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06-22-2015, 10:49 PM | #1 |
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SHADOW BOXING - Allen Knight vs Cred {Allen Knight wins}
Allen Knight
gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene Cred Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
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06-23-2015, 02:12 AM | #2 |
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Allen Knight came with some pretty slick lines..
ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate this little section was cool, had to figure out that Tumenov line but I thought that little switch up to the next section was cool I enjoyed the Witcher line too, that was pretty smooth and I thought that closing Mad Max line was pretty dope too, nice work breh Cred...his name is Wile E Coyote for a reason you get a neg for that the Jaguar line was cool but that Taurus line seemed like a stretch the forehead/more dead section seemed more filler ish to me.. but that closer U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website __________________ that was pretty slick, but I got Allen Knight taking it with more quotables
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06-23-2015, 07:53 AM | #4 |
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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other ok ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke cool i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate solid u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more Alright ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy Nice wp but I thought you coulda done more with it gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene ok Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner Cool I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar Cool idea but execution was a little tough Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape Nice. Dug the escape connection I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead that's slick I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast ehh U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website Alright Dope, both guys had some solid drops but Allen just got it on consistency imo. Definitely close n the best one I've read so far so props guys V/ak |
06-23-2015, 08:54 PM | #5 |
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I don't get the opener. At all. Apologies tumenov was cool Upton was cool too but lol nigga u trip me out w/ these name lines utilize nah Witcher was loose association mad max is ok Cred. wIle isnt a wolf tho lol. I saw this the first time I skimmed n was like "big mistake " Jaguar was dope n fresh. Taurus was ok but worded kinda strange. I see the tie ins just didn't like the execution forfeit was cool mug nah closer was creative as fuck n lotb Hmm. Close. Ima have to go against 5he grain here n vote / cred 8 have it 3-2 looking at my breakdown So I have to give it to cred V/cred But good shit fellas
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06-24-2015, 06:03 PM | #6 |
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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other Okay ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke Cool i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate Okay u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more Okay ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy Ehh lazy execution gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene Okay Cred Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner Cool I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar Okay Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape Cool I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead Cool I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast Okay U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website This is sick V cred |
06-25-2015, 04:49 PM | #7 |
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tragus/trey goes? a reach unless I'm pronounce the shit wrong lol
tumenov was crazy lol upton a grammatical nightmare but creative lol utilize/you till eyes was cool, execution could of been better tho witcher was same as ^ vs road runner was solid Jaguar was nice Taurus/ford/escape was slick cool battle... I think cred started off nice but fell flat towards end of his verse, AK was consistent for the most part... only bar I wasn't feelin from AK was his closer and bars I didn't like from Cred were his last couple. Allen Knight got the edge |
06-26-2015, 07:23 AM | #8 |
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dope battle i thought
best ive seen Cred come tbh but maybe i dont peep as much as i should Allen Knight gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more Cred Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead i pretty much had this tied in quotes, just thought Cred could have worded the Jaguar line a little cleaner. Witcher from Al i almost quoted too but i left that out for a similar reason, so i guess i'd give it Al by a slight edge here close battle though bros |
06-26-2015, 09:32 AM | #9 |
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06-26-2015, 05:23 PM | #10 |
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Allen Knight
gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other ...Ok ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke ...lol cool i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate ...This was aiight u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more ...Ehhh, I see where u were tryna go but it coulda been pulled off better ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy ...Cool gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene ...Ok close Cred Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner ...Aiight I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar ...Ok Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape ...This was kinda stretched tbh, wasn't feelin it too much I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead ...Tired concept, unfortunately I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast ...Ehh U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website ...This was pretty dope to me All in all I got AK for having better execution & more consistency. Cred kinda ODd on the gunplay lines imo. This was a cool lil battle but AK edges it. Vote- Allen Knight |
06-27-2015, 05:55 AM | #11 |
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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other dope concept... a little stretch on pronunciation but I thought it was still good ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke haha nice i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate decent. didn't like it back to back with Tumenov though, lazy execution u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more wordplay better than the wording here again, solid though ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy nothin crazy. not bad gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene ehhh... ok vs. Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner sounds nice but doesn't really make sense like others pointed out I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar wording not spectacular, but solid Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape ehhh ok I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead cool I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast kinda creative on the reference but not hardhitting U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website this is nice Damn this a real tough one to call... Both had solid verses, more good concepts / decent punches than haymakers I got Tumenov as the one that stood out for Al & closer for Cred... Wasn't a big fan of Al's Mad Max closer or the Taurus bar from Cred. Tragus was better to me than other people sayin... upton & utilize both good but lazy. Jaguar coulda been fire if it was executed a little different, cool though too. The road runner was smooth from Cred, but the concept was off... that was prolly the deciding factor for me cuz it was that fuckin close. Good shit fellas, I got nasty Knight by a hair here V/ Allen Knight
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5-2 Allen got this
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