6. Murda Sho vs 11. ill nik-A - NIK WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 3rd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@murda sho @ill nik-A

[ill nik-A]

12
Welcome!

[murda sho]

=/

[murda sho]

Just incase im calling for the extention...

[ill nik-A]

Ok cool

[ill nik-A]

You been in the NBL…
since Lama started it; & till this day not champin it must still bother
hoping this is the year u finally make a splash… that’s a cannonball on spilled water
see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+
OutSiders aren’t typical performers; how’ll u haters, match it?
makin u kill yaself is our bread & butter… while the Suicide Squad gets baker acted
take ya bashin, betta have a boxer’s mentality to last in this place
u like the Tyson of text… not cuz of ur punches but how stupid u look with tatts on ya face

[murda sho]

Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
U're Bags flunky how could u stop this u'll get trounced like a novice
He's been batting clean up for u so long ur fuckin house should be spotless
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!
2 shots to stop him then 2 more incase he's breathing, ima slay him
People will talk about the 4 Nik ate more than a freaky conversation
& ur whole crew should know that Sho sparks deadly...
It's ironic that in this cuban cigar a bunch of niggas that i've smoked already
Ur 40 stop battling & buying crap while ur child scavenge & starves
Cause the way Un fit u in that casket is the type of parent you are


Sit down old head... Zip Him Up!

[Allen Knight]

see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+


Vs

Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!



V/Nik, this was a dope battle both had some fire,
i thought murdas pulling that metal was dope.
Nik gunplay jawn was fire.
I think nik was a lil more consistent an had one more quote, nice battle props to both.

[Strikta]

Damn this battle was dope as fuck.. I'm not voting cuz I have legit reasons, but damn ya'll did ya fuckin thing.

Sorry mods.. I just had to say something. Could potentially be ya'lls battle of the week.

[Useless]

see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+

These were the lines I was feeling most from ur verse. I quoted the Ron burgandy line but cause the wording and concept was nice but then u said hair dyeing process lol wasn't feeling that.

Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!
2 shots to stop him then 2 more incase he's breathing, ima slay him
People will talk about the 4 Nik ate more than a freaky conversation
& ur whole crew should know that Sho sparks deadly...
It's ironic that in this cuban cigar a bunch of niggas that i've smoked already
Ur 40 stop battling & buying crap while ur child scavenge & starves
Cause the way Un fit u in that casket is the type of parent you are

I thought ur verse was nice. A smooth read with good concepts n wording. Idk if some of ur concepts are played cause I just came back but I ain't seen em so they nice.

Overall this was a dope battle but nik had a few lines I wasn't feeling while sho only had like one. I thought sho brought it and had the better verse.

V. Murda sho

[Bust]

Nik

Opener was raw
Wishing well was nic too
Dying process was cool
Ages 6+ was slick
Bread n butter was pretty cool
Closer made me laugh..

Dope verse

Sho

Opener was nice bro
Clean up was ok
That pullin the metal was dope
Fornicate felt a lil forced at first but u could make it work which made a nice bar outta it
Cuban sig r was cool
Closer was ok


This a dope match, both were ver Consistent some slick bars good set ups n dope personals.. I think this will go either way cuz it's pretty even imo, but I just felt Nik was a lol harsher wh n I can't are dope barz which gives him the slight edge.. Tuff call for me but I got Nik barely.. Good stuff from both

Nik

[Amen.]

You been in the NBL…

since Lama started it; & till this day not champin it must still bother
hoping this is the year u finally make a splash… that’s a cannonball on spilled water

- this was tough

see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one

- good
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
- touch it/process don't really rhyme but wasn't feelin' this bar anyways

I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+

- ha! this was fire
OutSiders aren’t typical performers; how’ll u haters, match it?
makin u kill yaself is our bread & butter… while the Suicide Squad gets baker acted
- liked the concept, not your route of execution tho
take ya bashin, betta have a boxer’s mentality to last in this place
u like the Tyson of text… not cuz of ur punches but how stupid u look with tatts on ya face
- lol cool

dope verse overall. consistent as fuck. only 1 bar was off imo but the rest was effective. good shit.

vs

Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
- not sure I get this one bro? at 1st thought it was some type of play on the cologne MUSK, considering old people wear it, but it wasn't so IDK wtf you were talkin' about tbh

U're Bags flunky how could u stop this u'll get trounced like a novice
He's been batting clean up for u so long ur fuckin house should be spotless

- this was tough
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!
- miss for me

2 shots to stop him then 2 more incase he's breathing, ima slay him
People will talk about the 4 Nik ate more than a freaky conversation

- lol, clean and creative. I fucks w/ it

& ur whole crew should know that Sho sparks deadly...
It's ironic that in this cuban cigar a bunch of niggas that i've smoked already

- cuban cigar/cuban sig are's a dope play on a played concept bro. props on the flip my man imo this was fire
Ur 40 stop battling & buying crap while ur child scavenge & starves
Cause the way Un fit u in that casket is the type of parent you are
- nah, this was predicitable from the second I seen un fit tbh. knew which way you were going to execute this concept

not a bad verse but some heavy misses imo. batting clean up, 4 nik ate and cuban cigar were all bangers but the rest was light imo. not enough to take this.

Nik got it

[fraze]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

You been in the NBL…
since Lama started it; & till this day not champin it must still bother
hoping this is the year u finally make a splash… that’s a cannonball on spilled water
I thinK I get what you're going for but I thought the idiom was spilled milk. ok bar
see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one
cool concept. don't get how skill gets wasted in a wishING well but the associations were nice
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
just meh to me. don't really see a diss. he dyes his hair? and this isn't even close to a legit rhyme
I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+
this was hot
OutSiders aren’t typical performers; how’ll u haters, match it?
makin u kill yaself is our bread & butter… while the Suicide Squad gets baker acted
baker acted? who talks like that? not feeling
take ya bashin, betta have a boxer’s mentality to last in this place
u like the Tyson of text… not cuz of ur punches but how stupid u look with tatts on ya face
funny. ok bar

Originally Posted by murda sho

Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
lols.
U're Bags flunky how could u stop this u'll get trounced like a novice
He's been batting clean up for u so long ur fuckin house should be spotless
cool but light.
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!
this is hot to me
2 shots to stop him then 2 more incase he's breathing, ima slay him
People will talk about the 4 Nik ate more than a freaky conversation
little forced but not horrible
& ur whole crew should know that Sho sparks deadly...
It's ironic that in this cuban cigar a bunch of niggas that i've smoked already
straight punch. fresh take on a concept that could have been played
Ur 40 stop battling & buying crap while ur child scavenge & starves
Cause the way Un fit u in that casket is the type of parent you are
just ok to me

nice battle on both sides. I was expected fireworks when i saw this matchup and i was not disappointed. Ill the standout lotb with gunplay, but a few of the other bars fell flat to me because of the way parts were worded. I feel like vets get a pass on that stuff sometimes because things like completely nonrhyming bars and rushed concepts wouldn't get quoted coming from a lot of people. or maybe that's just a testament to skill if you can still make those bars work.

sho had a very consistent verse, muskets and slot machine were fire and the other bars were just light, not really misses. nothing was really bad per se, while Nik had a few bars I legit wasn't feeling. Sho gets this on quotes and consistency.

Vote: murda sho

[Bash]

Wishing one, ages 6+, tyson

Vs

Spotless, pulling metal, 4 Nik ate, cuban cigar

V/Murda. He had the harder hits. Alil more consistent. Nice battle

[Sharp]

3-3

[Chyeahhh!!!]

.....man this was kinda hard to judge, try and touch it and dying process didn't rhyme for me, shit was funny though, some shit from both was kinda worded weird like Sho's closer
good personals throughout, Murda's personals had more sting, Illnik had the brushoff swag I like tho like fluck dude. Nik's personals had more comic value. Murda had the cigar line though ....whew vs Nik's 6plus line

gonna have to go with Nik

good spit for spat

[Sharp]

You been in the NBL…
since Lama started it; & till this day not champin it must still bother
hoping this is the year u finally make a splash… that’s a cannonball on spilled water
funny, ok
see, I got flow, wording & concepts; all the shit u missing, son
this won’t end well… when a quarter of ya skill was wasted on a wishing one
get what you're going for, ok
got that natural salt & pepper look; bitches stare, like & touch it
while Ron Burgundy could be the color commentator for ya hair dyin process
ok
I’m supposed to fear this nonsense with ur lame ass kid stuff?
ya whole style’s water down… gunplay comes in a see-thru bag that reads ages 6+
nice lol
OutSiders aren’t typical performers; how’ll u haters, match it?
makin u kill yaself is our bread & butter… while the Suicide Squad gets baker acted
clever
take ya bashin, betta have a boxer’s mentality to last in this place
u like the Tyson of text… not cuz of ur punches but how stupid u look with tatts on ya face
pretty basic


Lets get something clear u're an old fuck aint no "these clips" or "poppin tres"..
If ur gun bars aint about muskets we don't believe shit u got to say
funny but light
U're Bags flunky how could u stop this u'll get trounced like a novice
He's been batting clean up for u so long ur fuckin house should be spotless
solid
Im like a determined gambler at them slots when I dump at his clique
Cause ima just keep pulling that metal until something gets hit!
cool
2 shots to stop him then 2 more incase he's breathing, ima slay him
People will talk about the 4 Nik ate more than a freaky conversation
I want this to work but it's a stretch
& ur whole crew should know that Sho sparks deadly...
It's ironic that in this cuban cigar a bunch of niggas that i've smoked already
damn
Ur 40 stop battling & buying crap while ur child scavenge & starves
Cause the way Un fit u in that casket is the type of parent you are
nah



fuck this is close. cigar and 6+ were fucking bonkers but I genuinely believe nik got it on consistency. This is a tough call tho

v/nik