Queen Daughter

[Cereal]

In rogue vernacular my sternum extracts
A curveball wordsmith in cursive cursing facts
This rebel baby yoda princess solider it seems
Screened at birth for virus and timing about dreams
Through streams and storms the trooper is unmasked
Flacid dancing with the reaction of the epileptic out assed
Queen 4 queen sexually she lived at the reach of 18
Taste me to face me chasing chasers basting debating
Live was of the honest still, in his own language tainted
Racing with the mind changing the time with times faintly
squatting with song sonnets her bonnet her smell of her scalp
this queen has me wrapped around my finger "help/yelp"

[Cereal]

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/GjqLtlTbcAAMzex?format=jpg&name=medium

https://assets.mubi.com/images/film/105079/image-w1280.jpg

https://live.staticflickr.com/5257/5392694240_ae24603784_c.jpg

[Cereal]

https://content.api.news/v3/images/bin/e6f8175e4cdd0cf29e9bdddab4991e11


https://external-content.duckduckgo.com/iu/?u=https%3A%2F%2Fi1.sndcdn.com%2Fartworks-rMzEQLSkgSow0aeE-mo9mdg-t500x500.jpg&f=1&nofb=1&ipt=60158aaf052a9cfd76872ccd65adf5108dbc726ae7f9eb 46d6a830db45711d66&ipo=images

[Witty]

"In rogue vernacular my sternum extracts"

I'm sorry, I genuinely take no joy in saying this but the line I quoted here is absolute gibberish. It is just some big words thrown together, it makes absolutely no sense at all.

I then read the rest of the verse and it didn't get any better. I'm sorry but this is really bad. You might impress some people by using lots of big words but anyone who actually knows those words and their definition and how they should be used will agree that this entire verse is nonsense.

Sorry.

[Cereal]

respect

[Jim Blaze]

After seeing your recent Pic in the disc, this drop seems especially more offensive and horrifying than it would otherwise. Idk what disease convinced you to even pick up this hobby, but you should seek counseling. You're like 40 and can't rhyme words in a cohesive pattern enough already retard. Do something else. Like finishing skinning the children in your attic idk. Genuinely baffled 3 decades into text rap that there are people that still write this fucking terribly. Ur brain is fuckin worthless. Whatever level of thought that went into this confuses me on myriad levels. Honestly, I'd knock u tf out if I ever saw you just to help evolution ms course in eradicating mongrel minded mutants like you. Fuck outta here.

[PancakeBrah]

squatting with song sonnets her bonnet her smell of her scalp

That was cool. So long as you meant song sonnets as the start of a series and not "song sonnets" as one noun. Breathless and evocative if so.

[Cereal]

love you thanks yeh i meant it as a breathless "in"take so the noun gets pronounced but isnt the noun