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09-11-2015, 11:59 PM | #3 |
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09-19-2015, 05:00 PM | #4 | |
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catch a quick fade at the barber shop in about a second gonna feel steel buzzin by your ears like i was trimming around the edges but f' it.. since u already there i'll clean up ur jawline w/ a .45 falcon gun residue leave Powder on ur face before barbers can apply the talcum and who cares if ur gay ass gives out 10 or a courtesy 5 cuz while u Hand Over Tips, we're just hoping u stop jerking off guys rah rah type. but soon as dude makes a move,he'll be left a quadriplegic so next time that nigga Serge Forward, it's tryna sit up in a wheelchair while doctors feed him his girl got diseases, but he still Injector raw dog & screws the bitch now when STP, it burns inside from not using proper lubricants truth is i got mad clips, mag spit til ur abs rip & joints lost let ratchets clap in ur face like bitches tryna get they point across wan go rounds in a cage & test an animal? thats a lab rat course bro u'll feel like a sacrificial Lamborghini pig once those suicide doors close in l.a. we sittin on dubs while n.y. homos take the Subway to get around over here Kids Ride On Spokes,Man. y'all only do that when Jared Fogle in town 16 @serge T |
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09-19-2015, 07:17 PM | #5 |
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Act cocky; you don't wanna war though
For gettin souped up, I'll draw cans like Andy Warhol I don't compliment dudes, I'm stompin on noobs Rippin' dude like a missile through a thistle tube My shit is rude Old generation, used to doing shit my way This is Sega vs Xbox, and I only only come at you sideways Back track or get backslapped by the sickest of past fights On the grind I split lips like tricks on a half pipe Live life to stack chips; I'm in league with legends You live life for chips and League of Legends The type that rolls over after sex and cries.. ...gets insecure; sucks his stomach in while in a group of guys Truth or lies? This is do or die, and you regrettin' this mission, kid More palpable instances of how sad his existence is I dump lead often, Dow chemical with the 2-shot Known to drop shells, nigga, I'm Shredder on the roof top @jilti
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Jilti got this one, better wording and execution throughout so that just about every line connected even if some hit less then others.
Serge almost had me with the Warhol line but I just feel like that shit can be done, and better. Rest was nothing special. Jilti wins.
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09-20-2015, 03:27 PM | #7 |
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clap from jilti n warhol by serge were HEATERS
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09-27-2015, 06:23 PM | #9 |
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..those were pretty good, the rest I've either seen before or fell flat, imo.
Good verse, but for the most part it was quick witted w/ too little impact. Decent showings from both, but JILTI was more effective. |
09-28-2015, 08:13 AM | #10 |
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Jilti def got this imo.
Can't drop a reg vote, I'm on the phone away from the crib... but I had to see what Serge was up to. He's still got the skills to be a threat if he wanted.. just happened to lose this battle, in what I assume to be his 1st in quite some time. Rust was a factor here surely... tho I'm not taking anything away from Jilt cuz he dropped nice. Props to yall niggas. Good shit. |
09-29-2015, 09:00 PM | #11 |
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SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: jilti vs. Serge T
jilti: My feeling on this verse was that you had strong concepts, but your delivery was subpar. Your punchlines were clever enough to make me think, but not incomprehensible. That border is difficult to tread while maintaining humor, but you did so in a superb fashion. (The STP bar in particular was the funniest one I've seen in a long time.) What I disliked about this verse was the execution, especially the scheming. I caught an apparently broken multi in there at one or two points; such errors kill even the most well-thought-out punchlines. Your flow could also use some work. If you can perfect your rhyming, mixing internals in with lengthy, sustained, non-broken schemes, you could be a serious contender. Final Score: 14/20 Serge T: I liked your rhyming in this verse, and you had a few decent punchlines. However, in terms of humor, conceptual complexity, and overall impact, your bars were much weaker than your opponent's. You also had shorter lines, and consequently, less material. Your drop wasn't awful, but it was lacking in every area; severely so in some. I see potential in you, but you need to put in serious work. Final Score: 9/20 Final Thoughts: There's not that much for me to say on this one. Both had their high-points and their flaws, but one was more deficient. Good battle to both, and keep elevating. jilti gets my vote over Serge T (14 - 9)
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That won't work around here ^^^ break down your vote
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real deal already did a warhol line
i knew it would have been done
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10-06-2015, 11:18 AM | #18 |
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I did a Warhol line like 2 months ago
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Don't know any of you but i Vote for serge
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Jilti wins
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