Adonis vs. Blanco Bishop {Blanco Bishop wins 14-0}

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-07-2014, 05:23 PM

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@Adonis @Blanco Bishop

Adonis · 07-07-2014, 08:13 PM

Kool Keith

Adonis · 07-08-2014, 01:14 AM

White knight aint being modest, he know's he's no king.
I'll Blanc-O, this faggot cops clothes at a bi-shop like a queen.

Hayyyyyyyyyyy!!

Blanco Bishop · 07-10-2014, 08:59 PM

In. Ma bad. Will key shortly.

Blanco Bishop · 07-10-2014, 10:36 PM

Adonis, u a lame bitch. U own no skill nor the will to win.
N tho we're both considered Bey-sick, its cuz YOUR trash n I'm as ill as him.

BROKE LESNAR · 07-10-2014, 10:49 PM

Really wasn't feeling Adonis' chess-theme. The concept itself felt forced.

Blanco didn't need to include the Basic np, it's wildly redundant, regardless if he flipped it differently or not. The entire concept was dependent on the np, so it hurt alot. However, I really liked the effort he put into pulling it off and it came off much better than Adonis'.

v-Blanco

El Muffin · 07-10-2014, 11:46 PM

Bishop isnt pronounced bi shop..so doesnt quite work

Blanco wp/np was old as hell..n basically you were givin bey a rim job but at least yours came off as more of a jab than anything

V/blanco

Greed · 07-11-2014, 05:05 PM

Blanco got it

Mike Wrecka · 07-11-2014, 09:52 PM

Adonis weak attempt at a punch

blanco was meh , but better

07-12-2014, 09:43 AM

Didn't like either, tbh. But felt Adonis' punch was a bit of a stretch and had no type of connection as where Blanco's was a old and played concept but at least made a small connection. Plus his was just cleaner and executed better, so...

v/Blanco

Window Taco · 07-12-2014, 02:03 PM

Tough choice here. Both bars r similar in levels. But I think Blanco got this Cuz I feel the flow, structure, & punch had a little more sting and better wordplay to it.

V/ Blanco

KnowP · 07-12-2014, 10:46 PM

Adon came with a played forced wp that didnt land at all to me. Blanco had decent flip. coulda been worded crispier but still got the job done.

v. blanco

Malachi · 07-13-2014, 01:47 AM

Like blancos better

V/Bishop

King Ra. · 07-13-2014, 11:47 AM

Adonis, I like the wordplay attempts you had, even though it wasn't as uniform as it could be. It effected the delivery of your punch. Good shit though. Blanco, the bey-sick wp left much to be desired and the punch was okay, but it came off more brag-like than straight shot to me. Nonetheless, with Adonis slipping up in his bar, you take this by a bit.

MVGT: Blanco Bishop. Good job by both competitors.

jilti · 07-13-2014, 12:24 PM

King/Queen concept? Felt like a lazy attempt. Blanc seemed to put thought into his punch
Vote-Blanc

Destroyer · 07-13-2014, 04:44 PM

didn't really like either here, but bi-shop killed it for Adonis
the beysick concept is mad played on beyond, but still

v/blanco

Paradigm · 07-13-2014, 08:50 PM

I don't get Adonis concept/connection tbh lol sorry. Blanco played wp but connected better

Vote - Blanco Bishop

Dominate · 07-14-2014, 10:48 AM

Adonis - obv u have some talent with writing but your inexperience in the text battle arena tells. People don't dig that heteronym style wp. Also chess themed bars are too common, which means unless the bar is amazing, it's meh; there's no middle ground.

Blanco - Beysick/basic is realllllly played! However, the other aspects of the bar were good.

V/ Blanco

Doug Funny · 07-15-2014, 08:22 PM

Oh shit I get it

He cop clothes at a bitch shop lol he a bitchboi

Swerve · 07-15-2014, 11:15 PM

Neither one was really good and seemed a bit rushed....but Adonis' just didn't make sense to me, so I had Blanco here.

V/ Blanco

07-07-2014, 05:23 PM	#1
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899403	Adonis vs. Blanco Bishop {Blanco Bishop wins 14-0} The 1-2 Punch League Season 1 All rules are posted in a stickied thread in this forum. Go check before doing anything. You MUST CHECK IN within 48 hours of the battle being started. @Adonis @Blanco Bishop

07-07-2014, 08:13 PM	#2
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Kool Keith __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-08-2014, 01:14 AM	#3
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	White knight aint being modest, he know's he's no king. I'll Blanc-O, this faggot cops clothes at a bi-shop like a queen. Hayyyyyyyyyyy!! __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-10-2014, 11:46 PM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	Bishop isnt pronounced bi shop..so doesnt quite work Blanco wp/np was old as hell..n basically you were givin bey a rim job but at least yours came off as more of a jab than anything V/blanco __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

07-11-2014, 09:52 PM	#9
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,524 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	Adonis weak attempt at a punch blanco was meh , but better __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

07-10-2014, 08:59 PM	#4
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	In. Ma bad. Will key shortly.

07-10-2014, 10:36 PM	#5
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Adonis, u a lame bitch. U own no skill nor the will to win. N tho we're both considered Bey-sick, its cuz YOUR trash n I'm as ill as him.

07-10-2014, 10:49 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Really wasn't feeling Adonis' chess-theme. The concept itself felt forced. Blanco didn't need to include the Basic np, it's wildly redundant, regardless if he flipped it differently or not. The entire concept was dependent on the np, so it hurt alot. However, I really liked the effort he put into pulling it off and it came off much better than Adonis'. v-Blanco

07-11-2014, 05:05 PM	#8
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	Blanco got it

07-12-2014, 09:43 AM	#10
Amen Guest Posts: n/a	Didn't like either, tbh. But felt Adonis' punch was a bit of a stretch and had no type of connection as where Blanco's was a old and played concept but at least made a small connection. Plus his was just cleaner and executed better, so... v/Blanco

07-12-2014, 02:03 PM	#11
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888971	Tough choice here. Both bars r similar in levels. But I think Blanco got this Cuz I feel the flow, structure, & punch had a little more sting and better wordplay to it. V/ Blanco __________________ aka windu tuako

07-12-2014, 10:46 PM	#12
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463485	Adon came with a played forced wp that didnt land at all to me. Blanco had decent flip. coulda been worded crispier but still got the job done. v. blanco

07-13-2014, 01:47 AM	#13
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Like blancos better V/Bishop __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-13-2014, 11:47 AM	#14
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Adonis, I like the wordplay attempts you had, even though it wasn't as uniform as it could be. It effected the delivery of your punch. Good shit though. Blanco, the bey-sick wp left much to be desired and the punch was okay, but it came off more brag-like than straight shot to me. Nonetheless, with Adonis slipping up in his bar, you take this by a bit. MVGT: Blanco Bishop. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

07-13-2014, 12:24 PM	#15
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	King/Queen concept? Felt like a lazy attempt. Blanc seemed to put thought into his punch Vote-Blanc

07-13-2014, 08:50 PM	#17
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033508	I don't get Adonis concept/connection tbh lol sorry. Blanco played wp but connected better Vote - Blanco Bishop

07-14-2014, 10:48 AM	#18
Dominate Tread Lightly. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 2,310 Battle Record: 26-9 Champed - Netcees Battle League - Battle Arena - Tag Team Tournament III - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 18197456	Adonis - obv u have some talent with writing but your inexperience in the text battle arena tells. People don't dig that heteronym style wp. Also chess themed bars are too common, which means unless the bar is amazing, it's meh; there's no middle ground. Blanco - Beysick/basic is realllllly played! However, the other aspects of the bar were good. V/ Blanco __________________ The Bad Guys

07-15-2014, 08:22 PM	#19
Doug Funny Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 159 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 3922020	Oh shit I get it He cop clothes at a bitch shop lol he a bitchboi

07-15-2014, 11:15 PM	#20
Swerve SDub Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,877 Battle Record: 40-34 Champed - Alias Tourney III (Heroes vs. Villians) - Fight Night LXIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 64920324	Neither one was really good and seemed a bit rushed....but Adonis' just didn't make sense to me, so I had Blanco here. V/ Blanco __________________ No Cap Gang.