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07-26-2013, 09:39 PM
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blueprint to success
Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Raleigh, NC
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I shine.. diamond in the light... they fold under pressure
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07-26-2013, 10:28 PM
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blueprint to success
Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Raleigh, NC
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Hype's high.. he's rather weak this raising the bar pass ya benchmark of success
Dope hit .. sweep through your block killing this herb lay'em the rest.. Got to address ya infatuation with man.. suspect for dickriding? Nah.. a real friend to the cock Giving his worth is nothing to take... bumin for change tho his efforts a lot Ill son this fool.. he mad cause years later it was just to call him a bastard This hobby of interest i crafted im one up every phase of the game youll master Tainted embarrassed..lost his seat at the top thinking beat a newbie put me back in the saddle Kick ya off your high horse into deep water ill have you Serving this addict they read and feel it you claimin they sayin im sick' To you and ya click wish a nigga would fuck a dare Dope 's the shit
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I shine.. diamond in the light... they fold under pressure
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07-26-2013, 11:25 PM
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Sergeant Slaughter
Join Date: Mar 1986
Posts: 1,913
Battle Record: 13-4
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Dope aka Trevone Daniels
I've fired many guns, so my aim aint as bad as you'd hope And I would never indulge in heroin, ironically id shoot the fuck outta Dope Lay this faggot down easy with a guage on the spot I aint no Zimmerman, but I'll kill Tre dead, while his whole neighborhood watch I'll trade blows wit any dude, fighting put me ina different zone If Dope trade blows with a dude, he'd drop to his knees wayyy before fists are thrown I stay on top of bitches, they finish but I stay hittin If Dope is on a bitch, shes being searched, cuffed, and on her way to a state prison Im grimey, and'll rob any faggot just offa couple of shots I'll drink an entire bottle of Jack Daniels, when I do that and take all the money he got done Last edited by SiK; 07-26-2013 at 11:37 PM. |
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07-26-2013, 11:30 PM
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Sergeant Slaughter
Join Date: Mar 1986
Posts: 1,913
Battle Record: 13-4
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http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=9164
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7314 Get your links in @Dope Last edited by SiK; 07-26-2013 at 11:48 PM. |
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07-27-2013, 09:32 AM
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Sergeant Slaughter
Join Date: Mar 1986
Posts: 1,913
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07-27-2013, 11:04 AM
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Super Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 7,411
Battle Record: 70-25
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - Battle Arena
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Sik's first two were cool, dope didn't have one punch, statements don't win battles
I got Sik
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07-27-2013, 12:55 PM
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Join Date: May 2013
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Vote sik he merked that shit had like 4 hot schemes to none
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07-28-2013, 04:04 PM
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WOW
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,524
Battle Record: 29-25
Champed - Writing Challenge League I
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vote - sik
had some good nameplays in there dope you have to use some wordplay and metaphors na mean. it was too statementish
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07-28-2013, 04:14 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
Posts: 11,592
Battle Record: 56-21
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - The Ultimate Writer
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Hype's high.. he's rather weak this raising the bar pass ya benchmark of success
Dope hit .. sweep through your block killing this herb lay'em the rest.. came off as really statementish... just saying 'ima kill u' isnt really that effective Got to address ya infatuation with man.. suspect for dickriding? Nah.. a real friend to the cock Giving his worth is nothing to take... bumin for change tho his efforts a lot pretty scattered, just a bunch of non specific disses Ill son this fool.. he mad cause years later it was just to call him a bastard This hobby of interest i crafted im one up every phase of the game youll master not even sure what this means... wording killed it Tainted embarrassed..lost his seat at the top thinking beat a newbie put me back in the saddle Kick ya off your high horse into deep water ill have you Serving this addict they read and feel it you claimin they sayin im sick' To you and ya click wish a nigga would fuck a dare Dope 's the shit basically you just threw a bunch of statementy disses out as fast as you could... less is more would help you I've fired many guns, so my aim aint as bad as you'd hope And I would never indulge in heroin, ironically id shoot the fuck outta Dope alright Lay this faggot down easy with a guage on the spot I aint no Zimmerman, but I'll kill Tre dead, while his whole neighborhood watch okay, one of the better zimmerman flips for sure I'll trade blows wit any dude, fighting put me ina different zone If Dope trade blows with a dude, he'd drop to his knees wayyy before fists are thrown you know this is played I stay on top of bitches, they finish but I stay hittin If Dope is on a bitch, shes being searched, cuffed, and on her way to a state prison nice Im grimey, and'll rob any faggot just offa couple of shots I'll drink an entire bottle of Jack Daniels, when I do that and take all the money he got pretty obvious sik was a lot more consistent, only real miss was the blows line dope was just kind of aggressively typing... read some good battles and get a feel for it... summer classic and NBL are good places to start |
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