Sharp Nine (0-1) vs. bleak (0-1) SHARP NINE WINS

Sharp · 02-01-2013, 04:55 PM

House rules
lines - 10
Due soon

bleak · 02-01-2013, 04:57 PM

chuh I'll drop before the night ends

Sharp · 02-01-2013, 05:01 PM

A

cool, me too

bleak · 02-01-2013, 05:43 PM

If my goons're lurkin, this dude'll get rattled quick.
When I sent these bombs at S9, I quickly sunk his battleship
Gotta squad of hoods, who crack 9's till their wrists ache.
While your team consists of a closet dweller named Split 8
I'll beat you with a quick key, with not an effort exerted.
Namix can't tell you how to beat ME in these lessons you're learning.
You wanted someone your level? But you knew you're dead.
My league's sign ups closed when you viewed the thread.
hopped on namix quick, cause he's teaching some rules for landing.
But truly, he thought Cross-Training was a school for trannies.
@Sharp Nine

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Sharp · 02-01-2013, 05:54 PM

Dear Bleak aka Geronahoe aka bleak again

Quote:

Originally Posted by bleak, back on netcees in a thread he made just to say this

Username
omg that one line where you called joe metts fat in your pic battle was amazing

(paraphrased)

make up ya mind dude, pick a title to define you
Ironic...
You can't get behind a Username, but you'd let him get behind you
I'll set the club scene on fire w/ a peformance 'a skill
He tried that^, n people were fleeing like that joint in brazil
Your face looks like a football. I'm Flacco in the pocket, son
I get first downs baby... look like you got the genes to have one
You a joke, bro. Real talk, it's no secret
Think you're nice? Nah, but you should try biting like he did
Guy's got a big head, so I'll smite this clown
No one netcee's future was bleak til the site went down

Obey · 02-03-2013, 12:24 AM

every time I read bleak lately its good your s9 battleship punch was the strongest of your lines imo. I havent really read much from sharp but dude got skills, his username opener was cool too. my vote though goes to sharp his brazil and nice punches stood out over bleaks cross training and namix punches. cool battle though guys rtf

vote - sharp nine

Jah Homie · 02-03-2013, 05:03 PM

Bleak -- Bars were consistent. Rhymes were tight. Felt good about the schemes. Flowed really well. The opening bars were probably the weakest, but you finished strong. Some of the rhymes were a bit awkward but overall a great performance.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Line of the Night

hopped on namix quick, cause he's teaching some rules for landing.
But truly, he thought Cross-Training was a school for trannies.

S9 -- The scheme was off. Not a big fan of sports imagery especially ones that aren't relevant. The wordplay could use some work. A couple bars were a bit stretched. Still, pretty good overall performance.

I'm taking Bleak.

Defiant · 02-03-2013, 05:20 PM

links @Sharp Nine @bleak

Sharp · 02-03-2013, 11:02 PM

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...ll=1#post10582

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...ull=1#post9091

Mr.Sinister · 02-04-2013, 08:54 AM

Bleak started off nice but his verse kinda fell off to me... I liked the Cross training line as your closer tho... While Sharp's verse never really fell off, it was pretty consistent all thru and I liked that first downs line even tho it could have been worded a little better... Good battle yall

Vote-Sharp Nine

RPK · 02-04-2013, 12:24 PM

Bleak
If my goons're lurkin, this dude'll get rattled quick.
When I sent these bombs at S9, I quickly sunk his battleship
Ok, but it could have hit harder with better wording
Gotta squad of hoods, who crack 9's till their wrists ache.
While your team consists of a closet dweller named Split 8
Ok
I'll beat you with a quick key, with not an effort exerted.
Namix can't tell you how to beat ME in these lessons you're learning.
Meh..
You wanted someone your level? But you knew you're dead.
My league's sign ups closed when you viewed the thread.
Meh..
hopped on namix quick, cause he's teaching some rules for landing.
But truly, he thought Cross-Training was a school for trannies.
Ok

bleak, you appear to have decent concepts but ur wording makes many of your punches come off as statementish. If you changed that, more of ur punches would hit.

Sharp Nine
make up ya mind dude, pick a title to define you
Ironic...
You can't get behind a Username, but you'd let him get behind you
Decent
I'll set the club scene on fire w/ a peformance 'a skill
He tried that^, n people were fleeing like that joint in brazil
Cool concept
Your face looks like a football. I'm Flacco in the pocket, son
I get first downs baby... look like you got the genes to have one
Decent
You a joke, bro. Real talk, it's no secret
Think you're nice? Nah, but you should try biting like he did
Don't know Nice, but the idea is okay
Guy's got a big head, so I'll smite this clown
No one netcee's future was bleak til the site went down
Wording was weird and really hurt this punch...

S9, you came decently consistent. Your wording hurt you as well, but it looks as though it could have been a typo.

Overall, I have to give this to S9. He came more consistently, and it really helped him gain the edge in the battle.

Defiant · 02-07-2013, 03:13 AM

3-1 to sharp

upping

SiK · 02-07-2013, 08:01 PM

Bleak....You came alright i mean your concepts were nice. but your wording didnt have much impact....The battlship was your best attempt to me but 'sinking his battleship' isnt really hard imo

Sharp was consistent imo....Getting WAY better with his bars....The opener was decent made me laugh first downs was pretty dope wording was a bit off....overall really decent verse bro...keep at it cause your goina be a threat

V/Sharp

King Ra. · 02-08-2013, 09:10 PM

Bleak, wasn't really feeling your verse too much punch wise. They weren't bad, they weren't good. They were decent. If this was a key then it's pretty obvious. But either way, you could have hit much harder with them. The two namix references loses some fire, but the last one you used in your closer was better than the one two bars before. I wasn't feeling the S9 line & the wording is what takes from it. Decent verse overall but could have been better. Sharp, pretty surprising. You are definitely improving. Your lines were short, but that didn't take from the effectiveness of your punches. The only line that lacked was your closer, but the others were solid. Opener was nice & liked the Flacco line.

MVGT: Sharp Nine.

Plot · 02-09-2013, 10:40 AM

I concur with RPKs breakdown... to some degree.
Anyway I think he took this battle.

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02-01-2013, 04:55 PM	#1
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Sharp Nine (0-1) vs. bleak (0-1) SHARP NINE WINS House rules lines - 10 Due soon

02-04-2013, 12:24 PM	#11
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 35	Bleak If my goons're lurkin, this dude'll get rattled quick. When I sent these bombs at S9, I quickly sunk his battleship Ok, but it could have hit harder with better wording Gotta squad of hoods, who crack 9's till their wrists ache. While your team consists of a closet dweller named Split 8 Ok I'll beat you with a quick key, with not an effort exerted. Namix can't tell you how to beat ME in these lessons you're learning. Meh.. You wanted someone your level? But you knew you're dead. My league's sign ups closed when you viewed the thread. Meh.. hopped on namix quick, cause he's teaching some rules for landing. But truly, he thought Cross-Training was a school for trannies. Ok bleak, you appear to have decent concepts but ur wording makes many of your punches come off as statementish. If you changed that, more of ur punches would hit. Sharp Nine make up ya mind dude, pick a title to define you Ironic... You can't get behind a Username, but you'd let him get behind you Decent I'll set the club scene on fire w/ a peformance 'a skill He tried that^, n people were fleeing like that joint in brazil Cool concept Your face looks like a football. I'm Flacco in the pocket, son I get first downs baby... look like you got the genes to have one Decent You a joke, bro. Real talk, it's no secret Think you're nice? Nah, but you should try biting like he did Don't know Nice, but the idea is okay Guy's got a big head, so I'll smite this clown No one netcee's future was bleak til the site went down Wording was weird and really hurt this punch... S9, you came decently consistent. Your wording hurt you as well, but it looks as though it could have been a typo. Overall, I have to give this to S9. He came more consistently, and it really helped him gain the edge in the battle. __________________

02-01-2013, 05:01 PM	#3
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	A cool, me too

02-03-2013, 12:24 AM	#6
Obey Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 718 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 1236365	every time I read bleak lately its good your s9 battleship punch was the strongest of your lines imo. I havent really read much from sharp but dude got skills, his username opener was cool too. my vote though goes to sharp his brazil and nice punches stood out over bleaks cross training and namix punches. cool battle though guys rtf vote - sharp nine

02-03-2013, 05:20 PM	#8
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	links @Sharp Nine @bleak

02-03-2013, 11:02 PM	#9
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...ll=1#post10582 http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...ull=1#post9091

02-04-2013, 08:54 AM	#10
Mr.Sinister Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 58 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 35	Bleak started off nice but his verse kinda fell off to me... I liked the Cross training line as your closer tho... While Sharp's verse never really fell off, it was pretty consistent all thru and I liked that first downs line even tho it could have been worded a little better... Good battle yall Vote-Sharp Nine

02-07-2013, 03:13 AM	#12
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	3-1 to sharp upping

02-07-2013, 08:01 PM	#13
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648785	Bleak....You came alright i mean your concepts were nice. but your wording didnt have much impact....The battlship was your best attempt to me but 'sinking his battleship' isnt really hard imo Sharp was consistent imo....Getting WAY better with his bars....The opener was decent made me laugh first downs was pretty dope wording was a bit off....overall really decent verse bro...keep at it cause your goina be a threat V/Sharp

02-08-2013, 09:10 PM	#14
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Bleak, wasn't really feeling your verse too much punch wise. They weren't bad, they weren't good. They were decent. If this was a key then it's pretty obvious. But either way, you could have hit much harder with them. The two namix references loses some fire, but the last one you used in your closer was better than the one two bars before. I wasn't feeling the S9 line & the wording is what takes from it. Decent verse overall but could have been better. Sharp, pretty surprising. You are definitely improving. Your lines were short, but that didn't take from the effectiveness of your punches. The only line that lacked was your closer, but the others were solid. Opener was nice & liked the Flacco line. MVGT: Sharp Nine.

02-09-2013, 10:40 AM	#15
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	I concur with RPKs breakdown... to some degree. Anyway I think he took this battle.