You know what's up with airplane food? The people in the plane. Luggage too.

[big baby]

or how I did those odd little moan noises
it was funny. I just laughed. At how we laughed.
Sad. Now I’m sad over how we laughed.
Neptuniun fury. Name it a curtain call
Brim of the acrylic cloth that buried shadows in our love
consecrate the squeaky bed bolted in with rusty lugs
hallow lunging forth to start the sunup
under covers dried with passion
in our eyes their lies a passive, sane
perhaps a way, cause absence
makes my heart grow odder.
struck gold. pick axe made out of my own bone.
marrow swallowed mishap. diamond in the rough. drone
glow gloom in the dark. we’d pair together close to heart
if we were of other genus from the start
the geniuses on Noah’s arc couldn’t have us thrown apart.
I’m over it, i’m covert, my soul has slipped composite
cant think brash. bashed for thinking positive.
acid spilling, splashing things. I’ve had it up to, all hell
and it’s noxious. nauseating. faucet water springing
from the tall wells, a plastic feelings’ honor.
blood sort of complicates things.
I’m all for revealing monsters
Grey Goose. Wollop punch. Just wait til' all hell that'll break.
noose. lay loose, vodka drunk. Guts itching to hate you

lol

[Frank]

I got a ill delivery so it could just be me taking the piece up a few notches? I'm trying to give you the benefit of the doubt here. Did nothing for me. Im only really responding cause my new years resolution is to post 50 times a day to keep the doctor away. I don't got the mental stamina to break you down a paragraph here because than I'd feel like I was debating with you and that would over shadow that shit you posted. Listen faggot I Hijacked your thread im self promoting, catch me in the AOWL this week everybody. I pissed inside this thread and sprayed my name in graffiti on the adjacent walls of the thread. No more comments im boarding up the thread.

tldr rofl

[Wise Wiggles]

Word to what Cake said and deleted. Except I didn't mind the Arc line too much..

That struck gold, pick axe of my own bone line was awes

I’m over it, i’m covert, my soul has slipped composite
cant think brash. bashed for thinking positive.

^ smoothie

[big baby]

Thanks wise and I hope, thx pancake. lol.

Frank your delivery isn't that ill. And you're in over your britches. Every writer that has posted in here is better than you.

In my opinion. But self promote away.

[PancakeBrah]

i said the noahs ark line sucked and that you knew it sucked. then i said the rest was gewd. not as good as your last couple open mics, but still very good. then i said that your self-confidence as a writer shined through even in a one-off.

[Certain]

Why are you posting old things?

[PancakeBrah]

to feed his ego and to get some more feedback. oh yeah, new audience, too!

you knew that when you asked it certain. you only posted that to let him and everyone else know you knew it wasn't a new piece. quit being silly.

this is old!?

if you've never seen it, it's new to you!

[Certain]

It doesn't show progression as a writer. Any advice I could provide would be outdated.

[big baby]

I think I may have posted a snippeted version of this. Wasn't too sure and didn't feel like sifting through 50 open mics to make sure. Thanks for indulging cake.

[big baby]

It doesn't show progression as a writer. Any advice I could provide would be outdated.

ok

[Figgly Wiggly]

This is about a girl </3

[dull boy]

They're being hard on you.

[PancakeBrah]

They're being hard on you.

No way brah. Big baby's the best.

[big baby]

They're being hard on you.

Miss you man. Want you to be hard in me.

[Ryan 12]

I got a ill delivery so it could just be me taking the piece up a few notches? I'm trying to give you the benefit of the doubt here. Did nothing for me. Im only really responding cause my new years resolution is to post 50 times a day to keep the doctor away. I don't got the mental stamina to break you down a paragraph here because than I'd feel like I was debating with you and that would over shadow that shit you posted. Listen faggot I Hijacked your thread im self promoting, catch me in the AOWL this week everybody. I pissed inside this thread and sprayed my name in graffiti on the adjacent walls of the thread. No more comments im boarding up the thread.

tldr rofl

lmaooooo0o0o

[big baby]

This is about a girl </3

I still have a crush on you.

[big baby]

Certain you've never seen the top half. The bottom half, perhaps.

[dead man]

i like when pancake gets honest with people.

your little writings like this make me nostalgic and sad but in rosy colored happy way.

on this, the day of xmas eve, i thank you.

in fact i am thankful for your membership here and for your gift of writing emotive verses that have the power to move people.

that goes for you, your buddy dallas, wise ways, dan, copypat, zyg, figurative, certain, split, everybody in AOWL, and namix

probably too early to be this buzzed

[Wise Wiggles]

Lol! I am appreciative of everyone's "company" as well!

GO BABY JESUS!

[big baby]

deadman being nice? must be drunk!

[NYCSPITZ]

better than the last one. Pretty dope really, imma give it 9/10. Rustly lug Lusty rugs whaaaaat? Good cadence and suspense then taking it away and bringing it back. Ended on a lol that was a lol but overall a bit more in depth to me than the last shit