Still Legit

CopyPat · 04-01-2013, 03:25 PM

Been a little while so its probly gonna take a bit
Livin in denial, but I’m always on some crazy shit
All day with the greatest hits, droppin classic oldies
The microphone can stay legit when CopyPat is holding
Automatic flowing like I pumped through ya heart
Ya ventricles exploding when I kung-fu these bars
Straight karate kickin rhymes make ya body glisten
People gettin wet expect to take it while they listen
Bomb the mic suddenly, quantified pummeling
Premeditated punishment for all the guys wondering
Volatile summaries that blast from the page
All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate
It’s just a matter of taste, so let me platter this plate
Before I splatter your face and spit some hazardous waste
I got the canister aimed and the target acquired
So rappers get slain when they started a cypher

Wise Wiggles · 04-03-2013, 02:13 AM

cool Lil drop. welcome to the board man. Glad u finally made it..

zygote · 04-03-2013, 09:35 AM

I love the aggressive last half. Your quantified pummeling, volatile summaries couplet deserves 2X! as its annotation.

Vulgar · 04-05-2013, 09:23 PM

Dope.

dead man · 04-06-2013, 12:14 PM

i can imagine you in a park or a schoolyard spittin these in the middle of a cypher crowd and everybody just be vibing with it, and after your 16 comes the next dude.

i dont think this was some shit that would shut the cypher down but it was crisp and fresh flow coupled with some dope traditional hip hop rhyme-ology. straight bars.

Volatile summaries that blast from the page
All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate

word

thanks man

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Ghost1 · 04-07-2013, 10:29 PM

Pat the gawd.

Nice to see u droppin still. I shouod follow suit....soon

Shit was vintage pat....crisp multies from start to finish an u never really get overly elaborate u just rock ur schemes an keep it lowkey, last 8 lines eere nasty def started to heat up.

Inno · 04-08-2013, 12:06 AM

this was some smooth shit man..cool drop for so little content. word up

Just Write · 04-11-2013, 07:38 PM

ok, this was nice my friend, real smooth chill laid back vibe. do you freestyle your shit becaus eI agree with dead man, kinda had a cypher-esque feel to it. definitely have a nice grasp on your scheme and the way you thread words together. I always enjoy when I'm reading something and my head starts to bob-thanks for that. and thanks for reading my piece, i'll look for more of your stuff

04-01-2013, 03:25 PM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	Still Legit Been a little while so its probly gonna take a bit Livin in denial, but I’m always on some crazy shit All day with the greatest hits, droppin classic oldies The microphone can stay legit when CopyPat is holding Automatic flowing like I pumped through ya heart Ya ventricles exploding when I kung-fu these bars Straight karate kickin rhymes make ya body glisten People gettin wet expect to take it while they listen Bomb the mic suddenly, quantified pummeling Premeditated punishment for all the guys wondering Volatile summaries that blast from the page All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate It’s just a matter of taste, so let me platter this plate Before I splatter your face and spit some hazardous waste I got the canister aimed and the target acquired So rappers get slain when they started a cypher

04-03-2013, 02:13 AM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	cool Lil drop. welcome to the board man. Glad u finally made it.. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

04-06-2013, 12:14 PM	#5
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,467 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	i can imagine you in a park or a schoolyard spittin these in the middle of a cypher crowd and everybody just be vibing with it, and after your 16 comes the next dude. i dont think this was some shit that would shut the cypher down but it was crisp and fresh flow coupled with some dope traditional hip hop rhyme-ology. straight bars. Volatile summaries that blast from the page All the while stomaching cause rappers get ate word thanks man 1 __________________ Zack Wicks for president

04-03-2013, 09:35 AM	#3
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 502 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737825	I love the aggressive last half. Your quantified pummeling, volatile summaries couplet deserves 2X! as its annotation.

04-05-2013, 09:23 PM	#4
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Dope.

04-08-2013, 12:06 AM	#7
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	this was some smooth shit man..cool drop for so little content. word up

04-11-2013, 07:38 PM	#8
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997613	ok, this was nice my friend, real smooth chill laid back vibe. do you freestyle your shit becaus eI agree with dead man, kinda had a cypher-esque feel to it. definitely have a nice grasp on your scheme and the way you thread words together. I always enjoy when I'm reading something and my head starts to bob-thanks for that. and thanks for reading my piece, i'll look for more of your stuff