Relationship with God

[Dope girl]

Relationship with God is what gets me through this I live. He taught me how to love and I should forgive. Relationship with is special no need to explain. He made me overcome unwanted pain.
Relationship with God was send to me from Heaven above. Heart filled with joy and love.
He's loyal friend.
Will never ever end.

This is a poem

[Capital J]

Great Job Dope Girl.
Use to stay in West Palm.....Delray, Boynton and Boca.

[Dope girl]

Thanks

[Pharaohs Army]

Firstly, thanks for your positive feedback on my last keystyle.

Second, this is good because it is authentic. All your pieces I can tell are from your own heart.
However, your terrible grammar at times is too exaggerated and stilts the piece while you're reading.

I have a feeling that half of it is on purpose, and half of it is genuine bad grammar and wording typos. You can clean both sides of them up real quick, and your pieces would be that much better.

[Dope girl]

Yw and ty

[Geno]

This is a poem line was fire

[Dope girl]

Thanks love

[Adverse]

Good subject matter. Writing could be a lot more verbose but I’m not going to fault you for expressing your faith

[Dope girl]

Thanks love