2 Beautiful (0-0) vs. RPK (1-0) RPK WINS

Dope girl · 02-08-2013, 12:57 PM

4 bars Due Sunday & links on the way.

Dope girl · 02-08-2013, 01:02 PM

http://www.artofbattling.com/forum/s...oe-Boston-(0-0)

http://www.artofbattling.com/forum/s...-nieghbor-pics

RPK · 02-08-2013, 05:20 PM

Check

RPK · 02-08-2013, 05:24 PM

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...(0-0)-JOE-WINS
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...OPEN-FOR-VOTES

Dope girl · 02-10-2013, 10:46 AM

This is no Competition, I'm coming for Champion belt after I win be in hall of fame
I put this chump in hall of shame.
your error will put you in casket/Cuz you made a grave mistake/
Its eternal sorrow/ when I diss guys (disguise) like Zoro/
I'll leave a t on your bottom after I poke you now you hot.
It's plain 2 see you've got no skills// you's a chicken with whack bars its a Hennessy(Hen I see)
I pop a cap in your hand -& leave your hand on cap I'll leave you handicapped.
I run this game-I'll slit your throat bottoms in 4's so you could play quarter back
then tie you to me feet to react so flooring you is walk to the park

I tried my best g/l

RPK · 02-10-2013, 09:01 PM

DBL post

RPK · 02-10-2013, 09:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rawn MacDon

Do u have a thyroid condition?

Graves or Hashimoto or something?

I only ask because ur eyes look symptomatic in every pic ive ever seen of u...check it out u may have a deficient...and as u age itll progress........

just looking out for ur well-being, this is a srs post, no troll.

If uve never been Dx'd with something pertaining to ur endocrine system, u may want to get get checked out.

I'm worried about ur health,cuz I want to kill u by aimin' a weapon
So if u got Graves...hopefully its only cuz of what I lay you to rest in
U aint prepared with the substance so no one cares what ur bustin'
It makes sense that u got Underground Lines...shit,even ur avy pic looks like Harriet Tubman
We know that ur str8 queer, u ain't gettin' a place here
It don't matter if ur 2B or not 2B...I'm still ready to Shakespeare
U know that I'm scandalous,I ready to slam this bitch
Ur text battling sucks ass...and its still worse than ur grammar is

Zen · 02-11-2013, 02:26 PM

I don't think this honestly needs much explanation but RPK took this. I don't wanna be mean to 2B but your verse really lacked any quotable lines and punches but least you tried.
V/RPK

Joe Boston · 02-12-2013, 07:56 PM

2B ur structure confused me in some areas. Also ur attempts on wp were ok but ur wording made them lack impact.

RPK this was pretty one sided for you. Concepts hit In every bar he displayed.

V/RPK sorry didn't break it down but like I said ur structure 2b was confusing and really no quotable hits.

Allen Knight · 02-13-2013, 12:51 AM

nothing (but u had some attempts)

Vs

U aint prepared with the substance so no one cares what ur bustin'
It makes sense that u got Underground Lines...shit,even ur avy pic looks like Harriet Tubman
U know that I'm scandalous,I ready to slam this bitch
Ur text battling sucks ass...and its still worse than ur grammar is

V/RPK, this was one sided....beautiful verse was weird an structured crazy u need to work on concepts
and wording make ur lines harsh wit a creative twist on them work on those things, RPK had a solid verse
i like the underground bar and the grammar one was lol, he got this easy.

RPK · 02-14-2013, 12:15 PM

UP

Orc · 02-14-2013, 12:46 PM

yea rpk won. robranda shudnt battle. too easy. grave line was cool from rpk. he seems okay. v/ rpk

Immaculate · 02-14-2013, 09:27 PM

2B had ok lines, poor structure had a impact on your punchlines though.

RPK had good setups & witty punches, diggin that closer lol.

V/ RPK.

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02-08-2013, 12:57 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	2 Beautiful (0-0) vs. RPK (1-0) RPK WINS 4 bars Due Sunday & links on the way.

02-08-2013, 05:20 PM	#3
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 35	Check __________________

02-08-2013, 05:24 PM	#4
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 35	http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...(0-0)-JOE-WINS http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...OPEN-FOR-VOTES __________________

02-13-2013, 12:51 AM	#10
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	nothing (but u had some attempts) Vs U aint prepared with the substance so no one cares what ur bustin' It makes sense that u got Underground Lines...shit,even ur avy pic looks like Harriet Tubman U know that I'm scandalous,I ready to slam this bitch Ur text battling sucks ass...and its still worse than ur grammar is V/RPK, this was one sided....beautiful verse was weird an structured crazy u need to work on concepts and wording make ur lines harsh wit a creative twist on them work on those things, RPK had a solid verse i like the underground bar and the grammar one was lol, he got this easy. __________________ C.O.B

02-08-2013, 01:02 PM	#2
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	http://www.artofbattling.com/forum/s...oe-Boston-(0-0) http://www.artofbattling.com/forum/s...-nieghbor-pics

02-10-2013, 10:46 AM	#5
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,707 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521416	This is no Competition, I'm coming for Champion belt after I win be in hall of fame I put this chump in hall of shame. your error will put you in casket/Cuz you made a grave mistake/ Its eternal sorrow/ when I diss guys (disguise) like Zoro/ I'll leave a t on your bottom after I poke you now you hot. It's plain 2 see you've got no skills// you's a chicken with whack bars its a Hennessy(Hen I see) I pop a cap in your hand -& leave your hand on cap I'll leave you handicapped. I run this game-I'll slit your throat bottoms in 4's so you could play quarter back then tie you to me feet to react so flooring you is walk to the park I tried my best g/l

02-10-2013, 09:01 PM	#6
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 35	DBL post

02-11-2013, 02:26 PM	#8
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	I don't think this honestly needs much explanation but RPK took this. I don't wanna be mean to 2B but your verse really lacked any quotable lines and punches but least you tried. V/RPK

02-12-2013, 07:56 PM	#9
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092528	2B ur structure confused me in some areas. Also ur attempts on wp were ok but ur wording made them lack impact. RPK this was pretty one sided for you. Concepts hit In every bar he displayed. V/RPK sorry didn't break it down but like I said ur structure 2b was confusing and really no quotable hits.

02-14-2013, 12:15 PM	#11
RPK Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 227 Battle Record: 7-4 Rep Power: 35	UP __________________

02-14-2013, 12:46 PM	#12
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	yea rpk won. robranda shudnt battle. too easy. grave line was cool from rpk. he seems okay. v/ rpk

02-14-2013, 09:27 PM	#13
Immaculate Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 1,103 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 412364	2B had ok lines, poor structure had a impact on your punchlines though. RPK had good setups & witty punches, diggin that closer lol. V/ RPK.