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Old 06-22-2015, 10:49 PM   #1
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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other
ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate
u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core
spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more
ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy
u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy
gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean
fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene


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Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner
I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far
Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar
Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight
Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape
I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead
Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead
I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes
Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast
U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight
Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
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Old 06-23-2015, 02:12 AM   #2
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Allen Knight came with some pretty slick lines..

ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate

this little section was cool, had to figure out that Tumenov line
but I thought that little switch up to the next section was cool
I enjoyed the Witcher line too, that was pretty smooth
and I thought that closing Mad Max line was pretty dope too, nice work breh

Cred...his name is Wile E Coyote for a reason you get a neg for that
the Jaguar line was cool but that Taurus line seemed like a stretch
the forehead/more dead section seemed more filler ish to me..
but that closer

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@Mr. J I think your vote got cut off
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Old 06-23-2015, 07:53 AM   #4
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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other
ok
ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
cool
i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate
solid
u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core
spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more
Alright
ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy
u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy
Nice wp but I thought you coulda done more with it
gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean
fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene
ok



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Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner
Cool
I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far
Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar
Cool idea but execution was a little tough
Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight
Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape
Nice. Dug the escape connection
I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead
Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead
that's slick
I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes
Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast
ehh
U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight
Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
Alright


Dope, both guys had some solid drops but Allen just got it on consistency imo. Definitely close n the best one I've read so far so props guys

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Allen
I don't get the opener. At all. Apologies
tumenov was cool
Upton was cool too but lol nigga u trip me out w/ these name lines
utilize nah
Witcher was loose association
mad max is ok

Cred.
wIle isnt a wolf tho lol. I saw this the first time I skimmed n was like "big mistake "
Jaguar was dope n fresh.
Taurus was ok but worded kinda strange. I see the tie ins just didn't like the execution
forfeit was cool
mug nah
closer was creative as fuck n lotb



Hmm. Close. Ima have to go against 5he grain here n vote / cred

8 have it 3-2 looking at my breakdown

So I have to give it to cred

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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other
Okay

ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
Cool

i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate
Okay

u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core
spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more
Okay

ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy
u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy
Ehh lazy execution

gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean
fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene
Okay


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Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder
Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner
Cool

I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far
Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar
Okay

Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight
Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape
Cool

I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead
Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead
Cool

I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes
Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast
Okay

U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight
Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
This is sick

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tragus/trey goes? a reach unless I'm pronounce the shit wrong lol
tumenov was crazy lol
upton a grammatical nightmare but creative lol
utilize/you till eyes was cool, execution could of been better tho
witcher was same as ^

vs

road runner was solid
Jaguar was nice
Taurus/ford/escape was slick

cool battle... I think cred started off nice but fell flat towards end of his verse, AK was consistent for the most part... only bar I wasn't feelin from AK was his closer and bars I didn't like from Cred were his last couple.

Allen Knight got the edge
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Old 06-26-2015, 07:23 AM   #8
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dope battle i thought

best ive seen Cred come tbh but maybe i dont peep as much as i should

Allen Knight
gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other
ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core
spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more




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Known gunner, 44 bulldog bustin thats chrome thunder
Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner
I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far
Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar
I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead
Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead


i pretty much had this tied in quotes, just thought Cred could have worded the Jaguar line a little cleaner. Witcher from Al i almost quoted too but i left that out for a similar reason, so i guess i'd give it Al by a slight edge here

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Allen Knight

gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other
...Ok
ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
...lol cool
i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate
...This was aiight
u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core
spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more
...Ehhh, I see where u were tryna go but it coulda been pulled off better
ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy
u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy
...Cool
gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean
fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene
...Ok close


Cred

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Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner
...Aiight
I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far
Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar
...Ok
Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight
Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape
...This was kinda stretched tbh, wasn't feelin it too much
I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead
Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead
...Tired concept, unfortunately
I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes
Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast
...Ehh
U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight
Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
...This was pretty dope to me

All in all I got AK for having better execution & more consistency. Cred kinda ODd on the gunplay lines imo. This was a cool lil battle but AK edges it.

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gotta Tre pound aimed at ur skull, dont doubt it sucker
cuz hollows from the Tragus thru one side of ur fuckin ear & out the other
dope concept... a little stretch on pronunciation but I thought it was still good
ur a faggot that loves cock, i fuckin hate this joke
u sucked Tumenov & let'em take u from the back like a rear naked choke
haha nice
i stay blowin out ppl in battles..TKO, in text ima great
u neva been Upton of votes, u get smashed everytime u step to the plate
decent. didn't like it back to back with Tumenov though, lazy execution
u'll get headshots w/ the AR, faggot it'll rip ur core
spray Utilize pop out ur sockets & u cant use them fuckin shits no more
wordplay better than the wording here again, solid though
ya trash & its known, i'll do this lame all greezy
u cant win Witcher wack shit & i'll beat u like a video game on easy
nothin crazy. not bad
gotta cannon pressed to ur chest, rippin this hack mean
fuck usin brass Nux, i'll spary till ur heart explodes like a Mad Max scene
ehhh... ok

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Bitch I'll have u tryna stay away from dese Wolves like da Road Runner
sounds nice but doesn't really make sense like others pointed out
I'm dat hard, on top wit greats? Pfft u cudn't get dat far
Bitch u been a Cat in da Bck so long u cud rival the trunk on the new Jaguar
wording not spectacular, but solid
Damn dis fake, load da ladder & I'm blamin eight
Cuz I got a Taurus dat aint made by Ford, wit shots firing so fast u cnt Escape
ehhh ok
I'm dumpin mre lead, come right bck if u aint on the floor dead
Da banger'll leave u no choice but to Quit life wen da Forfeit right in front ur forehead
cool
I'm sick bro, I got bitches for days & can guarantee u dnt get hoes
Wit a mug dat fukin big, ur head cuda been in da hand of dude in da pic roast
kinda creative on the reference but not hardhitting
U ain't bred right, I bang my gang wen I'm grippin da lead tight
Cuz I'll start clickin dat Eagle wit my Flag wrapped around it like I'm refreshin da website
this is nice

Damn this a real tough one to call...
Both had solid verses, more good concepts / decent punches than haymakers
I got Tumenov as the one that stood out for Al & closer for Cred...
Wasn't a big fan of Al's Mad Max closer or the Taurus bar from Cred.
Tragus was better to me than other people sayin... upton & utilize both good but lazy.
Jaguar coulda been fire if it was executed a little different, cool though too.
The road runner was smooth from Cred, but the concept was off...
that was prolly the deciding factor for me cuz it was that fuckin close.
Good shit fellas, I got nasty Knight by a hair here

V/ Allen Knight
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