Phuck Yew Vs Storyteller - PHUCK WINS VIA KO

[KwaL!ty]

5 bars
due 24 hrs
good luck @Storyteller

[Spoken]

Chck

Wanna drop in 10 minutes@phuck yew

[KwaL!ty]

people listen to the sad shit you say & how you claim a vet! & insane w/ text
you dont alarm any one! posing as an Al Queda mother is the only time you could actually raise a threat
i ko my opponents call me a concious rapper! while you just have fun w/ the voices
you pussey wipe some of the moistness! if this comes down to Yew or Me, just know ur not one of the choices
this like loose pants in a battle we've felt him slack! you got no weight what belt is that?
maybe i can help him back, claim the vet status ! Store Front, w/ glass doors, open signs & a welcome mat
its like little league! cause ur the mother of bitchin cause you get no play
this an easy victory that i could Bank Teller w/ no chase, td or BOA
your a needy target! this battle like uncomfortable clothes because you dont Seem the' hardest
im going to make sure your left Behind bars for Taggin my name, like an Hibitual Graffitti Artist

@Storyteller

[Spoken]

What bothers most isn't your way around things, its being a straight forward bloke
But think that thru cause "a guy walks into a bar" <---- ur as bad as that joke.
I barely try when it comes to this- practicin' for my F.N. Run,
I no showed bags to to snag one off and put your fuckin body in one.
Dweeb prissy for what? My bars heavy hitters and are meant to hurt you,
A real thug? U a square who can't cut to chase so how u to fit in my circle.
If I'm giving you the element treatment then expect shit to be real,
Cause for sickness I'm an asshole cause in the type to serve CAKE, ILL.
I mean for phuck a sake Ur an element of surprise B?
Ya bars a resemblance...
...When they never show up or mad silent just like that league.

[Sharp]

Opened, can I get two links each please @Storyteller @Phuck Yew

[KwaL!ty]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=9617
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=9461 @Sharp Nine

[Lost in Thought]

i ko my opponents call me a concious rapper! while you just have fun w/ the voices
you pussey wipe some of the moistness! if this comes down to Yew or Me, just know ur not one of the choices


vs



Dweeb prissy for what? My bars heavy hitters and are meant to hurt you,
A real thug? U a square who can't cut to chase so how u to fit in my circle.


I think this one is kind of clear.


I had a tough choice on which couplet to quote on phucks verse, all were on point and had some good content. the one I chose I felt was a good punch and a witty nameplay.

story didn't have any real heavy hitters for me. wasn't horrible, but nothing seem like you put ot much effort into the depth of the lines.


Anyways good battle


Vote/ Phuck yew

[Decibel]

i ko my opponents call me a concious rapper! while you just have fun w/ the voices
you pussey wipe some of the moistness! if this comes down to Yew or Me, just know ur not one of the choices
its like little league! cause ur the mother of bitchin cause you get no play
this an easy victory that i could Bank Teller w/ no chase, td or BOA

vs

Dweeb prissy for what? My bars heavy hitters and are meant to hurt you,
A real thug? U a square who can't cut to chase so how u to fit in my circle.

Phuck was more consistent with decent jabs/punches while story seemed off at times. Phuck edged this out with just a little harder of an attempt

Vote: Phuck

[KwaL!ty]

uppin 2-0

[KwaL!ty]

1 more vote please maybe a mod or admin?

[Geno]

story still needs better wording in battles. work on the concepts some more

yew got this one fairly easy here. all around more solid

v-yew

[Sharp]

@Storyteller

gimme dem gimme dem links

[Spoken]

@Sharp Nine I lost already so fuck the links lol

[Sharp]

you bein a little bitch right now story

[Spoken]

Lol just kidding ill get them links


Give me ur aim and ill shoot the links thru there lol

[KwaL!ty]

@Sharp Nine close this please brother.

[KwaL!ty]

@Storyteller get your links fam.

[Sn00p]

well, phuck had his self nameplay. these are usually frowned upon, but it was executed well, so it was a quotable to me. also he had the bank teller line. solid verse all around. storyteller needs to work on the basics. try and make your concepts more clear-cut. leave out the unnecessary shit. focus on your concept for each bar and on bringing it across. also, never rhyme less than two syllables. u show some potential tho. so if u try some more, u can definitely elevate. but here, it wasn't enough unfortunately. but yeah. keep at it, dudes.
v/phuck

[Spoken]

@Sharp Nine I already voted on two other battles bruh.... We good close em' ill pm the links when I get to a comp

[Sharp]

i trust you cause i know you do vote, but phucks taking over BA duties