You Were My Big Bang

Witty · 02-22-2014, 03:02 AM

This thread can be deleted.

PancakeBrah · 02-22-2014, 03:09 AM

I want to steal your first line and run with it. Well done on that.

Will feed this in-depth tomorrow.

Dove Dozer · 02-22-2014, 02:58 PM

Gay.

PancakeBrah · 02-22-2014, 06:54 PM

Why did you do this? Why delete?

Witty · 02-22-2014, 06:57 PM

It wasn't good enough.

Dove Dozer · 02-22-2014, 07:12 PM

I was gonna feed this. I quite enjoyed this piece. Damn

Hush · 02-23-2014, 09:40 AM

Quitter

Sick · 02-23-2014, 09:52 AM

I read the original before you deleted it

it was good but basic rhymes, kid's stuff

Up your game

02-22-2014, 03:02 AM	#1
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	You Were My Big Bang This thread can be deleted. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime. Last edited by Witty; 02-22-2014 at 12:34 PM.

02-22-2014, 03:09 AM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	I want to steal your first line and run with it. Well done on that. Will feed this in-depth tomorrow. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

02-22-2014, 02:58 PM	#3
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,079 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853213	Gay. __________________

02-22-2014, 06:54 PM	#4
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Why did you do this? Why delete? __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

02-22-2014, 06:57 PM	#5
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,794 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	It wasn't good enough. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

02-22-2014, 07:12 PM	#6
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,079 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853213	I was gonna feed this. I quite enjoyed this piece. Damn __________________

02-23-2014, 09:40 AM	#7
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02-23-2014, 09:52 AM	#8
Sick t00 0riginal 4 u Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Just Write's mother's house Posts: 1,042 Battle Record: 7-1 Rep Power: 1837331	I read the original before you deleted it it was good but basic rhymes, kid's stuff Up your game