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veritas
08-21-2014, 12:41 AM
i must listen to the wise walrus - option B
you use your flippers to waddle down to the shore...the tide still pulling in...
you begin your quest of building. it is arduous work.....it takes you the better part of a week to mold the right rocks and move them with your tusks, flippers, and mustache. you eventually have erected a crude diving boar/bridge and you waddle up.....the big moment...you jump@@@@
you hit the water far past the tide.....but....the tide extended farther than what you thought...it pulls you back in. you are dejected. you then realize that if you had input from all the other walri....they might be able to help....but the elder was very sketchy.
do you:
A: confront the elder
B: disobey the elder
veritas
08-21-2014, 12:51 AM
I'm outtie.
This is fycked
A
truant again....this wasn't right, but after what happened what was? you were clearly losing your mind. As you walked back home you realized that the neighborhood was the same, but different.....you couldn't quite put your finger on it...but it was different. you were going to head home but you decided to make a detour through town. Town was town, but not town, you were certain of it. you recognized none of the shop names although the building layout looked very similar. what was worse was that everyone seemed to be staring at you like they knew you.
you walked past an old woman on the street and suddenly she looked at you and said coldly: "you don't belong here...."
chills...
you decided to turn into the nearest shop. it was an antiques shop, you felt amazed by all of the junk strewn about, yet still it felt right to be there. You walked and walked around and suddenly you saw a mirror....the mirror was old with gold inlays and "777" engraved into it. you had to have it. you looked into it and the strangest thing:
"an island....it is cold.....the mirror was pulling you in......there is death on this island....there is a man...this man is mad....this man is dangerous....there is a walrus!@>?????"
the vision faded as you snapped back into reality.....somehow that mirror transported you to another reality. was it real? you were crazy....oh yeah. "sign me up for the crazy pills" you thought. the mirror cost 9 dollars. you looked into your wallet and.....not enough, only 7 dollars.
do you
A: try and haggle the storekeep to accept 7 dollars
B: steal the mirror and dip
Paradox
08-21-2014, 12:53 AM
There is a reason this walrus is in charge/the elder/wise
Option A - i think its time to revamp the plan and recruit other walruses with his permission
veritas
08-21-2014, 01:01 AM
Give me the A
the tall man smiles an ugly grin...you realize he is old....he is older than he is tall.
He then takes the pink glowing powder.
"my boss thanks you....you will have subjects soon. enjoy the money professor Oedipus".
He exits. you look at all the money and realize that it needs to be invested in greater equipment. You now have the resources and enough plant to create an army of super animals or even humans and rule the world! wouldn't your "visitors" be so proud! you would show all of those who doubted your genius! they would pay! TEHY WOULD ALL PAY!
......................ONE MONTH LATER.........
your last breath is taken as you see him wearing your intestines. This is not right. This is not how it should be......darkness.
The library is amazing. you wish you could read every book in it, yet on some unconscious level, you know that it would be impossible.
"welcome" you see a man sitting holding a sword...a flaming sword...you can feel it's heat all the way across the room yet the flame is not burning the man.
he speaks: "some want to consider you were the cause, your greed, your envy, your hate......but I can understand if you still want to look". he slides a book of names over to you....yours is NOT there.
The "Librarian" stands up...far taller than the tall man and states: "death is the result of your choices"......you yell out stop!!!!!!! he does.
Do you:
A: tell him if he lets you go back to the lab you will pay him all of your money to spare you
B: tell him that you are sorry...so very sorry.
veritas
08-21-2014, 01:08 AM
There is a reason this walrus is in charge/the elder/wise
Option A - i think its time to revamp the plan and recruit other walruses with his permission
you enter the elder's dwelling....he is flopped. near a crude chessboard made out of rocks and dying fish (@captain obvious to thread) . He awakens.
"all right!" you say "what is going on here! I can make it to the island! I have an idea, but I need the other walri's help....and you are hindering it! why!@?"
"walt".....The elder spoke softly....his eyes glassing over..... "I used to live on that island.....until that "creature" showed up. it stood upright, it moved so fast so strong...it did horrible things to my village, it did horrible, unspeakable things to my kinsman......terrible things....." the elder drifted off.....
"I WOULD RATHER DIE HERE THAN TO EVER GO BACK! IF HE IS THERE IT IS CERTAIN DOOM FOR ANY AND ALL...!"
you lower yourself to the ground like a corgi as if to brace for a powder-handed pimp slap, but it never comes.
"walt....I know something you don't....about yourself....I can't explain it yet, but I know that you will leave for the island, and I know that my own trauma and fear have nearly killed my people.....go...and make it to the island, and gather it's fish and rocks....and slay that foul thing if needs be".
you leave the dwelling and call an audience. you tell the walri herd that they can help you get to the other island....
"whyze we going dere eh?" said an adolescent walrus with a suspiciously sounding new York accent
do you:
A: tell them the truth
B: hide some of the truth
truant again....this wasn't right, but after what happened what was? you were clearly losing your mind. As you walked back home you realized that the neighborhood was the same, but different.....you couldn't quite put your finger on it...but it was different. you were going to head home but you decided to make a detour through town. Town was town, but not town, you were certain of it. you recognized none of the shop names although the building layout looked very similar. what was worse was that everyone seemed to be staring at you like they knew you.
you walked past an old woman on the street and suddenly she looked at you and said coldly: "you don't belong here...."
chills...
you decided to turn into the nearest shop. it was an antiques shop, you felt amazed by all of the junk strewn about, yet still it felt right to be there. You walked and walked around and suddenly you saw a mirror....the mirror was old with gold inlays and "777" engraved into it. you had to have it. you looked into it and the strangest thing:
"an island....it is cold.....the mirror was pulling you in......there is death on this island....there is a man...this man is mad....this man is dangerous....there is a walrus!@>?????"
the vision faded as you snapped back into reality.....somehow that mirror transported you to another reality. was it real? you were crazy....oh yeah. "sign me up for the crazy pills" you thought. the mirror cost 9 dollars. you looked into your wallet and.....not enough, only 7 dollars.
do you
A: try and haggle the storekeep to accept 7 dollars
B: steal the mirror and dip
That 7 bucks is for McDonalds later obv
B
Paradox
08-21-2014, 01:13 AM
I am virtuous
A - tell him the truth
Objective
08-21-2014, 01:27 AM
A: say yes to play
B: say no to play
I'll stop reading what I've already read in this thread and choose what I normally would. I'm in on this shit.
A) I'll go play. The dream was weird but so was yesterday. It's probably just her imagination running wild anyways.
ONE PUNCH. one punch is all it took. You crush the officer's skull and feel his brain on your hands, the mom runs as does the daughter. No one else dares approach you. You reach down and grab the officer's pistol. Do you:
A: calmly leave
B: kill a few people then leave
Calmly leave. No point in drawing more attention to myself or wasting the high.
B.
Split
08-21-2014, 05:07 AM
the tall man smiles an ugly grin...you realize he is old....he is older than he is tall.
He then takes the pink glowing powder.
"my boss thanks you....you will have subjects soon. enjoy the money professor Oedipus".
He exits. you look at all the money and realize that it needs to be invested in greater equipment. You now have the resources and enough plant to create an army of super animals or even humans and rule the world! wouldn't your "visitors" be so proud! you would show all of those who doubted your genius! they would pay! TEHY WOULD ALL PAY!
......................ONE MONTH LATER.........
your last breath is taken as you see him wearing your intestines. This is not right. This is not how it should be......darkness.
The library is amazing. you wish you could read every book in it, yet on some unconscious level, you know that it would be impossible.
"welcome" you see a man sitting holding a sword...a flaming sword...you can feel it's heat all the way across the room yet the flame is not burning the man.
he speaks: "some want to consider you were the cause, your greed, your envy, your hate......but I can understand if you still want to look". he slides a book of names over to you....yours is NOT there.
The "Librarian" stands up...far taller than the tall man and states: "death is the result of your choices"......you yell out stop!!!!!!! he does.
Do you:
A: tell him if he lets you go back to the lab you will pay him all of your money to spare you
B: tell him that you are sorry...so very sorry.
Hertz us would want me to grovel
B
PancakeBrah
08-21-2014, 09:00 AM
Bags one!?
Fuckvthis earth.
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:25 AM
Calmly leave. No point in drawing more attention to myself or wasting the high.
B.
you are buzzing...i mean buzzing.....it felt so good to give in to the madness, to the depravity....the best part? No sirens. No one seems to care, it is as if the shock is just too much and you relish in this fact. You have changed lives. You stop in a nearby alleyway and masterbate, cumming to the thought of the fear in their eyes.
The buzz is getting stronger, but changing....you realize that you are no longer drunk...at all. What was blurred, is now clear....No one could stop you. "Lets see....it is time to have some fun".
do you:
A: head to the airport
B: head to the Marina
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:26 AM
Bags one!?
Fuckvthis earth.
Are you angry?
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:31 AM
That 7 bucks is for McDonalds later obv
B
The mirror feels good tucked away in between your chubby arms and body. You run, you little chubster, you run !!!! your insane clown posse shirt flows in the wind like a Unicorn's mane. You happen find yourself in a strange part of town, you have never been here before. You look into the mirror and you see a playground, and a little girl playing....you can feel the mirror pulling you in.....all of a sudden you realize that you must have drifted into the street because a long black limosine comes careening around the corner and almost hits you. You jump back and breath...whoo....you look at the mirror and it appeears split down the middle on the left is that artic island again, you see a walrus....on the right is the little girl in the playground...
Do you:
A: get pulled into the artic island
B: get pulled into the playground with the girl playing
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:38 AM
There is a reason this walrus is in charge/the elder/wise
Option A - i think its time to revamp the plan and recruit other walruses with his permission
you meet with the walri herd and you tell them that the secret will be to work together to overcome the tide. One walrus holds onto a rock and another walrus holds on to him, and then another walrus holds on to him ad infinitum walrium. Your theory, you explain is that if all teh links hold we could build a living bridge, and once connected to the other island we could all begin again in reverse until we all made it to the new island.
your flipper draws in teh sand:
) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ( <---the other shoreline
then
) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(
>
>
> <----basically just piggy backing in reverse now that you had secured a new point of contact on the mysterious island.
The herd likes this idea. "genius" they think. Suddenly a little walri pipes up:
"hey..hey...walt....what about the monster?"
do you:
A: tell him that it may not be real, but if it is you will fight it and protect him!
B: tell him that it may not be real, but if it is, we all may die, but we will die here of starvation and sharp rocks anyway
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:42 AM
I'll stop reading what I've already read in this thread and choose what I normally would. I'm in on this shit.
A) I'll go play. The dream was weird but so was yesterday. It's probably just her imagination running wild anyways.
"I wanna go to the park! I love the park!" she says
you decide to go to the park, you see the newspaper on teh counter, you grab it. Wonder how the cubs were doing. which reminds me of a joke, what did Jesus say to the cubs as he was ascending into Heaven? Don't do anything until I get back. THe ride to teh park is uneventful. You watch from the nearby bench as she plays delighted, you too are just happy that you slept last night....even though it was weird. Suddennly you see a limo pull up. Something feels strange.
Do you
A: continue reading the paper
B: call to your daughter to come here
Paradox
08-21-2014, 09:43 AM
you meet with the walri herd and you tell them that the secret will be to work together to overcome the tide. One walrus holds onto a rock and another walrus holds on to him, and then another walrus holds on to him ad infinitum walrium. Your theory, you explain is that if all teh links hold we could build a living bridge, and once connected to the other island we could all begin again in reverse until we all made it to the new island.
your flipper draws in teh sand:
) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ( <---the other shoreline
then
) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(
>
>
> <----basically just piggy backing in reverse now that you had secured a new point of contact on the mysterious island.
The herd likes this idea. "genius" they think. Suddenly a little walri pipes up:
"hey..hey...walt....what about the monster?"
do you:
A: tell him that it may not be real, but if it is you will fight it and protect him!
B: tell him that it may not be real, but if it is, we all may die, but we will die here of starvation and sharp rocks anyway
As i am not sure if i can die as i have entered a portal to begin with....
A) I shall fight and protect
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:47 AM
Hertz us would want me to grovel
B
"please! please! not the sword!!!!"
"the love of money".....he says..."but asking for forgiveness helps"....
the sword.
..........
You find yourself sitting on a rock, you have flippers, you feel old.....you glance in the nearby water, you see that you are an old walrus. You look across the sea and see an island, you have a vision of your past...the carnage of your walrus family being decimated by that monster.....a tear falls down your blubbery cheek.....onto your grey mustache.
"Elder!" "Walt wants to talk to you!"
"send him over" you say.....
then you think: "this is the best of all possible worlds....and smile."
THE END?
PancakeBrah
08-21-2014, 09:53 AM
Are you angry?
Only at the pockets thing.
I kicked bags ass and he got revenge. So we even
Swerve
08-21-2014, 10:27 AM
My adventure sucked though.
The other ones are pretty good and all intertwine.
veritas
08-21-2014, 12:21 PM
My adventure sucked though.
The other ones are pretty good and all intertwine.
Thats funny bro, because imo yours in one of the best, and it does intertwine. But hey, I did my best sir.
veritas
08-21-2014, 12:23 PM
Only at the pockets thing.
I kicked bags ass and he got revenge. So we even
so we cool?
PancakeBrah
08-21-2014, 12:26 PM
It was entertaining. Good job
The mirror feels good tucked away in between your chubby arms and body. You run, you little chubster, you run !!!! your insane clown posse shirt flows in the wind like a Unicorn's mane. You happen find yourself in a strange part of town, you have never been here before. You look into the mirror and you see a playground, and a little girl playing....you can feel the mirror pulling you in.....all of a sudden you realize that you must have drifted into the street because a long black limosine comes careening around the corner and almost hits you. You jump back and breath...whoo....you look at the mirror and it appeears split down the middle on the left is that artic island again, you see a walrus....on the right is the little girl in the playground...
Do you:
A: get pulled into the artic island
B: get pulled into the playground with the girl playing
Nothing goes wrong when you follow little girls on a playground
B
Swerve
08-21-2014, 12:46 PM
My adventure sucked though.
The other ones are pretty good and all intertwine.
Was hoping for more twists and turns :(
Taken out too soon!
Batty
08-21-2014, 12:54 PM
do you:
A: use the key and go back...forgetting all this and choosing "life"
B: stay in the library and attempt to save existence.
I choose B, books and lightsabers.
veritas
08-21-2014, 12:54 PM
It was entertaining. Good job
Repped.
Objective
08-21-2014, 04:43 PM
lmao @ the hipster library shit.
A: continue reading the paper
B: call to your daughter to come here
But ye something feels strange and that shit I was told about the limo in my dream yesterday.. Got to take extra care of my daughter just in case and hope I make the right choice.
B) I tell my daughter to come over.
StarFaggot
08-21-2014, 04:55 PM
This is on pace to be the most successful thread of all times.
Batty
08-21-2014, 06:00 PM
Bags/Pancake story should qualify them as bros in RL now.
epic.
big baby
08-21-2014, 07:40 PM
kk bb late but bb wanna play let go idiyote
veritas
08-21-2014, 09:08 PM
Waiting on LArs....will tighten then
veritas
08-22-2014, 11:24 AM
Nothing goes wrong when you follow little girls on a playground
B
you step through the mirror and transport into the playground and are standing immediately behind a man beating down another man and as you get stabbed from behind you drop the mirror. The blood runs down your juggalo logo and you fall to your knees. The mirror smashes and this alerts the man who was beating down the other man, he turns around shocked and the man he was pummelling runs back into a limo, which looked like the one you had seen earlier. Blackness........you die and bleed out onto the dirt. the blood pooling around your gingerness makes it look like an awkward phoenix of some sort.
The blind man walks by....his blind eyes glow brightly, as he picks up the pieces of the mirror and says: "He should have been more generous". Then walks away.
the end.
veritas
08-22-2014, 11:28 AM
As i am not sure if i can die as i have entered a portal to begin with....
A) I shall fight and protect
you enact the walri chain. Brilliant idea, you are amazed not that it worked but that you thought of it, as when you were a human, you were not actually that bright or original, at any rate the new island was beautiful. THE ROCKS were all so smooth and luxurious, and you could look into the tide (which pulled in as well somehow) and it was FULL OF fish that could not escape. This new island would be your herds home you have saved them! The elder's warning of the monster still lingered deep in your mind. No one asked about the monster anymore as they were all eating and flopping now. Do you
A: let the monster idea go, life is good the herd is saved
B: Let the herd know that they need to remain vigilant and we should search the island
Paradox
08-22-2014, 11:35 AM
you enact the walri chain. Brilliant idea, you are amazed not that it worked but that you thought of it, as when you were a human, you were not actually that bright or original, at any rate the new island was beautiful. THE ROCKS were all so smooth and luxurious, and you could look into the tide (which pulled in as well somehow) and it was FULL OF fish that could not escape. This new island would be your herds home you have saved them! The elder's warning of the monster still lingered deep in your mind. No one asked about the monster anymore as they were all eating and flopping now. Do you
A: let the monster idea go, life is good the herd is saved
B: Let the herd know that they need to remain vigilant and we should search the island
Option B gotta remain vigilant, team searches.
veritas
08-22-2014, 11:37 AM
lmao @ the hipster library shit.
But ye something feels strange and that shit I was told about the limo in my dream yesterday.. Got to take extra care of my daughter just in case and hope I make the right choice.
B) I tell my daughter to come over.
you call her to come to you but it is to late. The limo door opens and a skinny guy runs at her with some sort of weapon and savagely obliterates her skull. A piece of her innocent brain lands near your feet. something clicks. you are running and you pounce you begin punching and punching, all of a sudden glass breaks behind you and it snaps you out of your fury. You turn to look and the attacker runs back to the limo. you thought you saw an old man standing behind a chubby ginger kid, but he was gone, and the ginger kid is bleeding through his ICP shirt. he falls down. you look around and realize that your daughter is dead, and who will believe your story. you call the police and are promptly arrested.
you are in jail. It sucks. time passes and passes and yet doesn't pass all you can think about is your daughter and wanting to be with her, and not understanding, and thinking about the dream she had had, and how there were two of her and how you had been an insomniac, and that damn librarian what was that about anyway!? you calmly hang yourself with your bedsheet....
blackness.
.......
THE LIBRARY. The librarian is looking at you. He is fearsome. He shows you the book. Your name is not in it. your daughters is.
"Choices" the librarian says, some are made for you, some you make. I hold in my hand a key. If you use it, you can return to your life before any of this happened. you will not be dead, your daughter will be alive do you:
A: use the key
B: do not use the key
Certain
08-22-2014, 11:43 AM
This thread can come full circle only when Diode allows The Mind Assassin to ask him a question.
veritas
08-22-2014, 11:47 AM
I choose B, books and lightsabers.
your friend teleports. You are left alone in the library. the book has your name in it. The pen sits inside your battle armor. The key around your neck. The sword feels good in your hands, you swing it a few times and it really feels good. the library is essentially a human representation of all knowledge of everything. What is most important is that you see the nature of choice, the morality of it. What is most important is the heart of the man's choice to choose, not the choice itself. You are amazed.
your "time" is spent ironing out the rifts which your friend had told you about. There exists one of which troubles you greatly, there is a man who became a walrus. He somehow managed to find a secret portal, and he is unnkowningly on a collision course to meet up with a man who is no longer a man, and is one of 3 people on the planet earth who ingested a substance that caused the rift to begin with as it is the literal manifestation of an out of place artifact. The man has crashed a plane into the island and is trapped, that is the good news, the man will kill the entire herd of walri, not only harming the innocent but also never letting the man become a man again. you understand that your "job" is to redeem the innocent and to judge the guilty. In the meantime you realize that you are now FINALLY able to do a perfect Morgan Freeman impression and turn yourself into a blind black man and start talking like him. You use this blind man to connect 4 worlds by using a useless ginger's death to stop a man from dying only to die and have the chance not to because he should have never had to, but still chose to do so. that mission was an amazing success. You enjoyed it. Now then the Walt the Walrus versus LArs the monster..... do you:
A: interfere with the walrus verse monster
B: let it play out as it will, things will be ok.
Batty
08-22-2014, 12:01 PM
A: interfere with the walrus verse monster
B: let it play out as it will, things will be ok.
B.
Baron da gawdgoat
This thread should be hof'd
Thanks for the story V
veritas
08-22-2014, 01:16 PM
This thread should be hof'd
Thanks for the story V
repped. Thank you for playing and enjoying. Also for being a good sport about the ginger and icp stuff....no hate!
veritas
08-22-2014, 02:34 PM
Option B gotta remain vigilant, team searches.
you lead the herd. there are roughly 40 of you. women and children walri in tow. it has grown dark. You are feeling afraid. You see the shape of a man...glowing pink...he is wearing a furry lumberjack hat. his eyes turn towards you and he laughs.
HE screams out: "I HAVE BECOME LEGION, WE ARE MANY....I DIED IN TEH PLANE CRASH BUT HERE I AM.....WE ARE TRAPPED HERE BY THE WATER.....PERHAPS WE WILL ESCAPE THIS WATERY PRISON BY BUILDING A BRIDGE OUT YOUR FLOATING FATTY SKIN!!!!!"
you are legitimately concerned.
do you:
A: tell him to fight you and leave your herd alone
B: scream to the herd to run
Ghost1
08-22-2014, 03:14 PM
Lars vs walsaii
LOL. Bravo.
Paradox
08-22-2014, 08:24 PM
you lead the herd. there are roughly 40 of you. women and children walri in tow. it has grown dark. You are feeling afraid. You see the shape of a man...glowing pink...he is wearing a furry lumberjack hat. his eyes turn towards you and he laughs.
HE screams out: "I HAVE BECOME LEGION, WE ARE MANY....I DIED IN TEH PLANE CRASH BUT HERE I AM.....WE ARE TRAPPED HERE BY THE WATER.....PERHAPS WE WILL ESCAPE THIS WATERY PRISON BY BUILDING A BRIDGE OUT YOUR FLOATING FATTY SKIN!!!!!"
you are legitimately concerned.
do you:
A: tell him to fight you and leave your herd alone
B: scream to the herd to run
I dont fight zombie chuck norris i only have flippers, there may be more of him, we couldnt sustain many casualties without it being worth it
Option B
veritas
08-22-2014, 09:18 PM
]Fool!" He cries out. "They will perish all the same and now it is just you verse I and us and we and me!!! Mwhaahahahahahahaha"
In a flash he is in you. He mind chops your mustache off. The pain is indescribable. He rips out your tusks and I'm pales you.
the pain succumbs to the darkness.....
..........
The librarian reaches down and pets you. *you failed...although you should have expected little less for hurrying the author and then having the nerve to mix up the Guardian with author....i should bring the sword but the author had me devise a prison for you. You will be a legend *walt* you will hang on the authors wall......walt the wobbly walrus*
veritas
08-22-2014, 09:18 PM
http://i57.tinypic.com/14v0js0.jpg
The end.
Paradox
08-22-2014, 09:22 PM
HAHAHAHA
I GOT A PAINTING.
RIP WALSAII
Ghost1
08-22-2014, 09:23 PM
The end?
Ghost1
08-22-2014, 09:23 PM
Fuckin dead@walsaii painting
Paradox
08-22-2014, 09:27 PM
Name change to Walsaii please mods El Pancake Paradigm namix
veritas
08-22-2014, 09:33 PM
The end?
Yes. The name of the painting is *remember the future*
Infer what you will.....
As for the story....there is still a few more things to tie up.
Objective
08-23-2014, 06:24 AM
"Choices" the librarian says, some are made for you, some you make. I hold in my hand a key. If you use it, you can return to your life before any of this happened. you will not be dead, your daughter will be alive do you:
A: use the key
B: do not use the key
If some choices are made for me, and some I can make... Then fuck it. A, I use the key. She did not deserve to go like that.
veritas
08-23-2014, 12:04 PM
If some choices are made for me, and some I can make... Then fuck it. A, I use the key. She did not deserve to go like that.
The librarian frowns. *you have chosen foolishly. Her name was written. If you would have sacrificed yourself to maintain her name you would have been redeemed. Now you seal your fate*.
The sword....
the fire of it....
you wake up.....how long had I been sleeping?
You go upstairs to check on your daughter. She is sleeping peacefully.
you go in the closet....she also is sleeping peacefully.
The end
veritas
08-23-2014, 12:13 PM
Baron da gawdgoat
You sit back. You have cleared up the rifts....you have done good work. A portal opens behind you. there are stairs leading up inside it. You smile.
You take out the pen and begin to write
*I'm going to tell you something that you have already started piecing together....*
You finish the letter. Leave the key the pen the sword and the book. You see your name glowing. You look and suddenly see your friends name glowing. Your smile become bigger. You turn and walk up the stairs dissapearing.
your friend walks up to the book....his name is glowing. He picks up the sword and sees his reflection
*wow....i have hair!*
The end.
Thank you to all who participated. I pray you enjoy it and go back and read it and see if you can see all that has been done here.
VERITAS.
Ghost1
08-23-2014, 12:30 PM
Legit plan to read back thru all stories now. This was dope.
veritas
08-23-2014, 12:32 PM
Legit plan to read back thru all stories now. This was dope.
Thanks anthony. You helped make it great buddy.
Certain
08-23-2014, 12:33 PM
Are all the stories wrapped up?
veritas
08-23-2014, 12:35 PM
Yes. Expect lars but he is trapped. We just missed out on his plane crash and journey into sith lord status.
Let you imagine that.
Wish you would of played certain
Objective
08-24-2014, 08:36 PM
The end
A fake existence is better than nothing at all I guess. When brought back in time I'm most likely oblivious to the questions I had to choose on anyways and my life is great. That is if I'm not stuck in a loop though. I'm not stuck in a loop, I'm I? :/
Ghost1
08-24-2014, 09:01 PM
Lmao.....i think u r boss
Thats why u have one daughter in bed and one in closet.......
veritas
08-24-2014, 09:04 PM
A fake existence is better than nothing at all I guess. When brought back in time I'm most likely oblivious to the questions I had to choose on anyways and my life is great. That is if I'm not stuck in a loop though. I'm not stuck in a loop, I'm I? :/
the correct play would have been to take the sword so that your daughter would have moved on. You chose to forgo that, which had roots in your own self-preservation, even though you would say it was for her. your lukewarmness damned you to a loop....the question is.....does your daughter know this as well?
duh duh duhhhhhhh......
I love you though, thanks for playing.
veritas
08-24-2014, 09:05 PM
Lmao.....i think u r boss
Thats why u have one daughter in bed and one in closet.......
will you call me now? We have much to discuss.
Objective
08-25-2014, 12:24 AM
the correct play would have been to take the sword so that your daughter would have moved on. You chose to forgo that, which had roots in your own self-preservation, even though you would say it was for her. your lukewarmness damned you to a loop....the question is.....does your daughter know this as well?
Survival instinct -> Ego -> What drives us to begin with. If ego didn't drive us everyone would adopt as we're over populated and there's no need to make your own children.
And in the situation you portray my actions would be purely based on survival, specially when panic and distress is a huge part of it. The correct play would be like you say, but I played this how I think I would have played my cards. Humans are flawed and we take care of our own in the best way we can, in this case this is what I think I would have done. Reason and logic does not go hand in hand with panic and distress. If my daughter knew she probably wouldn't understand the whole picture due to her age, but the ego and emotional connection I have with her and what she has to me would still make her understand my decision.
Humans are flawed V and all of our actions are based on ego, this isn't new and nothing will ever change that. Even in this loop of misfortune it's still built on our definition of love and emotional connection and I get to guard that for eternity. I'm satisfied with my choice.
Batty
08-25-2014, 09:16 AM
I was actually thinking that the "fake daughter" and the reference to being "in the closet" would've been a different brand of metaphors somewhere down the road. I was waiting for it (yes trollmo)
Well done on this tho, V. You put in some work, turn around time was crazy.
veritas
08-25-2014, 11:49 AM
Survival instinct -> Ego -> What drives us to begin with. If ego didn't drive us everyone would adopt as we're over populated and there's no need to make your own children.
And in the situation you portray my actions would be purely based on survival, specially when panic and distress is a huge part of it. The correct play would be like you say, but I played this how I think I would have played my cards. Humans are flawed and we take care of our own in the best way we can, in this case this is what I think I would have done. Reason and logic does not go hand in hand with panic and distress. If my daughter knew she probably wouldn't understand the whole picture due to her age, but the ego and emotional connection I have with her and what she has to me would still make her understand my decision.
Humans are flawed V and all of our actions are based on ego, this isn't new and nothing will ever change that. Even in this loop of misfortune it's still built on our definition of love and emotional connection and I get to guard that for eternity. I'm satisfied with my choice.
Well said. This story is a human attempt at multidimensional understanding. You are looking at love in very temporal and corporeal nomenclatures. All good bro. Thanks for playing!
veritas
08-25-2014, 12:14 PM
I was actually thinking that the "fake daughter" and the reference to being "in the closet" would've been a different brand of metaphors somewhere down the road. I was waiting for it (yes trollmo)
Well done on this tho, V. You put in some work, turn around time was crazy.
Nods.
This caught snarf touching his pink thing for sure old friend.
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