Audio: The Highschool Dropout.

Geno · 08-28-2013, 07:19 PM

Still needs some tweaks and sound effects. Hopefully this one uploaded better. ~shruggs~

http://m.soundcloud.com/urbangenocid...school-dropout

Lemme know maine!

Geno · 08-28-2013, 07:51 PM

for pc users. try this link

http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks

iono?

Exis · 08-28-2013, 10:14 PM

None of those links work for me...the first one show the title but couldn't play it, the second just have a blank page ?

CopyPat · 08-29-2013, 01:03 AM

hmmm i tried both geno. none worked??

Natural · 08-29-2013, 02:21 AM

Lyrics are above avarage as far as the meaning of what your saying goes.
Most people just starting out are so focused on riding a beat correctly their content lacks.

Your flow is good in the sense your able to keep a steady pace.....but in my opinion it adds some spice if you can switch it up and flip words around. Idk....then again maybe you just got a really laid back style. I'd just like you to variate your pace.

Each verse was like the same sound...same pace....cohesive but bland.

Your enounciation needs a tad bit of work....but I'd still rate it above the avarage kat starting out.

The beat was ok. I'm really picky on that subject so its w/e.

You never sounded completely out of place in regards to the beat....that's good.

I'm not sure if you can double time at all....but it's be interesting to hear how you'd do with that.

Natural · 08-29-2013, 02:27 AM

If you go to his other audio in the open mic section and click sounds....it'll take you to this song. How I did it...cuz this link promoted me to sign in and I don't even have an account.

Btw...sound quality was better.

Still would like to know how your doing this through a phone.

Mike Wrecka · 08-30-2013, 10:33 AM

ya this was pretty dope. i could vibe to this geno. i liked it. you doin it bro

my one critique, you should go with the 16 lines , then chorus , 16 lines, chorus formula brah

it breaks it up and keeps it fresh. good stuff man

Scripter · 08-30-2013, 11:07 AM

Sounds good! nice flow. Some parts seemed a little dull(Needs feeling) but nice word play.

CopyPat · 09-23-2013, 12:26 AM

upping this. just heard it now, couldn't get it to work the first time

so dope man. so impressed by how well ur transitioning from text to audio so smoothly. writes a full track with 3-4 verses and a nice hook. fuckin awesome

ur voice is cool too and also great emotion behind this. man if u had better quality as far as ur mic/whatever it would be deadly

keeep these up.

08-28-2013, 07:19 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Audio: The Highschool Dropout. Still needs some tweaks and sound effects. Hopefully this one uploaded better. ~shruggs~ http://m.soundcloud.com/urbangenocid...school-dropout Lemme know maine! __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-28-2013, 07:51 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	for pc users. try this link http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks iono? __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-29-2013, 01:03 AM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	hmmm i tried both geno. none worked?? __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

08-29-2013, 02:21 AM	#5
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 691 Rep Power: 0	Lyrics are above avarage as far as the meaning of what your saying goes. Most people just starting out are so focused on riding a beat correctly their content lacks. Your flow is good in the sense your able to keep a steady pace.....but in my opinion it adds some spice if you can switch it up and flip words around. Idk....then again maybe you just got a really laid back style. I'd just like you to variate your pace. Each verse was like the same sound...same pace....cohesive but bland. Your enounciation needs a tad bit of work....but I'd still rate it above the avarage kat starting out. The beat was ok. I'm really picky on that subject so its w/e. You never sounded completely out of place in regards to the beat....that's good. I'm not sure if you can double time at all....but it's be interesting to hear how you'd do with that. Last edited by Natural; 08-29-2013 at 02:25 AM.

08-30-2013, 10:33 AM	#7
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,523 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	ya this was pretty dope. i could vibe to this geno. i liked it. you doin it bro my one critique, you should go with the 16 lines , then chorus , 16 lines, chorus formula brah it breaks it up and keeps it fresh. good stuff man __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

08-28-2013, 10:14 PM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	None of those links work for me...the first one show the title but couldn't play it, the second just have a blank page ?

08-29-2013, 02:27 AM	#6
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 691 Rep Power: 0	If you go to his other audio in the open mic section and click sounds....it'll take you to this song. How I did it...cuz this link promoted me to sign in and I don't even have an account. Btw...sound quality was better. Still would like to know how your doing this through a phone.

08-30-2013, 11:07 AM	#8
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09-23-2013, 12:26 AM	#9
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	upping this. just heard it now, couldn't get it to work the first time so dope man. so impressed by how well ur transitioning from text to audio so smoothly. writes a full track with 3-4 verses and a nice hook. fuckin awesome ur voice is cool too and also great emotion behind this. man if u had better quality as far as ur mic/whatever it would be deadly keeep these up. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.