Nemean vs Jilti [OPEN FOR VOTES]

jilti · 08-15-2014, 08:01 AM

match lines of first to drop. due this weekend @Nemean
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Nemean · 08-15-2014, 10:02 AM

Gone 8 - ready when you are i don't do shit over the weekend online

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http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85554
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85311

@jilti

Nemean · 08-15-2014, 01:37 PM

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads
Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!
Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name
Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders
I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt
@jilti

jilti · 08-18-2014, 02:59 AM

ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class
im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column
this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback
im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video
sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time

El Muffin · 08-18-2014, 06:24 AM

wot

nemean: verse was alll over the place. opener was homoerotic

seems every couplet except the bags one was nonsensical tbh

I know ive been shadow fucking with u lately...bur this verse is the reason why

Judoboy got heat?

thefuck

90 percent of this had me like wtf?

closers setup was a glaring example

nail in the coughin..so ur sayin she broke a nail whilst forcing herself to vomit? ok..as retarded as that sounds..wat does that have to do with the punch. ...(something to work on)

n the punch was blahworthy..n yes ive heard the fat lady sings thing..the way u executed it was fucking eh tho

keep battling though. youll get better with time

jilti.

opener..passable but eh
mean streak is ok
drop ne was pretty good
n sync decent
not feeling closer

decent outing

u knew ud take this easy so no harm no foul

v,/jilti

Sho Money EMG · 08-26-2014, 03:39 PM

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads

Lol

Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!

Ok

Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name

No

Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders

Eh
I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt

Nahh...

----

ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class

Cool...

im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column

Nice...

this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback

Nah forced...

im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video

Good idea, wording couldve been wayyy better.

sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time

Okay closer..

Clearly imo

Vote - @jilti

jilti · 08-29-2014, 11:15 AM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=90713

Window Taco · 09-01-2014, 07:22 PM

Not a bad battle at all to read.

Bar 1: I enjoyed Namean's bar more and felt it was set up a bit fresher & executed. The karate line from Jilt is too played IMO and the flow suffered a bit when he added the inner rhyme of kenpo demo.

Bar 2: Tight ass bar from Jilt right here! I enjoyed it and felt it was well set up, stung, had nameplay involved, and the connectivity between the lines was dope. Namean I felt u dropped a level with this bar and I felt the doubt fire line was too played.

Bar 3: Jilt took this bar as well, even though it wasn't as fresh or strong as bar 2, it had more complexity and was a more impactful line overall than Namean.

Bar 4: I like Jilt bar here better. Seemed like Namean upped his level a bit in power for this punch, but I still think Jilt took it with more sting.

Bar 5: This was a disappointing closer IMO from jilt as he had some pretty solid bars up to this point. He was going for humor but the comedy fell flat for me. I think Namean's bar had more effective connectivity and was better just by a hair.

So I got this 3 bars to 2 Jilt.

V/ Jilt

theMuzzl3 · 09-16-2014, 07:59 AM

/v Nemean

not just cuz his lines were tight, but look at the "last edited" dates, and see that rhymes by jilti were edited after the point of suffering a loss... not to say jilti's lines weren't tight, they were.... but:

/v Nemean

Ongbak · 09-23-2014, 11:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nemean

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads

♡

Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!

♡

Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name

♡♡

Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders

♡♡♡♡

I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt

♡
@jilti

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti

ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class

♡♡♡♡

im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column

♡♡♡

this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback

♡

im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video

♡

sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time

♡♡

Jilti had more hits and better, more creative execution.

MVGT: Jilti

Camp Bell · 09-24-2014, 12:35 AM

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads
nice opener

Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!
the "dear" throws this off to me. it would've been good w/o it

Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name
is meth spanish? produce=mexicans? not sure the connection

Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders
lol whatever.

I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt
wording is off

VS

ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class
nice opener as well

im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column
niice. LOTB

this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback
i dont like the connection but the np was nice

im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video
lol smh nah

sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time
ok

overall, this was a good battle. mean had some good lines but his wording was off in a few lines, along with his punches not connecting at times took away from his verse and just came up short. . jilti, he had a couple nice name plays and the line of the battle with the "mean streak" line. good battle fellas

vote:jilti

08-15-2014, 08:01 AM	#1
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	Nemean vs Jilti [OPEN FOR VOTES] match lines of first to drop. due this weekend @Nemean Check in

08-15-2014, 01:37 PM	#3
Nemean Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 35 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 493574	U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel! Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt @jilti Last edited by Nemean; 08-15-2014 at 01:40 PM.

08-18-2014, 02:59 AM	#4
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time Last edited by jilti; 08-18-2014 at 03:59 AM.

08-18-2014, 06:24 AM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230532	wot nemean: verse was alll over the place. opener was homoerotic seems every couplet except the bags one was nonsensical tbh I know ive been shadow fucking with u lately...bur this verse is the reason why Judoboy got heat? thefuck 90 percent of this had me like wtf? closers setup was a glaring example nail in the coughin..so ur sayin she broke a nail whilst forcing herself to vomit? ok..as retarded as that sounds..wat does that have to do with the punch. ...(something to work on) n the punch was blahworthy..n yes ive heard the fat lady sings thing..the way u executed it was fucking eh tho keep battling though. youll get better with time jilti. opener..passable but eh mean streak is ok drop ne was pretty good n sync decent not feeling closer decent outing u knew ud take this easy so no harm no foul v,/jilti __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 08-18-2014 at 06:29 AM.

08-26-2014, 03:39 PM	#6
Sho Money EMG Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Location: Zooyork Posts: 2,124 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 0	U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads Lol Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel! Ok Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name No Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders Eh I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt Nahh... ---- ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class Cool... im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column Nice... this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback Nah forced... im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video Good idea, wording couldve been wayyy better. sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time Okay closer.. Clearly imo Vote - @jilti __________________ Sho Money \| Camp Bell Team Alpha EMG This site is whack

08-15-2014, 10:02 AM	#2
Nemean Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 35 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 493574	Gone 8 - ready when you are i don't do shit over the weekend online Links http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85554 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85311 @jilti

08-29-2014, 11:15 AM	#7
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=90713

09-01-2014, 07:22 PM	#8
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888971	Not a bad battle at all to read. Bar 1: I enjoyed Namean's bar more and felt it was set up a bit fresher & executed. The karate line from Jilt is too played IMO and the flow suffered a bit when he added the inner rhyme of kenpo demo. Bar 2: Tight ass bar from Jilt right here! I enjoyed it and felt it was well set up, stung, had nameplay involved, and the connectivity between the lines was dope. Namean I felt u dropped a level with this bar and I felt the doubt fire line was too played. Bar 3: Jilt took this bar as well, even though it wasn't as fresh or strong as bar 2, it had more complexity and was a more impactful line overall than Namean. Bar 4: I like Jilt bar here better. Seemed like Namean upped his level a bit in power for this punch, but I still think Jilt took it with more sting. Bar 5: This was a disappointing closer IMO from jilt as he had some pretty solid bars up to this point. He was going for humor but the comedy fell flat for me. I think Namean's bar had more effective connectivity and was better just by a hair. So I got this 3 bars to 2 Jilt. V/ Jilt __________________ aka windu tuako

09-24-2014, 12:35 AM	#11
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads nice opener Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel! the "dear" throws this off to me. it would've been good w/o it Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name is meth spanish? produce=mexicans? not sure the connection Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders lol whatever. I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt wording is off VS ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class nice opener as well im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column niice. LOTB this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback i dont like the connection but the np was nice im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video lol smh nah sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time ok overall, this was a good battle. mean had some good lines but his wording was off in a few lines, along with his punches not connecting at times took away from his verse and just came up short. . jilti, he had a couple nice name plays and the line of the battle with the "mean streak" line. good battle fellas vote:jilti __________________ get high. write rhymes.