

It's worked well in the past

Witty, any word on those predictions?

TYSON
07-20-2015, 06:06 AM
I'll need that extension

Witty
07-20-2015, 09:48 AM
It's worked well in the past

Witty, any word on those predictions?

I PM'd them to you last night :/

ribbit
07-20-2015, 09:49 AM
Ugh I've already posted...hows it fair fight if u get ext.?

Witty
07-20-2015, 09:49 AM
oh shit wtf, I wrote that shit up and had it in the PM and I'm SURE i hit send, but shit isn't there...FUCK i'll do them again now.

wtf i think i'm going insane :/

Mr. J
07-20-2015, 10:42 AM
So, besides that, there's no extensions??


G'luck with that homie.

it just prolongs the season more than it needs to

Ugh I've already posted...hows it fair fight if u get ext.?

Its not like other battles. it depends on skill and how well you can correlate with the pic
you can edit til your opponent drops or erase it all and write something new..

Razah
07-20-2015, 11:17 AM
Ugh I've already posted...hows it fair fight if u get ext.?

Not everybody takes every day of the whole week thinking / writing for the verse.

Me, for example, haven't read Budda's verse, and I also haven't written for it. I'm just waiting for an idea to hit me and I'll sit down & write it.

You act like an extra 24 hours, gives the person an extra 24 hours.

Eh, I think that's pretty much why people get extensions, cuz shit in life happens- But then, maybe you are right. There has to be some people out there that want more time to write more lines / make a better verse.

idk, but who cares- it's an online text topical battle.

Witty
07-20-2015, 11:21 AM
And also, you are free to make whatever changes you want to your piece until your opponent posts ribbit

Objective
07-20-2015, 12:13 PM
So, besides that, there's no extensions??


G'luck with that homie.

Why would you need extensions? You got like 4-5 days to write. Should be more than enough. If you suddenly need an extra day to write some shit it's more about your inability to come up with ideas than anything else, and if life happens then maybe you should have started to write earlier in case of shit like that? I didn't think I'd be able to post either due to things coming up so I sent Innovator a PM that I might no-show a couple days ago and told him I'd give him a heads up when/if I started to write to be fair with him. Sure, that extra extension helped me A LOT but ultimately it was my fault for not starting to write earlier and having shit set that caused it, not the league or anyone else. Plus half the battles end up being extended when it's allowed so I get why they won't allow it for a smoother run of the league.

Mr. J
07-20-2015, 01:26 PM
The key is to agree on a line limit when it comes to topicals
anyone can write 40 lines and easily beat someone writing 20 because they have a fleshed out story
if you know your opponent is known for writing long verses you should be already prepared
Normally if a line limit isn't agreed upon just hope you have the better verse.
its not that hard. I only take extensions because I'm still processing my plot usually.
if I don't have enough time my lines are usually stretched out or don't go with the picture ....yet.
I made it the finals of the Martyr league keying
mostly my only acceptable longer verses were in battles with Pent & Unborn.
I know both like to write long so I adapted to what they would do.
its simple..

Inno
07-20-2015, 02:38 PM
Objective Dr Dog

So sorry for not postimg on time. I can have somethimg up later today.

If not sorry i will vote

Diablo
07-20-2015, 04:09 PM
TBH our Martyrs finals verses were up within 18 hours of thread being posted.

I write super quick.

2-3 days is wayyyy enough, a week and I end up writing a second verse while I'm waiting for opponents to post.

I go hard.

I know not everyone does this ish as quick as I can though, I'm old as fuck and have done this entirely too long.

I should retire while I'm on a high. :\

Witty
07-20-2015, 04:38 PM
I never spend more than two hours on a piece.

Usually an hour or so.

Razah
07-20-2015, 04:56 PM
I never spend more than two hours on a piece.

Usually an hour or so.

hey that makes two of us

Mr. J
07-20-2015, 05:29 PM
TBH our Martyrs finals verses were up within 18 hours of thread being posted.

I write super quick.

2-3 days is wayyyy enough, a week and I end up writing a second verse while I'm waiting for opponents to post.

I go hard.

I know not everyone does this ish as quick as I can though, I'm old as fuck and have done this entirely too long.

I should retire while I'm on a high. :\

I was wondering who you were >_<

Congrats though. you threw me off my game having a verse ready to go
Normally I have three concepts ready to go by the 2nd day and toy with each one
I had another verse besides what you saw it was art through a newborns eyes but when you get to the end it was an art student asleep in class..eh..I'm just enjoying being a finalist

Diablo
07-20-2015, 05:49 PM
lmao sorry about that J

your tenor/choir ish was nice tho

I PM'd u a verse btw

Razah
07-20-2015, 06:07 PM
The key is to agree on a line limit when it comes to topicals


Yup.

Razah
07-20-2015, 06:08 PM
I write super quick.

2-3 days is wayyyy enough, a week and I end up writing a second verse while I'm waiting for opponents to post.

I go hard.

I know not everyone does this ish as quick as I can though, I'm old as fuck and have done this entirely too long.



An hour or two is all I really need. But, the thing is, finding that hour or two where I can just sit down and actually write.

Mr. J
07-20-2015, 06:17 PM
lmao sorry about that J

your tenor/choir ish was nice tho

I PM'd u a verse btw

No need for apologies it was a learning experience at the end
I got too ambitious towards the end and ended on a sub par note
Normally I want my opening line to get the attention and build off of that
ending it is always tough on me though...


but I'll work on something tonight I'm just lingering now

Mr. J
07-20-2015, 06:22 PM
An hour or two is all I really need. But, the thing is, finding that hour or two where I can just sit down and actually write.

Same I usually write at night thats my free time usually

I only have 2 hours during the day but I rather relax then think
so I normally toy with ideas and drop them in the cypher

Witty
07-20-2015, 06:33 PM
nowehere near my best this week, really didn't have the time but threw something up quickly rather than no show. i'll come prepared next week.

Split Eight
07-20-2015, 07:30 PM
oh shit wtf, I wrote that shit up and had it in the PM and I'm SURE i hit send, but shit isn't there...FUCK i'll do them again now.

wtf i think i'm going insane :/

Word

Keep me posted, I've got the rest more or less

Split Eight
07-20-2015, 11:39 PM
alright I'm just going to do them in the interest of time

ribbit
07-21-2015, 06:36 AM
Is battles closed now?

Split Eight
07-21-2015, 01:23 PM
Is battles closed now?
double no-shows were closed. Single no-shows are open for feed, but it is too late to post verses. Regular voting is still open

Split Eight
07-21-2015, 01:42 PM
I'll be voting on all battles and posting feedback for all no-show verses tonight. Will finish up writer bios in the magazine, this week has been a bit hectic.


UnbornBuddha, sraL, Razah, Ullr- are any of you willing to participate in a Q&A for the next magazine?
Witty if you wrote predictions and have them, please send them to me.

Votes are due Wednesday at 11:59 EST, matchups for next week and next week's magazine will be posted shortly thereafter.

2tripple0
07-21-2015, 01:50 PM
I'll be voting either tonight or tomorrow morning

UnbornBuddha
07-21-2015, 02:27 PM
I"ll answer questions, but it will be nice to see the martyr champion blessing us with his answers, but if not I'll do it.

TYSON
07-21-2015, 02:44 PM
Damn so over half the people couldn't drop a half ass half done verse???? For shame. I can say something this week about it.

Razah
07-21-2015, 03:30 PM
I'll be voting on all battles and posting feedback for all no-show verses tonight. Will finish up writer bios in the magazine, this week has been a bit hectic.


UnbornBuddha, sraL, Razah, Ullr- are any of you willing to participate in a Q&A for the next magazine?
Witty if you wrote predictions and have them, please send them to me.

Votes are due Wednesday at 11:59 EST, matchups for next week and next week's magazine will be posted shortly thereafter.

Sure.

sral
07-21-2015, 03:32 PM
I'll be voting on all battles and posting feedback for all no-show verses tonight. Will finish up writer bios in the magazine, this week has been a bit hectic.


UnbornBuddha, sraL, Razah, Ullr- are any of you willing to participate in a Q&A for the next magazine?
Witty if you wrote predictions and have them, please send them to me.

Votes are due Wednesday at 11:59 EST, matchups for next week and next week's magazine will be posted shortly thereafter.


sure thing, PM me bruh

Razah
07-21-2015, 03:40 PM
damn. So I voted on 2 battles, and that's it!?

Sucks.

Split Eight
07-21-2015, 03:51 PM
damn. So I voted on 2 battles, and that's it!?

Sucks.

Yeah. Anyone that wants to stay signed in must vote, and people who no-showed have to vote on all three to stay in. Next week, sign-ins will need to vote on 2 battles to get a match. I'm sure that a more comprehensive and timely magazine will help show-rates, too

Slow starts ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Inno
07-21-2015, 05:15 PM
But we always start slow. Dont fret fellas.

oats
07-21-2015, 08:18 PM
apologies, everyone - just way too busy to write for this. had a dope concept, too, but what can ya do. if anyone asks, it was Split's fault for not having a mag up ;)

I'll try to be around to lend some votes throughout the season. Dr Dog tag me if you ever need a vote to close a battle or something.

good luck on the season, everyone!

Diablo
07-22-2015, 05:46 AM
No need for apologies it was a learning experience at the end
I got too ambitious towards the end and ended on a sub par note
Normally I want my opening line to get the attention and build off of that
ending it is always tough on me though...


but I'll work on something tonight I'm just lingering now

lmao nah i meant sorry about dissing you in the cyph thread

you cool ppl in my book

me and MMLP love speed-writers as its a skill few have

got madd love for you & copypat tbc

2tripple0
07-22-2015, 11:41 AM
Will be voting soon as

Mr. J
07-22-2015, 02:14 PM
lmao nah i meant sorry about dissing you in the cyph thread

you cool ppl in my book

me and MMLP love speed-writers as its a skill few have

got madd love for you & copypat tbc

Oh hahaha..

it's all good, I didn't mind at all cyphers are all fun & games
but you a cool dude in my book to, I've seen you drop numerous verses
and I'm like shit I wish I thought of that

I'm quick but you have a more refined touch than I do which is admirable
which is why it was a learning experience for me, I thought I could take some time off and drop a verse after molding an idea but then you were like I'm done and I was like whaaaat
but I have half a verse ready for that collab I'll send it after I look it over & see if you like it, I've been slacking trying to pen this verse for the NBL doing a reply for Witty and working on a verse I didn't want to throw away while working around my schedule but word...mad respect yo

TYSON
07-22-2015, 08:13 PM
1-point guard
2-shooting guard
3-small forward
4-power forward
5-center

King Soul
07-23-2015, 12:22 AM
What's up.

UnbornBuddha
07-23-2015, 12:26 AM
2tripple0

Hey, I'm going to be frank, okay, but I don't mean any ill-intent.
When you vote can you elucidate your own thoughts more? Because I've read feedback from you before in projectrhyme for me and others, and a lot of times it seems as if you parrot others voters opinions, more so than your own. Which gives the impression that you did not read fully read the pieces and are only voting for voting sake. I would even venture to say that I don't consider your two sentence votes feedback at all. Short votes are fine, as long as they actually convey a valid criticism. Quality over quantity, unfortunately, your votes don't contain either one. Again, I don't mean any ill-intent, but it's inconsiderate how others present you with their thoughts that you could consider, and you one the other hand, present us with a questionable impetus for helping others improve. Every opinion matters, but for the stance to be taken seriously it must have a valid hypothesis, if not its just conjecture. Please consider this.

2tripple0
07-23-2015, 01:07 AM
Lol sorry. I'll try to put more emphasis on my votes..Apologies to the league...just didn't want to not share my opinion in feedback sense

Witty
07-23-2015, 03:21 AM
Dr Dog my bad dude, I honestly did have that shit typed up, on my life, I went in depth on every writer too, I have no fucking idea how I managed to lose it, then the last couple of days have been crazy what with my birthday and shit, my apologies.

also dead man quaker oats you guys suck, that could have been the best topical battle this site has ever seen :( i'm not mad....i'm just disappointed :(

Split Eight
07-23-2015, 11:47 AM
Dr Dog my bad dude, I honestly did have that shit typed up, on my life, I went in depth on every writer too, I have no fucking idea how I managed to lose it, then the last couple of days have been crazy what with my birthday and shit, my apologies.

also dead man quaker oats you guys suck, that could have been the best topical battle this site has ever seen :( i'm not mad....i'm just disappointed :(

No worries, it's all good. Hope you enjoyed your birthday friend

Everyone- I'm getting coffee from the shop down the street, voting on the last battle to tiebreak, then posting matchups when I get back.

Magazine will be posted this evening. Let's get the ball rolling boyos

Witty
07-23-2015, 12:00 PM
No worries, it's all good. Hope you enjoyed your birthday friend

Everyone- I'm getting coffee from the shop down the street, voting on the last battle to tiebreak, then posting matchups when I get back.

Magazine will be posted this evening. Let's get the ball rolling boyos

I broke the tie.

And thanks bro, I did, a lot, I am not enjoying how I feel right now tho lol

Diablo
07-23-2015, 02:20 PM
Dr Dog my bad dude, I honestly did have that shit typed up, on my life, I went in depth on every writer too, I have no fucking idea how I managed to lose it, then the last couple of days have been crazy what with my birthday and shit, my apologies.

also dead man quaker oats you guys suck, that could have been the best topical battle this site has ever seen :( i'm not mad....i'm just disappointed :(

not without me in it wouldn't

but word I was amped to read that shit

fuck you @oats

Diablo
07-23-2015, 02:21 PM
No worries, it's all good. Hope you enjoyed your birthday friend

Everyone- I'm getting coffee from the shop down the street, voting on the last battle to tiebreak, then posting matchups when I get back.

Magazine will be posted this evening. Let's get the ball rolling boyos

I wrote for that SOULSTICE / split topic

think I posted the verse to ur profile

do I get a win?

King Soul
07-23-2015, 05:05 PM
Witness King Darryl.

Witty
07-23-2015, 05:30 PM
'tis I.

And I know who you are.

King Soul
07-23-2015, 05:33 PM
Anybody could know who I am lol. Not doing a very good job hiding with my avatar and name.

Witty
07-23-2015, 06:11 PM
lol sup dagel?

Objective
07-23-2015, 06:49 PM
Dr Dog I got to sign out of week 2. I saw the sign in/out thread is closed but if I'm not signed out you can just give the person you match me up with the W cuz it's 1am thursday night and I'm gone from tomorrow at 1pm and ain't home until monday.

Witty
07-23-2015, 06:58 PM
I'll compete in two battles and win them both.

Inno
07-23-2015, 08:53 PM
Hey fagel

Inno
07-23-2015, 08:54 PM
I'll compete in two battles and win them both.

Tread lightly olive oil

Split Eight
07-23-2015, 10:03 PM
Dr Dog I got to sign out of week 2. I saw the sign in/out thread is closed but if I'm not signed out you can just give the person you match me up with the W cuz it's 1am thursday night and I'm gone from tomorrow at 1pm and ain't home until monday.

No problem.

Posting matchups soon, gotta finish a report for work

Objective
07-23-2015, 11:23 PM
Sweet, thanks. Tomorrow is going to be f'd, 5:22am, no rest for the wicked, hah. Good luck to everyone in week 2.