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Witty
02-22-2014, 03:02 AM
This thread can be deleted.
PancakeBrah
02-22-2014, 03:09 AM
I want to steal your first line and run with it. Well done on that.

Will feed this in-depth tomorrow.
Dove Dozer
02-22-2014, 02:58 PM
Gay.
PancakeBrah
02-22-2014, 06:54 PM
Why did you do this? Why delete?
Witty
02-22-2014, 06:57 PM
It wasn't good enough.
Dove Dozer
02-22-2014, 07:12 PM
I was gonna feed this. I quite enjoyed this piece. Damn
Hush
02-23-2014, 09:40 AM
Quitter
Sick
02-23-2014, 09:52 AM
I read the original before you deleted it


it was good but basic rhymes, kid's stuff


Up your game