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08-30-2014, 07:07 AM | #1 |
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[Text Contenders] Blanco Bishop [VS] Jilti [jilti wins]
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09-04-2014, 11:01 PM | #2 |
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just know ur my boy Op. this a battle i tried to avoid at all costs
feels like im stabbin u in the back.. but rather gash to get the point across see my lines are like jordans, people waiting for them to drop any anticipated Barbie releases comes dressed up in an 18 inch box his crew might be POP, but he'll never make it to the Mainstream until Jason u, and Bish is found laying face down in a crystal lake scene but in case he doesnt get the drift, let me make it simple & plain.. Joan won't be the only lifeless body found in a Rivers bed today so no need to read peoples feed, this'll be a clean sweep in all facets if BBC One vote forum, its just Britain's electoral coverage broadcasted not the comedic type, im more like MMA guy without the shtick which means u wont be laughing, but will definitely get a kick out of this leavin him beat bad, body in a sling cast after the surgical visit then Refurbish to a nurse or physician that'll put him back in working condition punches listed in a class of greats. thats top tier with a passing grade while we haven't seen an A+ B combo since Nintendo back in the day 16 @Blanco Bishop Last edited by jilti; 09-05-2014 at 12:00 PM. |
09-05-2014, 06:47 PM | #3 |
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It's whatever u want. We can do text, throw hands, or bust slugs; my 9 won't jam.
1thing is certain tho. If this lame opts 4 blades... the faggot's getting cut like Michael Sam. U beat me once, but it's aight. I dropped early, got my nut off then went to sleep. U were up writing ALL night, like a true prospect...2bad u have none irl cuz YOURS is N e t c e e s. Talk 'bout my loss 2 Darth, Lol. That was a troll, i was laughin when i wrote that verse B but u shouldn't speak on verses 'bout Topics...when u couldn't even get Drafted for the tag tourney. I can drop16 barz for J but it's nothing i would care or think of on the other hand, i must b on his mind all day...this bitch had 32 before Para even put the link up! Ironic that u been taking cheap shots at me n your hoe's in my car with the POV poured. I JUST finished teachin her a lesson that put her 2 sleep...but if u ask her she was NOT bored. If a ten's around me, Imma swoon her clothes off, commence to poke n frankly u could NEVER say u Induce broads... u only stick ur peen in hoes with THAT ranking. For that line against Des u should pop your own lid open with the chrome mag. The shit was such forced trash...Waste Management goin have 2 come by twice 2 your pad. I'm a wise soldier; this bipolar whore always fussin about his bad drops Wearin ur heart on ur sleeve will turn this Graphic 'Ti...when i rip u, u finna sport a custom tank top. Last edited by Blanco Bishop; 09-08-2014 at 01:18 PM. |
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Of the 2 verses, Blanco's submission was more consistent than Jilti's. He managed to pack several average to above average punchlines into the mix. Jilti had his fair share of quality lines too. Unfortunately his misses bogged down a promising verse. MVGT: Blanco Bishop |
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09-15-2014, 10:21 PM | #6 |
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dead at heart rating. 3posts is suspect but it is broken down. 3posts though.
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09-16-2014, 12:12 AM | #7 |
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Lol. Nigguh what u implying?
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09-16-2014, 12:20 AM | #8 |
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09-16-2014, 12:24 AM | #9 |
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Lol
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09-25-2014, 12:08 AM | #10 |
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jilti: I thought the BBC One line was really clever. But there were a lot of really played concepts here: stabbing gash, Barbie, Friday the 13th, kick out of this, Nintendo. What carried you through was strong wording. This was a very readable verse with strong cadence and solid wording. It could have been harsher or more comedic for more impact, but it was a solid read. Still, I only had you with one line that landed fully, and the Joan Rivers line had potential but was a bit too direct.
Blanco Bishop: You really disincentivized my reading with those four lines. Your wording is way too drawn out, jamming in extra phrases for no reason, and the first two punches were flat-out terrible. The wording was an issue throughout, but you did have a couple nice personal disses there in the middle. Then you went back to generic, and the thing about generic punchlines is that wording is so much more important with them because no idea (especially lines about having sex with your opponent's girlfriend) is original. The closer could have been something but took way too long to get there. That's the general problem here. You write like Gamble but actually have occasional good ideas. Stop writing like Gamble. Tighten your shit up. This verse was tough to get through, and your few good concepts didn't connect as a result. Vote: jilti
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10-02-2014, 07:22 PM | #11 |
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Vote: jilti. Not a great battle. However, the best bar in the whole thing was the nurse line. Very well done. Bishop, just wasn't feeling it. Felt the concepts were similar to the ones I read years ago ? Not that jiltis Nintendo line was "fresher" but at least it was well written. Bishop, for my liking, was just cramming concepts, very wordy, and overall less potent. Also, it's to, or too, but never 2... Unless it's two. Good battle. Respect to both participants. Later. |
10-06-2014, 08:35 PM | #12 |
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Jilti: didn't really care for the opener, Barbie was ight, 3rd bar wasn't good, river bed was nice, BBC line wasn't really a hit..wording n wp was good but the punch itself didn't have sting, kick out of this was bland, I've seen a better refurbish line, closer was solid.
Blanco Bishop: opener was worded ok..punch was eh, irl was too wordy, tag tourney was OKISH..could have been executed better, link up was lame, not bored was wack, that ranking was alr, multies were off on waste management..punch wasn't quotable anyway, heart on a sleeve concepts are kinda played n plus urs wasn't worded well. Vote: Jilti for having a cleaner drop. Punches between the two weren't that great but J had better execution. |
10-11-2014, 11:50 AM | #13 |
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It's whatever u want. We can do text, throw hands, or bust slugs; my 9 won't jam.
1thing is certain tho. If this lame opts 4 blades... the faggot's getting cut like Michael Sam. i dont get the reference but i can assume. this is ok U beat me once, but it's aight. I dropped early, got my nut off then went to sleep. U were up writing ALL night, like a true prospect...2bad u have none irl cuz YOURS is N e t c e e s. nothing really wittty here. its personal, sure, but there's no sting Talk 'bout my loss 2 Darth, Lol. That was a troll, i was laughin when i wrote that verse B but u shouldn't speak on verses 'bout Topics...when u couldn't even get Drafted for the tag tourney. i liked the swagger. punch fell short I can drop16 barz for J but it's nothing i would care or think of on the other hand, i must b on his mind all day...this bitch had 32 before Para even put the link up! no wit at all here man. very generic Ironic that u been taking cheap shots at me n your hoe's in my car with the POV poured. I JUST finished teachin her a lesson that put her 2 sleep...but if u ask her she was NOT bored. okay, not too creative or fresh but it's okay If a ten's around me, Imma swoon her clothes off, commence to poke n frankly u could NEVER say u Induce broads... u only stick ur peen in hoes with THAT ranking. this was better. ur most creative flip so far. moar For that line against Des u should pop your own lid open with the chrome mag. The shit was such forced trash...Waste Management goin have 2 come by twice 2 your pad. nah bro. very uninspired/old I'm a wise soldier; this bipolar whore always fussin about his bad drops Wearin ur heart on ur sleeve will turn this Graphic 'Ti...when i rip u, u finna sport a custom tank top. not feeling the force np just know ur my boy Op. this a battle i tried to avoid at all costs feels like im stabbin u in the back.. but rather gash to get the point across weird wording. fell flat see my lines are like jordans, people waiting for them to drop any anticipated Barbie releases comes dressed up in an 18 inch box fluid wording. old wordplay but its ok his crew might be POP, but he'll never make it to the Mainstream until Jason u, and Bish is found laying face down in a crystal lake scene creative i'll go with it being ok but in case he doesnt get the drift, let me make it simple & plain.. Joan won't be the only lifeless body found in a Rivers bed today this was cold. better so no need to read peoples feed, this'll be a clean sweep in all facets if BBC One vote forum, its just Britain's electoral coverage broadcasted nice again. picking up spee not the comedic type, im more like MMA guy without the shtick which means u wont be laughing, but will definitely get a kick out of this oldschool bar. feeling it leavin him beat bad, body in a sling cast after the surgical visit then Refurbish to a nurse or physician that'll put him back in working condition creative but i wasn't feeling it punches listed in a class of greats. thats top tier with a passing grade while we haven't seen an A+ B combo since Nintendo back in the day ok here i think Jilti had a bit more to his bars. was a good read from both and a good battle. the bars i liked from Jilti outnumber the ones from Bishop. some slick hits. Bishop just needs to keep his motivation up and not get sloppy near the end of his verse & Jilti seems to be shaking whatever rust he has off. vote Jilti |
10-11-2014, 02:24 PM | #14 |
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see my lines are like jordans, people waiting for them to drop
any anticipated Barbie releases comes dressed up in an 18 inch box but in case he doesnt get the drift, let me make it simple & plain.. Joan won't be the only lifeless body found in a Rivers bed today so no need to read peoples feed, this'll be a clean sweep in all facets if BBC One vote forum, its just Britain's electoral coverage broadcasted not the comedic type, im more like MMA guy without the shtick which means u wont be laughing, but will definitely get a kick out of this punches listed in a class of greats. thats top tier with a passing grade while we haven't seen an A+ B combo since Nintendo back in the day Nice verse overall, thought these hit It's whatever u want. We can do text, throw hands, or bust slugs; my 9 won't jam. 1thing is certain tho. If this lame opts 4 blades... the faggot's getting cut like Michael Sam. Ironic that u been taking cheap shots at me n your hoe's in my car with the POV poured. I JUST finished teachin her a lesson that put her 2 sleep...but if u ask her she was NOT bored. If a ten's around me, Imma swoon her clothes off, commence to poke n frankly u could NEVER say u Induce broads... u only stick ur peen in hoes with THAT ranking. I'm a wise soldier; this bipolar whore always fussin about his bad drops Wearin ur heart on ur sleeve will turn this Graphic 'Ti...when i rip u, u finna sport a custom tank top. solid verse as well thought jilti had more lines that hit and were more effective. Good showing for both but v/jilti |
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My niggah jil got this.
Props bro. U deserve the title shot. |
10-12-2014, 10:10 AM | #16 |
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Thanks Blanc.
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10-12-2014, 10:15 AM | #17 |
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Ill nika shud just vacate that shit coz ill doubt he will defend it
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10-12-2014, 12:17 PM | #18 |
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True.
does that make jil the champ? I think so. He's por in the most work over the last two months. |
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Yeah interim champ perhaps
Then accomp given if he defends twice mebe once depending on who it is
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