my verse against orc last week - Page 10

God Of War · 09-05-2013, 08:00 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy

Yes, it's obviously a play off of an Eminem line. Anyone familiar with Hip Hop knows that line, which is why turning it into something else makes it humorous. In writing it's known as parody. The fact that I'd have to break this type of thing down to someone who says they judge battles is sad, and you're either very out of touch with an element of writing or you're reaching so you can be a faggot. I'd say a little of both.

ahh so what your saying is in the middle of a verse i can just use a jay z line and when its mentioend i can claim it was parodying it? with no paradoy int he other bars the only parody line was that exact line? cool i got to remember that fucking biter

PancakeBrah · 09-05-2013, 08:01 PM

If it's obvious enough. Which it was, in that particular dull boy verse.

What's funny is Jay-Z does the exact same thing with Biggie lines and idiots online think it's biting.

C'mon GoW.

The Warden · 09-05-2013, 08:02 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy

Don't nobody.

OHH HOO HOOO

MAYBE UR NAME SHOULD BE THE WARDEN

GRAMMAR POLICE AKERT!!

WOO OOO WEE OOO u WWEEEKKOKOO

TOTALLY GOT ME DUDE.NAILED IT.

dull boy · 09-05-2013, 08:02 PM

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Originally Posted by God Of War

ahh so what your saying is in the middle of a verse i can just use a jay z line and when its mentioend i can claim it was parodying it? with no paradoy int he other bars the only parody line was that exact line? cool i got to remember that fucking biter

I hope you're trolling.

God Of War · 09-05-2013, 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

If it's obvious enough. Which it was, in that particular dull boy verse.

What's funny is Jay-Z does the exact same thing with Biggie lines and idiots online think it's biting.

C'mon GoW.

man if a newbie did that shit half the site would be treating him like gamble,, the fact its dull boy yall ride him and give him the benefit of the doubt

i dont care what there name is the shit was lame he used a bar he got off a famous dude and its all good because yall like dude rofl

doesnt take talent to use someone elses bar does it?

God Of War · 09-05-2013, 08:04 PM

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Originally Posted by The Warden

OHH HOO HOOO

MAYBE UR NAME SHOULD BE THE WARDEN

GRAMMAR POLICE AKERT!!

WOO OOO WEE OOO u WWEEEKKOKOO

TOTALLY GOT ME DUDE.NAILED IT.

you should write a verse, i can give u the first half just choose any jadakiss verse you want dont worry its a parody

PancakeBrah · 09-05-2013, 08:05 PM

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Originally Posted by God Of War

man if a newbie did that shit half the site would be treating him like gamble,, the fact its dull boy yall ride him and give him the benefit of the doubt

i dont care what there name is the shit was lame he used a bar he got off a famous dude and its all good because yall like dude rofl

doesnt take talent to use someone elses bar does it?

But he's built enough equity to know he's not biting. If Jay-Z's first verse did the homages to Biggie he did later in his career he'd get the same shit. Plus it fit the verse, and he played off it. /dickriding

Splitty Octavius · 09-05-2013, 08:06 PM

We as the OM swept this minor transgression under the rug and kept it under lock and key.. loose lips sink ships nomsayin?

PancakeBrah · 09-05-2013, 08:06 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy

Maybe, but I'd write one better than both of you. Bwaha is pretty humorous, though. Depends on what direction he took.

I'd be too self-serious. But I still think mine would be better.

God Of War · 09-05-2013, 08:07 PM

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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

But he's built enough equity to know he's not biting. If Jay-Z's first verse did the homages to Biggie he did later in his career he'd get the same shit. Plus it fit the verse, and he played off it. /dickriding

its also mid verse, no statement around it claiming it was clowning or he was doign a "parody" the fact he says it was a parody makes it ten times worse because the verse itself wasnt a parody. so in the midst of a reg verse u throw a bar in for parody? sounds weird as fuck to me

Splitty Octavius · 09-05-2013, 08:08 PM

ITS CALLED A REFERENCE

IM KING OF NY, GOW

PancakeBrah · 09-05-2013, 08:09 PM

Jay-Z did his homages mid-verse. The tract of logic you've chosen is confusing to me.

dull boy · 09-05-2013, 08:09 PM

Gow, you just seem sour now. Sound angry. All bitter about me. Hate me. Strong emotions coming out of you. Biting is taking credit for someone else's line. That shit was such an obvious flip, only a homosexual with a vendetta would think it was anything else.

God Of War · 09-05-2013, 08:09 PM

aye splitty i didnt know people used references int he middle of a verse and call it a aprody untils omeone else says it was a refernce skhdskhskhshdshd

The Warden · 09-05-2013, 08:09 PM

ALVIN KARPIS PARODIED THE ENTIRE ARCHIVE. DULLBOY WEARS BLACK LIPSTICK. PANCAKE LISTENS TO THE BEARS AN PUTS DICKS IN HIS MOUTH. BWHAHA IS A SENTINEL. EDDIES VERSE WAS DOPE. MOST BLACK PEOPLE MAKE ME UNHAPPY.

Splitty Octavius · 09-05-2013, 08:11 PM

A parody is a reference
If you don't understand what's being satired... it can't be funny...

Without the reference it wouldn't work as a line

PancakeBrah · 09-05-2013, 08:11 PM

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Originally Posted by The Warden

ALVIN KARPIS PARODIED THE ENTIRE ARCHIVE. DULLBOY WEARS BLACK LIPSTICK. PANCAKE LISTENS TO THE BEARS AN PUTS DICKS IN HIS MOUTH. BWHAHA IS A SENTINEL. EDDIES VERSE WAS DOPE. MOST BLACK PEOPLE MAKE ME UNHAPPY.

<3

Destroyer · 09-05-2013, 08:12 PM

post said bar
des will weigh in with the "right" answer
I'm inclined to disagree with gow immediately because of his dark knight-challenged world view
but I will reserve my opinion heretofore til I see the bar

BWHAHA · 09-05-2013, 08:12 PM

no. well i wont take dis awai from dul boi cuz he iz getting up dere in age...& well dis is wut he haz

dat he can rite old man novel better

lmao <3

pancake no.

jk idk what capable of tbh

but i do no dis

my lava vodka watermelon chakra..is not to be trifled wit lmao!!!!!!

God Of War · 09-05-2013, 08:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Destroyer

post said bar
des will weigh in with the "right" answer
I'm inclined to disagree with gow immediately because of his dark knight-challenged world view
but I will reserve my opinion heretofore til I see the bar

in the middle of dull boys verse he said im acid rap but i dont rap on acid and eminem said i aint acid rap but i rap on acid

@The Warden lets collabo here is my verse

[Jadakiss]
AH-HAHHHH! Uh, yeah, yo
I did it my way, lights off on the highway
Greek statues on both sides of the driveway
Word to the stamps on the diesel
The way these niggaz is lookin either they got cramps or they evil
One go we all go, D-boy fresh but hard dough
Cashmere and suede cargoes
On top of the beige Wallo's
45 government edition clippers, straight hollows

just ignore the jadakiss name its parodying

09-05-2013, 08:01 PM	#182
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	If it's obvious enough. Which it was, in that particular dull boy verse. What's funny is Jay-Z does the exact same thing with Biggie lines and idiots online think it's biting. C'mon GoW. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

09-05-2013, 08:06 PM	#188
Splitty Octavius Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 33 Rep Power: 35	We as the OM swept this minor transgression under the rug and kept it under lock and key.. loose lips sink ships nomsayin? __________________ I'll take the case

09-05-2013, 08:08 PM	#191
Splitty Octavius Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 33 Rep Power: 35	ITS CALLED A REFERENCE IM KING OF NY, GOW __________________ I'll take the case

09-05-2013, 08:09 PM	#192
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 13,052 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899406	Jay-Z did his homages mid-verse. The tract of logic you've chosen is confusing to me. __________________ If I ventured in the slipstream Between the viaducts of your dreams Where immobil steel rims crack And the ditch in the back road stop Could you find me?

09-05-2013, 08:11 PM	#196
Splitty Octavius Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 33 Rep Power: 35	A parody is a reference If you don't understand what's being satired... it can't be funny... Without the reference it wouldn't work as a line __________________ I'll take the case

09-05-2013, 08:09 PM	#193
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,075 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345600	Gow, you just seem sour now. Sound angry. All bitter about me. Hate me. Strong emotions coming out of you. Biting is taking credit for someone else's line. That shit was such an obvious flip, only a homosexual with a vendetta would think it was anything else.

09-05-2013, 08:09 PM	#194
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	aye splitty i didnt know people used references int he middle of a verse and call it a aprody untils omeone else says it was a refernce skhdskhskhshdshd

09-05-2013, 08:09 PM	#195
The Warden Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 235 Rep Power: 0	ALVIN KARPIS PARODIED THE ENTIRE ARCHIVE. DULLBOY WEARS BLACK LIPSTICK. PANCAKE LISTENS TO THE BEARS AN PUTS DICKS IN HIS MOUTH. BWHAHA IS A SENTINEL. EDDIES VERSE WAS DOPE. MOST BLACK PEOPLE MAKE ME UNHAPPY.

09-05-2013, 08:12 PM	#198
Destroyer Bags will be avenged Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,622 Battle Record: 85-58 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - Gimmick Battle League - 1-2 Punch League (5x) - Fight Night LXXIX - Fight Night 4 - Netcees Battle League (2x) - NPL Roast Rep Power: 84181418	post said bar des will weigh in with the "right" answer I'm inclined to disagree with gow immediately because of his dark knight-challenged world view but I will reserve my opinion heretofore til I see the bar

09-05-2013, 08:12 PM	#199
BWHAHA Sophomore Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 176 Rep Power: 4754289	no. well i wont take dis awai from dul boi cuz he iz getting up dere in age...& well dis is wut he haz dat he can rite old man novel better lmao <3 pancake no. jk idk what capable of tbh but i do no dis my lava vodka watermelon chakra..is not to be trifled wit lmao!!!!!!