Ox vs. Lotto Smirk {Ox wins}

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Ox Lotto Smirk

[Ox]

check, ok

[Ox]

I do know some of u didn't grasp my Ak clone rpk opener..rpk = ak 47 clone...

Ox won. better concepts and delivery. RPK had shit any1 could say. terrible voting

vote Ox

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real shit

fuck lotto..

beat Ox? Ur chance is like hittin the state lottery.
or else ur equippin rpk votes to preform another bank robbery.
Yeah I Got cheated On, but urs is by ur bitch
She's on a prowl, Sporting her Goods, its why she stays supplied w/ DICKS.
If he's Backed in a corner, he's pretty complacent.
This dunce rather face a wall as dense as he is, Than another Witty Situation.
Ur wifey ain't a dime piece, so loose the Bitch is Hollow.
remove that smirk as i Flip the Throttle to Powerball & hit the lotto.
Rig up ur best shit cuz as real as it might seem.
U beatin me is rapin a bitch on roofies, its nothin but a pipe dream.

[Lotto Smirk]

I have checked for this will post later dia deleted all my posts

[Lotto Smirk]

You aint shot guys or pop nines, you can't even handle a gun your a weak shit
last week you pulled the trigger on RPK...N shot ya whole career into pieces
This guys having an identity crisis, When i write this, i got him shook n nervous
Correct you aint a bull ox - thats just what voters think after reading 1 of your verses
Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights
call 'ox cart' cuz he aint got balls to beat me, He's a draft animal being sent to the slaughter, as a minimum
Ox fakes beef he should be a goverment talker, cuz he dodges the question of beef like horse meat criminals
You aint getting to a champ match you a Knucklehead n not the good one im sorry bud
Ill buy you a plane ticket, give you $10,000...
Because Thats ya only chance of finally getting face to face with hollywood

[Flow]

I do know some of u didn't grasp my Ak clone rpk opener..rpk = ak 47 clone...



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real shit

fuck lotto..

beat Ox? Ur chance is like hittin the state lottery.
or else ur equippin rpk votes to preform another bank robbery.
Nice
Yeah I Got cheated On, but urs is by ur bitch
She's on a prowl, Sporting her Goods, its why she stays supplied w/ DICKS.
no
If he's Backed in a corner, he's pretty complacent.
This dunce rather face a wall as dense as he is, Than another Witty Situation.
Lol Nice
Ur wifey ain't a dime piece, so loose the Bitch is Hollow.
remove that smirk as i Flip the Throttle to Powerball & hit the lotto.
I see what your doing - Not sure how much I like this so going for an OK but I consider myself a generous voter so be interesting to see if others liked this...
Rig up ur best shit cuz as real as it might seem.
U beatin me is rapin a bitch on roofies, its nothin but a pipe dream
pretty played could of been used on anyone so not a great close


You aint shot guys or pop nines, you can't even handle a gun your a weak shit
last week you pulled the trigger on RPK...N shot ya whole career into pieces
so so
This guys having an identity crisis, When i write this, i got him shook n nervous
Correct you aint a bull ox - thats just what voters think after reading 1 of your verses
so so
Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights
lol OK
call 'ox cart' cuz he aint got balls to beat me, He's a draft animal being sent to the slaughter, as a minimum
Ox fakes beef he should be a goverment talker, cuz he dodges the question of beef like horse meat criminals
Wow for what the punch was you really rambled here my man. No Need!!! This for me was slackin
You aint getting to a champ match you a Knucklehead n not the good one im sorry bud
Ill buy you a plane ticket, give you $10,000...
Because Thats ya only chance of finally getting face to face with hollywood
much better

Going to have to throw my vote to ox on this - Lotto was more consistent for me but his misses were a hell a lot worse for me and i got bigger lols from ox

Loved that witty corner dunce line ;)

Vote Ox

(if anyone wants a more detailed break down pm me)

[Hush]

Ox loses for explaining his line before the verse

[Orc]

The line he explained was from his last battle

[Split]

Strong as ox and opener won this for lotto. Wasn't feeling how Ox set up his punches at all, didnt see any connecs.

V/ lotto

[Sn00p]

1-1, more votes please.

[RPK]

beat Ox? Ur chance is like hittin the state lottery.
or else ur equippin rpk votes to preform another bank robbery.
If he's Backed in a corner, he's pretty complacent.
This dunce rather face a wall as dense as he is, Than another Witty Situation

vs

You aint shot guys or pop nines, you can't even handle a gun your a weak shit
last week you pulled the trigger on RPK...N shot ya whole career into pieces
Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights

Thanks for all the shoutouts guys. To be honest this was a pretty close battle. You had the same amount of quotables. But I have to give it to Ox. He was more consistent overall.
V/ Ox

[Allen Knight]

beat Ox? Ur chance is like hittin the state lottery.
or else ur equippin rpk votes to preform another bank robbery.
Yeah I Got cheated On, but urs is by ur bitch
She's on a prowl, Sporting her Goods, its why she stays supplied w/ DICKS.
Ur wifey ain't a dime piece, so loose the Bitch is Hollow.
remove that smirk as i Flip the Throttle to Powerball & hit the lotto.

Vs

Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights
You aint getting to a champ match you a Knucklehead n not the good one im sorry bud
Ill buy you a plane ticket, give you $10,000...
Because Thats ya only chance of finally getting face to face with hollywood

V/ox, i got him here, lotto had those two bars that were cool if he had more like that he woulda took this
but the rest was misses ox was pretty consistent wit jabs i thought the powerball bar was nice,
but his non quotes were still ok
but not a bad battle tbh props yah'll.

[~RustyGunZ~]

If he's Backed in a corner, he's pretty complacent.
This dunce rather face a wall as dense as he is, Than another Witty Situation.

opener nah. dicks no lol. bad wording and predicktable. eh @ witty sit i'll give it to u i guess. lotto line was soft but the flow was dope. pipe dream not at all.

vs

You aint shot guys or pop nines, you can't even handle a gun your a weak shit
last week you pulled the trigger on RPK...N shot ya whole career into pieces
This guys having an identity crisis, When i write this, i got him shook n nervous
Correct you aint a bull ox - thats just what voters think after reading 1 of your verses
Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights

hollywood lost so closer doesn't work and was kind of bland, to easy. the nameplays were cool not super strong. opener was a decent personal

v/lotto

[Sharp]

If he's Backed in a corner, he's pretty complacent.
This dunce rather face a wall as dense as he is, Than another Witty Situation.
Ur wifey ain't a dime piece, so loose the Bitch is Hollow.
remove that smirk as i Flip the Throttle to Powerball & hit the lotto.



This guys having an identity crisis, When i write this, i got him shook n nervous
Correct you aint a bull ox - thats just what voters think after reading 1 of your verses
You aint getting to a champ match you a Knucklehead n not the good one im sorry bud
Ill buy you a plane ticket, give you $10,000...
Because Thats ya only chance of finally getting face to face with hollywood

I really had equal amounts as far as quotes and misses, I was closer to quoting some of lotto's lines for cleaner wording. Overall, pretty even showing but the slight advantage in wording makes me edge this one to Lotto. Good battle though, you're both showing a lot of promise

v/lotto

[Maximus]

OX
-opener was cool
-not feeling this
-ok but i dont really see any strong connections with the witty personal, coulda set it up better
-hmm, cool
-played as fuck
vs
LOTTO
-ok personal
-ok nameplay
-ok but two nameplays in a row made this less effective
-nah, too long winded btw
-cool closer
.
.
Close battle here tbh, both had equal amounts of quotables but imo lotto od'd on nameplays and it was sorta boring, not a bad showing from both of u tho, i just felt ox was more on point and slightly edged this..
V/ox

[Sn00p]

4-3, Ox. More votes please. First to seven wins. Must win by two.

[Mac]

If he's Backed in a corner, he's pretty complacent.
This dunce rather face a wall as dense as he is, Than another Witty Situation
Ur wifey ain't a dime piece, so loose the Bitch is Hollow.
remove that smirk as i Flip the Throttle to Powerball & hit the lotto.

Vs

Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights
You aint getting to a champ match you a Knucklehead n not the good one im sorry bud
Ill buy you a plane ticket, give you $10,000...
Because Thats ya only chance of finally getting face to face with hollywood

well. sort of close battle here. ox came decent with the witty line pretty funny and lotto np was cool. lotto smirk stand his ground, came as decent as ox came with the hollywood line cool wp and seen lifting weights being executed better. i'm giving the vote to ox for overall coming with a better verse. close battle though.

[God Of War]

wow i thought lotto got ox

ox your gon be able to get better man i just think ur first few barst read really simplistic. half way thru u got better but i think u lost on consistency alone man

v/lotto

[Hollywood]

bull Ox & the closer were on point for Lotto

that's all I really liked in this one, so V/Lotto

[Sn00p]

5-5, more votes please. First to seven still wins. Must still win by two.

[Cashius]

I thought Lotto's concepts were a bit more thought out. Neither was good but I was feeling lotto a bit more here. Ox's lines came off kind of simple.

Lotto.

[Dominate]

Yeah I Got cheated On, but urs is by ur bitch
She's on a prowl, Sporting her Goods, its why she stays supplied w/ DICKS.
Ur wifey ain't a dime piece, so loose the Bitch is Hollow.
remove that smirk as i Flip the Throttle to Powerball & hit the lotto.


vs

aint a bull ox - thats just what voters think after reading 1 of your verses
Ox skips then gym on purpose, Personal trainer or his mates, hes known for shifting dates
So if your 'strong as an ox' It just means your a weak faggot who's scared of lifting weights


non quotes were about even, so I got Ox with 1 more quoteable

v/ Ox

[ill nik-A]

Ox had opener which was ok and witty situation

Lotto had the strong like an ox which was aight

Ox with less mistakes wins it

[Plot]

Liked ox more gets my pick. Sticky sich and less errors