Audio: The Highschool Dropout.
 

Still needs some tweaks and sound effects. Hopefully this one uploaded better. ~shruggs~

http://m.soundcloud.com/urbangenocid...school-dropout

Lemme know maine!

for pc users. try this link

http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks

iono?

None of those links work for me...the first one show the title but couldn't play it, the second just have a blank page ?

hmmm i tried both geno. none worked??

Lyrics are above avarage as far as the meaning of what your saying goes.
Most people just starting out are so focused on riding a beat correctly their content lacks.

Your flow is good in the sense your able to keep a steady pace.....but in my opinion it adds some spice if you can switch it up and flip words around. Idk....then again maybe you just got a really laid back style. I'd just like you to variate your pace.

Each verse was like the same sound...same pace....cohesive but bland.

Your enounciation needs a tad bit of work....but I'd still rate it above the avarage kat starting out.

The beat was ok. I'm really picky on that subject so its w/e.

You never sounded completely out of place in regards to the beat....that's good.


I'm not sure if you can double time at all....but it's be interesting to hear how you'd do with that.

If you go to his other audio in the open mic section and click sounds....it'll take you to this song. How I did it...cuz this link promoted me to sign in and I don't even have an account.

Btw...sound quality was better.


Still would like to know how your doing this through a phone.

ya this was pretty dope. i could vibe to this geno. i liked it. you doin it bro

my one critique, you should go with the 16 lines , then chorus , 16 lines, chorus formula brah

it breaks it up and keeps it fresh. good stuff man

Sounds good! nice flow. Some parts seemed a little dull(Needs feeling) but nice word play.

upping this. just heard it now, couldn't get it to work the first time

so dope man. so impressed by how well ur transitioning from text to audio so smoothly. writes a full track with 3-4 verses and a nice hook. fuckin awesome

ur voice is cool too and also great emotion behind this. man if u had better quality as far as ur mic/whatever it would be deadly

keeep these up.