Phuck Vs Lotto - PHUCK WINS

[KwaL!ty]

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[Lotto Smirk]

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[Lotto Smirk]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop

[Lotto Smirk]

will post links when he drops Phuck Yew

[KwaL!ty]

my bad was out of town for holiday ... im here though Lotto Smirk

[KwaL!ty]

15 min. key you ain't worth it ..


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

[KwaL!ty]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35437

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8141


Lotto's http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35021

[Lotto Smirk]

Will drop more votes later done one in nbl and one in ba will vote on all nbl battles later

[King Ra.]

Hmm, this was a shocker for me.

Lotto Smirk, I didn't like the way you came off on your first two bars. The opener was very bland to me & didn't hit at all. The follow-up bar, which seems to be a personal attempt in relation to Joe Metts/Mets/Citi field, came off awkward to me. I read it a few times but I don't know. Your last 3 bars, imo were pretty good. They gave a phuck/adoption paper punch was cool, mainly because your set up did it's job in leading to that punch connection. You follow up the next bar probably a tad better, with a personal shot that came off pretty well. And I liked the closer, it was okay, but the two bars before it did very well. Phuck Yew, I see you key'd this up in 15 minutes.... from other verses I read from you, this fell short & reads like a key indeed. Your opening punch was pretty dope. Didn't like the set up too much, but the play on the name with the punch was good. I felt after that line, things got a bit eh. The second bar was another play on his name, but it didn't really hit hard. A bit generic. The third bar I felt could have been killer, but the wording seemed funky. And the set up, as has been the case through your verse thus far, didn't really boost it. But again, the wording wasn't working for me with the concept you used. Your 4th bar & closer were guilty of coming of a bit bland, more particularly, your closer with the lot bitch shit/more than/parking spots for women. That is a bit obscene and doesn't really make sense. The 4th bar, I didn't like the "drunk driving on railroads" connection with L-Train. I understand the idea like the Duck Dynasty, but whereas the Duck Dynasty was a worded issue, the 4th bar just didn't tie together well. The set ups here weren't all that great which also hurt you a bit, but then again, this was a key. So I understand it's not perfect.

Believe it or not, I have Lotto stealing a bit of an upset here over one of the more consistent battlers. Maybe if Phuck had actually put a bit more time in his verse it would have won easily, but instead Lotto really did a nice job outside of his first to bars to take this one.


MVGT: Lotto Smirk.

[Flow]

This battle just shows how long I have been away...

Lotto has improved.

Phucks verse seemed rushed, most of his concepts were overplayed against lotto from when i was last here and i see no fresh twist on them.

lotto has some nice ideas, dont think many of them were all that venomous but the idea and way of thinking is there which it wasnt when i last saw him drop...

i think its still a close battle, pretty sure phuck will be kicking himself because he could easily enough have taken this. but got to vote lotto for a better showing

LOTTO

[trap.]

Weird.

Never read a Phuck battle. The concepts were there but the wording was off in spots. Lotto on the other hand, didn't have concepts or wording. I'll make it more in-depth if need be but;

Vote - Phuck

[Zen]

I don't usually battle so you two can disregard this vote if you want, but if you do it'll probably be open for like 6 months, so yeah...

Lotto: The "gave a phuck" bar was your best bar. As for the others I'm not real sure what you were trying to do. They were mostly just statements instead of actual punches and that hurt you.

Phuck: "Crack smirk" was my favorite bar from you. The other bars were eh in my opinion, but the upside was they were actually punches directed at your opponent. Each bar was a name flip or personal instead of a generic reference.

Lotto had the LOTB with his gave a phuck bar, but I gotta give my vote to Phuck for consistency.

V/Phuck

[KwaL!ty]

2-2 uppin for some more feed ..

[Texcellence]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
Dope.

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

Neither verses were that great but I feel the above punches won this battle. Vote: Lotto

[timeless]

Lotto
you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
nahh

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
ehh wording lacked

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
nahh

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
didn't see the batte buit nah

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
decent closer

Phuck
gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
good concept, lack of wordplay

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
lol

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
not bad, "..." fucked the flow up

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
nah

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
nah


pretty weak battle, yet one sided. I think phuck got this pretty easily. Concept were there, may not have been worded the best, but they were there.

[Bender]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop


vs


Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show

Very week battle, Yew if you keyed that quick it shows, you should have just had one hard hitter and you coulda taken this. Both were weak but I have to say that Lotto's last line actually kinda made me chuckle a little bit.

Vote-Lotto

[Simon SeversTons]

My conclusion:

Lotto Smirk - The opener was not good, you needed a different approach. Nothing here awed me. The second liner was a missed the opponent, suppose to have a attack. This was another fail. Feels like filler to me. Focus on the opponent. Your 3rd liner got a nod from me, much better than your last two lines. I get your point in your 4th line, but you couldve retwritten the line and put more depth into it wouldve came out a better result... still a hit for me, not impactful though. Now, your fifth line wasnt a good one, felt like it shouldnt had been there. Nice verse, btw.

Phuck Yew - Your opener was decent, nothing much that was ehh. Your second line is alright, couldve rewrote it to make it sound witty or clever and impactful. Your 3rd line was a bit better, your setups on the otherhand, needs major work... your setups are sloppy, definitely need to work on that. Your 4th line seems to came up short and a miss for me, couldve replaced that liner with another better line. Finally, your final liner was really forced and played out... that was not a good line, period. Needed to be thought out more, but this verse was decent. Both did well in this battle.

MVGT: Phuck Yew

[pup]

this was an alright battle, but to me lotto came smoother, with harder hitting bars,

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

that was ill right there ^

best bar of the battle.

lotto your flow on a couple of your hard hittin bars are choppy, phuck stayed consistent the whole battle,

mvgt: phuck

[Sharp]

5-4 Phuck, win by two
Lotto Smirk still missing a link buddy

[big baby]

Lotto had a better verse, smooth verse. Phuck should have actually tried and took the battle, the lines weren't bad, they just seemed a little 'idc'. The adoption papers line was pretty cool. LOTB. vote - lotto.

[Dope girl]

This was close battle
I give it to Lotto
Reason: I thought he a better verse with smoother lines & harder hitters.

[KwaL!ty]

Are we really counting that kind of vote?

[Sicc]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood

Lacks sting. I mean not really much to word but still IMO came off statement'ish.

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field

Not sure where you were going with this, but I don't see this as being a diss of any type? Am I missing something? Just seemed statement'ish to me.

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

Concept there, kind of liked this but the flow through me off. Is it "Hate'em" you tried to rhyme with "Papers"? Doesn't rhyme in my language (English).

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail

I see the concept, I think you just failed to execute properly.

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop

Nothing here.

vs

gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit

Came off statement'ish IMO. Concept was decent but at the same time predictable. I'm sure this has been used against him his entire career while using this "Username".

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again

Not really feeling this, basic and lacks sting.

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show

Concept there but lack the proper execution. Still not THAT bad tho.

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads

I see the metaphor just debating on how it's relevant? Maybe I am missing something here, please excuse me if I did.

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

Terrible simile. I see the Lots/Parking but think it's poorly worded and you could have taken that in a different direction to land a nice effective punch.

IMO: I see Phuck taking this battle because of his consistency. I mean there was nothing "Jaw Dropping" but he had a few concepts that he failed to execute on. Some Name flips/creativity throughout his verse as were Lotto was just to basic for me and a lot of his material came off statement'ish. I can see both probably did not put forth an effort compared to what I have read previously from both, but as I stated, IMO Phuck wins.

MVGT: Phuck

[Sharp]

6-5

[Ryan 12]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
^dope
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop


vs


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women


cool battle. i think lotto won cuz of consistency and had the lotb with the cort wp also he had that personal at the end. phuck i seen better from u but u lost this one by 1 quote



vote - lotto

[Pyro]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
didn't work here fam..

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
nah.. punch needs work

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
broken rhyme.. messed it up

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
stop breaking your rhymes mam. Work on adding more syllables in them

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
na man.. no real punch here


VS


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
ha. this was pretty clever. not hard but clever

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
Na.. didn't work fam

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
pretty weak.

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
somewhat... was light

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
could've been worded a lot better here.

I'm gonna go with who i thought was stronger with the punches.. Slightly consistent and more out of the box lines..

MVGT:Phuck

[Hush]

Lotto got this

[Sharp]

7-7 daaaamn up

[Orc]

axe at yew was an ok concept. gave up phuck too. it's a played name to have so i guess the lines u use will seem played no matter what. cort battle was ok too.


VS


crack smirk was cool but it's been done. didn't feel anything else. kinda wrote like a rican verse. bad wording.


i got Lotto

[fresh]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
Not feeling it, weak concept
You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
nahh
I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
this is better
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
Ehh not bad wording is hurting you here though
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
weak punch


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
concept is decent, could have been more impact though
fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
nice
Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
funny, not bad
stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
weak
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
Not bad could have been worded better for more impact

I got this going to phuck for having better punches with more sting, and more comedic concepts that actually hit.

v/phuck

[DTK]

Lotto Smirk - i didn't think you brought creative enough ideas to go the nameplay route. Also, how can you write a full verse without mentioning your opponents name? It takes away from the personal feel, I did see the mod jab but you didn't really turn it into a hard hitting punch. Overall I think you could of brought some better thought out material but you show potential

Kwality - at least attempted wordplay in almost every bar. At least you incorporated his name into your plays to give it somewhat of a personal feel, I didn't think your material was outstanding but you did consistently jab at smirk..

So for that vote Kwal

[Sharp]

9-8 kwality

Lotto Smirk - i didn't think you brought creative enough ideas to go the nameplay route. Also, how can you write a full verse without mentioning your opponents name? It takes away from the personal feel, I did see the mod jab but you didn't really turn it into a hard hitting punch. Overall I think you could of brought some better thought out material but you show potential

Kwality - at least attempted wordplay in almost every bar. At least you incorporated his name into your plays to give it somewhat of a personal feel, I didn't think your material was outstanding but you did consistently jab at smirk..

So for that vote Kwal

btw when this battle went down kwality was known as phuck yew, if you want to revise the vote a bit. (not saying any one guy should win but I know for a fact lotto did mention his opponents name)

[DTK]

No problem, certainly makes more sense. I'll get back at this if I got time, thanks for the heads up

[Answer]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood

i wasnt really a fan of this one

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field

good concept, but i wouldve liked to see it worded more directly

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

Dope concept, but the wordplay seems a little bit forced to me since you would typically say "gave him up" or "Gave up" not "gave a fuck".

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail

This was dope

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop

not my favorite bar in the verse




gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit

I've seen like a million Lotto and Digit lines against this dude, so its hard for me to give you credit for this

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again

I liked this

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show

Nah, I've seen duck/duck concepts played to hell and this wasnt a really creative take on it

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads

Okayish

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

This is alright




This battle's pretty close tbh. I feel like Phuck definitely should've tried harder, because I could see this going either way. As far as punch lines concerned, I think they're just about neck and neck....the gave a fuck line would've been more than enough to seal the deal for me if it made more sense from both angles.

The tie breaker for me is just the fact that Phuck's flow was smoother for me, partially because he had the advantage of using multis and a couple of Lotto's lines didn't even rhyme for me.

MVGT - Phuck

[Diode]

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

vs

gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

tbh i only listed the one gamble line because it was the least terrible thing he dropped. all of your verse was worded awkwardly or with 2001 concepts. getting wood? srs?

phuck wasn't all that great but still better. closer i quoted was a stretch but at least it was something i hadn't heard before

v/ phuck

[Paradigm]

you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood
pause? lol wtf
You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field
weak
I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers
no weak and doesnt rhyme?
So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail
no wtf lol
In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop
no weak

15 min. key you ain't worth it ..


gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit
poorly worded
fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again
poorly worded, weak
Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show
simple but ok
stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads
lol no
you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women
lol the connection is funny

Lottos verse wasnt good and had no real sting or connections. kwals verse had connections but were worded very poorly. Kwality came with that HHE like style adjective wording... stop that immediately.

Vote - Kwality

RTF: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

[KwaL!ty]

12-8 lol

[KwaL!ty]

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