Alvin Karpis vs Plot - Plot wins

[Ghost1]

Summer Classic VII


Due Wednesday August 3rd
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Alvin Karpis Plot

[Plot]

Karp! want 5?

[Alvin Karpis]

10 it is

[Plot]

ext?

[Alvin Karpis]

You don’t wanna throw blows at all cuz you know I’m strong
I bet you thought catchin a fade was a type of Pokemon
All hope was gone when you saw every clips long
I got a shoulder stock Aero wouldn’t know how to give a tip on
What I keep in my waistband will erase ya whole face fam
Watch me put that 45 to ya back like the 'Space Jams’
Ya legacy is a waste man, I’m a murder ya cuz I’m merciless
Leave ya body in the ditch Rican, for havin a fuckin record worse than his
I remember you sayin you made trips and was slangin grams
But the only time you seen stupid Bricks was on Anchorman

[Plot]

Now the balls in my court, so Imma fucking go ballistic,
Fuck up Al so bad he'll be left dribbling in a chair, next stop special Olympics.
Small disclaimer: dude ain't no hall of famer, getting his head so fucking swole,
Al your just a toy bitch so full of yaself, you'd get mistaken for a Russian doll.
Your slut? fucks all your buddies like a bunny, vag got some stretchin,
& now she's got a rabbit-hole that teleports dicks to other dimensions.
So fear the grumble of the beast, coz shit gets savage deep in the jungle,
& Plot's shaking the biscuit in front of ya face like I'm teasing a mongrel.
Its your funeral faggot! Bags come collect this body I'm thru with him,
Let the whole lime come and see Al boxed up on the table, that's aluminium.

[Ghost1]

BUMP

[Kenny the OG]

Idk if alvin is rusty or just took plot lightly, because thats what this verse was.. light. Super light. Super duper light. Wasnt a bad verse by any means, and it was consistent. But overall it felt alittle bland and uninspired tbh. The closer was cool enough. The first 2 bars of word association were ok but didnt hit hard to me. Wasnt feelin the rican/reekin flip, felt like it coulda been flipped differently to make it feel less dated. Overall 5/10

Im not familiar with plot but i was under the impression hes one of those bougie topical guys. But ultimately writing is writing and his verse was better written imo. More creativity and versatility in his method. Verse felt more fleshed out than alvins was. The first 2 bars were dope to me and everything after that was decent enough. Excluding the closer, i liked the idea but not the execution. 6/10

Vote plot with the upset

[Schadenfreude]

PLOT - Wooh major upset, Plot came w/ it tbh. Karp pretty much mailed it in, only bar I liked was Aero/stock, everything else was standard, nothing special. Whereas Plot had HEAT. The opener was the weakest bar, but it was funny asf imo. Russian doll & rabbithole were legitimate bangers, propers.

[Og smokinstein]

I gotta go with plot his opener was dope, and was a good way to start off his verse.
He was more consistent, and effective at his attempts wit his punches.

Given al's cred I was under the impression the would've been a body.
The verse was written well, but lacked the punches and attack factor.

Vote- plot

[Blanco Bishop]

This battle comes down to execution to me. Plot had some really solid concepts but the style was worded a but archaic. A little triming of words here n there would of made a big difference. Liked the rabbit hole line n the closer was a good effort. Karp onebofbtye best tho so u have to be nearly perfect to win. Pokemon line was concise. Aero line was funny n Rican was lotb. Good battle guys.

V al

[Chemist]

You don’t wanna throw blows at all cuz you know I’m strong
I bet you thought catchin a fade was a type of Pokemon
///didnt like the set up on this, ok punch but im done hearing pokemon lines///
All hope was gone when you saw every clips long
I got a shoulder stock Aero wouldn’t know how to give a tip on
///aeros stock tips huh. decent///
What I keep in my waistband will erase ya whole face fam
Watch me put that 45 to ya back like the 'Space Jams’
//light///
Ya legacy is a waste man, I’m a murder ya cuz I’m merciless
Leave ya body in the ditch Rican, for havin a fuckin record worse than his
///bruh #teamrican/// lol
I remember you sayin you made trips and was slangin grams
But the only time you seen stupid Bricks was on Anchorman
//didnt like this, light///

Now the balls in my court, so Imma fucking go ballistic,
Fuck up Al so bad he'll be left dribbling in a chair, next stop special Olympics.
//light opener tbh///
Small disclaimer: dude ain't no hall of famer, getting his head so fucking swole,
Al your just a toy bitch so full of yaself, you'd get mistaken for a Russian doll.
///fire , never seen this concept actually...///
Your slut? fucks all your buddies like a bunny, vag got some stretchin,
& now she's got a rabbit-hole that teleports dicks to other dimensions.
//lmfaooooooooooooo, word////
So fear the grumble of the beast, coz shit gets savage deep in the jungle,
& Plot's shaking the biscuit in front of ya face like I'm teasing a mongrel.
///uh, ok ok, I see you. Not bad////
Its your funeral faggot! Bags come collect this body I'm thru with him,
Let the whole lime come and see Al boxed up on the table, that's aluminium.
///HA, YOU ALREADY KNOW I LIKE THIS CLOSER///


alv understimated plot here tbh. plot came with fire except that opener.
vote plot