Bodysnatcher vs Big Bolo - Bodysnatcher wins

[Victor.]

NBL Season 11
Week 7

Due SUNDAY 8/26/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


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2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
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May God have mercy on your souls!

[Big Bolo]

10 or 12?

[BodySnatcher]

Thinking the same. Match whoever drops first.

[Big Bolo]

10...

BodySnatcher?

https://image.ibb.co/kT9mvz/Capture_2018_08_22_22_07_40.png

Heard u flippin dough but not the green kind, u never caught bodies in the yard
He Red Gang for his clan? Riight we know that's just ur fav. Magic the Gathering card
Funny u play fantasy games cuz its WILD to say the odds are stacked against me
U hood? but the only place u'd see B in red if The Game was rollin thru in his Bentley
Won a finals in a league sum don't recognize tho, don't go flexin bro
With me? Ur story will start and stop in the first hr like a television detective show
Think I give a fuck about a status? I know I'm the boss of this
Wet up a fresh Body, that Voss is crisp, ya last move being ya fam...when they cross ya wrist!
You just lost to the new guy, oh my now watch as ur stats spiral...
Won't be too obv. cuz I just caught Dys Body in the end n' that's Final!

[BodySnatcher]

That was interesting.....


I’ll catch Bolo under a streetlight & let this shit fire...
It’ll remove his features & leave his face on a pole like a missing kid flyer
I only do headshots...u can tell from my beam stature
U sleeping but this stick is above ur dome like it’s part of a dreamcatcher
He’s down in the dumps. But I’ma let this hobo hear it
This 12 gauge is so pumped up...it could help raise this nigga Bolo spirit
I’ll grab a clip & take ALL ur shit so please don’t act stun
One shot to the hip will end ur career…& this Raider will leave Bo Jackson
I’ll take this fool’s gold. The burner blazing ur frame bro
Then I'ma dump ur body 'over a hill' just cuz u were chasing the reign Bo

[For Battling]

Heard u flippin dough but not the green kind, u never caught bodies in the yard
He Red Gang for his clan? Riight we know that's just ur fav. Magic the Gathering card
nah lol
Funny u play fantasy games cuz its WILD to say the odds are stacked against me
U hood? but the only place u'd see B in red if The Game was rollin thru in his Bentley
i mean I guess this is somewhat decent
Won a finals in a league sum don't recognize tho, don't go flexin bro
With me? Ur story will start and stop in the first hr like a television detective show
this was good
Think I give a fuck about a status? I know I'm the boss of this
Wet up a fresh Body, that Voss is crisp, ya last move being ya fam...when they cross ya wrist!
i don’t get it
You just lost to the new guy, oh my now watch as ur stats spiral...
Won't be too obv. cuz I just caught Dys Body in the end n' that's Final!
nah man

1 good
1 Decent
3 misses

Vs


I’ll catch Bolo under a streetlight & let this shit fire...
It’ll remove his features & leave his face on a pole like a missing kid flyer
pretty cool
I only do headshots...u can tell from my beam stature
U sleeping but this stick is above ur dome like it’s part of a dreamcatcher
would have been nice if it were facts lol
He’s down in the dumps. But I’ma let this hobo hear it
This 12 gauge is so pumped up...it could help raise this nigga Bolo spirit
decent, wording was off
I’ll grab a clip & take ALL ur shit so please don’t act stun
One shot to the hip will end ur career…& this Raider will leave Bo Jackson
IN AMERICA..we pronounce Jackson (jack sin), not sun/son like a solar panel sky. Decent bar lol
I’ll take this fool’s gold. The burner blazing ur frame bro
Then I'ma dump ur body 'over a hill' just cuz u were chasing the reign bo
mmmm I tried to like this but couldn’t

1 good
2 Decent
2 misses


Not the best of battles here but it’s cool lol. Super close and bolo could have caught body sleeping easily but Bolo didn’t drop so hot. Both had the same amount of good lines, except body had 1 less miss.


Vote BodySnatcher

[Raizen]

"This 12 gauge is so pumped up...it could help raise this nigga Bolo spirit"

Line of the battle. Thought this was nice.

Body had a pretty decent start with his first three bars. With Bolo, I just didn't see anything I liked, except for the detective show line, which wasn't bad.

So it comes down to Bolo's detective line vs. Snatcher's first 3, with the pumped gauge line being the best line in this battle.

v/Bodysnatcher

[DynamiCz]

Heard u flippin dough but not the green kind, u never caught bodies in the yard
He Red Gang for his clan? Riight we know that's just ur fav. Magic the Gathering card

This was decent here, kinda confused with the wording

Funny u play fantasy games cuz its WILD to say the odds are stacked against me
U hood? but the only place u'd see B in red if The Game was rollin thru in his Bentley

This was coo here

Won a finals in a league sum don't recognize tho, don't go flexin bro
With me? Ur story will start and stop in the first hr like a television detective show

Lol this was also coo

Think I give a fuck about a status? I know I'm the boss of this
Wet up a fresh Body, that Voss is crisp, ya last move being ya fam...when they cross ya wrist!


Wording stretched here a bit, but not really feeling this here

You just lost to the new guy, oh my now watch as ur stats spiral...
Won't be too obv. cuz I just caught Dys Body in the end n' that's Final!

Light impact on the closer...decent at best tho


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I’ll catch Bolo under a streetlight & let this shit fire...
It’ll remove his features & leave his face on a pole like a missing kid flyer

Cool opener here

I only do headshots...u can tell from my beam stature
U sleeping but this stick is above ur dome like it’s part of a dreamcatcher

I seen this concept a few times, it was decent tho…

He’s down in the dumps. But I’ma let this hobo hear it
This 12 gauge is so pumped up...it could help raise this nigga Bolo spirit

Lmao this is nice!

I’ll grab a clip & take ALL ur shit so please don’t act stun
One shot to the hip will end ur career…& this Raider will leave Bo Jackson

Ehh, this is ok...I like the nameplay off Bo Jackson tho

I’ll take this fool’s gold. The burner blazing ur frame bro
Then I'ma dump ur body 'over a hill' just cuz u were chasing the reign Bo

Lmao this is actually fiya!



Props on both verses here, this was a cool read here. Bo verse was coo, just had to get his wording down packed and make his punches sting a bit. Body verse was also coo, had some misses in there and then had some nice nameflips and there better overall verse.

V-Body

[Ryno]

10...

BodySnatcher?

https://image.ibb.co/kT9mvz/Capture_2018_08_22_22_07_40.png

Funny u play fantasy games cuz its WILD to say the odds are stacked against me
U hood? but the only place u'd see B in red if The Game was rollin thru in his Bentley


That was interesting.....


I’ll catch Bolo under a streetlight & let this shit fire...
It’ll remove his features & leave his face on a pole like a missing kid flyer
He’s down in the dumps. But I’ma let this hobo hear it
This 12 gauge is so pumped up...it could help raise this nigga Bolo spirit


i liked these lines the most. i thought body was more consistent. more impactful lines as well. v/BS