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CopyPat 04-01-2013 03:25 PM

Still Legit
 
Been a little while so its probly gonna take a bit
Livin in denial, but I’m always on some crazy shit
All day with the greatest hits, droppin classic oldies
The microphone can stay legit when CopyPat is holding
Automatic flowing like I pumped through ya heart
Ya ventricles exploding when I kung-fu these bars
Straight karate kickin rhymes make ya body glisten
People gettin wet expect to take it while they listen
Bomb the mic suddenly, quantified pummeling
Premeditated punishment for all the guys wondering
Volatile summaries that blast from the page
All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate
It’s just a matter of taste, so let me platter this plate
Before I splatter your face and spit some hazardous waste
I got the canister aimed and the target acquired
So rappers get slain when they started a cypher

Wise Wiggles 04-03-2013 02:13 AM

cool Lil drop. welcome to the board man. Glad u finally made it..

zygote 04-03-2013 09:35 AM

I love the aggressive last half. Your quantified pummeling, volatile summaries couplet deserves 2X! as its annotation.

Vulgar 04-05-2013 09:23 PM

Dope.

dead man 04-06-2013 12:14 PM

i can imagine you in a park or a schoolyard spittin these in the middle of a cypher crowd and everybody just be vibing with it, and after your 16 comes the next dude.

i dont think this was some shit that would shut the cypher down but it was crisp and fresh flow coupled with some dope traditional hip hop rhyme-ology. straight bars.

Volatile summaries that blast from the page
All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate

word

thanks man


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Ghost1 04-07-2013 10:29 PM

Pat the gawd.

Nice to see u droppin still. I shouod follow suit....soon

Shit was vintage pat....crisp multies from start to finish an u never really get overly elaborate u just rock ur schemes an keep it lowkey, last 8 lines eere nasty def started to heat up.

Inno 04-08-2013 12:06 AM

this was some smooth shit man..cool drop for so little content. word up

Just Write 04-11-2013 07:38 PM

ok, this was nice my friend, real smooth chill laid back vibe. do you freestyle your shit becaus eI agree with dead man, kinda had a cypher-esque feel to it. definitely have a nice grasp on your scheme and the way you thread words together. I always enjoy when I'm reading something and my head starts to bob-thanks for that. and thanks for reading my piece, i'll look for more of your stuff


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