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Old 10-21-2015, 01:02 PM   #1
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Old 10-24-2015, 01:58 PM   #2
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Old 10-28-2015, 09:07 AM   #4
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Might take ext.. Iono yet.
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Old 10-29-2015, 01:03 PM   #6
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Well I guess it's almost Winter and the question is, how longs it gonna snow?
& Battling Strik's like Groundhog-day, wondering whether this cunt will show.
You stupid weirdo bitch, when it comes to falseness your a diva,
Way your names come to mean half-assed bullshit, lets just call you Pura-Vida.
True talk I'll crush ya legs in vices Strik, and that aint the crap this dude talks,
Put you on a crutch 4 the rest of your fucking life & it won't be those newports.
Tells us he'll netflix and chill with scary chicks at will, dudes a fucking disgrace,
If she wants a live-stream so bad bro, just get Bags to piss on her face.

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Peeled a 1 inch skin flake off my genital psoriasis & balled it up like a booger then low key flicked it at my roommate while he was pouring coffee. Lol at him.
How about stop wanking you dirt, fuck you and your goofball schemes,
& your next thread was "my Redskins turned to Crap"
I din't expect it to be about your football team.




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Old 10-29-2015, 02:56 PM   #7
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Quick lil 10 fo ya..

Yo..

Learn to take a joke, half da shit I'm sayin ain't true
I've learned to take jokes.. especially in da BA.. & today I'ma take u
Dicks make em turn red & dis cockboy born to blow
Plot gets flushed after seein a snake like a stopped up toilet bowl
& multiple times daily u think things w/ men in mind
U ain't reminiscing bout Goldeneye days when u think of PP7 times
When I look thru da scope u can pray I don't murk u
In a circle w/ a cross that's gon have ya changing up church groups
This is horseshoes.. but it's not that game in a yard
When I put da metal on a plot regardless of his lameness involved

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Well I guess it's almost Winter and the question is, how longs it gonna snow?
& Battling Strik's like Groundhog-day, wondering whether this cunt will show.
--nothing here bro
You stupid weirdo bitch, when it comes to falseness your a diva,
Way your names come to mean half-assed bullshit, lets just call you Pura-Vida.
--haha this was nice
True talk I'll crush ya legs in vices Strik, and that aint the crap this dude talks,
Put you on a crutch 4 the rest of your fucking life & it won't be those newports.
--this is ok
Tells us he'll netflix and chill with scary chicks at will, dudes a fucking disgrace,
If she wants a live-stream so bad bro, just get Bags to piss on her face.
--gone lmao. this is only ok tho.



How about stop wanking you dirt, fuck you and your goofball schemes,
& your next thread was "my Redskins turned to Crap"
I din't expect it to be about your football team.
--uhhhh this is weird. this could have been decent but the execution was wack tbh




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Quick lil 10 fo ya..

Yo..

Learn to take a joke, half da shit I'm sayin ain't true
I've learned to take jokes.. especially in da BA.. & today I'ma take u
--this is ok
Dicks make em turn red & dis cockboy born to blow
Cuz u get flushed after seein a snake like a stopped up toilet bowl
--lol. this is ok as well.
& multiple times daily u think things w/ men in mind
U ain't reminiscing bout Goldeneye days when u think of PP7 times
--fucking gone. jesus christ. fire.
When I look thru da scope u can pray I don't murk u
In a circle w/ a cross that's gon have ya changing up church groups
--ok
This is horseshoes.. but it's not that game in a yard
When I put da metal on a plot regardless of his lameness involved
--nice
cool battle. love strks concept heavy style. even in a key his concepts are nice af

plot was pretty solid actually

half assed bullshit was dope and live stream was funny but only funny.

2-1 quotes in strikts favor

nice battlle

v/ strikta
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You stupid weirdo bitch, when it comes to falseness your a diva,
Way your names come to mean half-assed bullshit, lets just call you Pura-Vida.

Tells us he'll netflix and chill with scary chicks at will, dudes a fucking disgrace,
If she wants a live-stream so bad bro, just get Bags to piss on her face.
vs

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Quick lil 10 fo ya..

Yo..
Dicks make em turn red & dis cockboy born to blow
Plot gets flushed after seein a snake like a stopped up toilet bowl

When I look thru da scope u can pray I don't murk u
In a circle w/ a cross that's gon have ya changing up church groups
Read it twice, went with the verse with more creativity and more effective delivery for a harder hitting punch.

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Opener, Puravida, live stream
Really dope verse imo, the closer could've been delivered cleaner
& the cigarette bar was harsh, just straight forward, could've flipped it better.

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Goldeneye, church groups
Nice key, came off lazy tho, tbh. Other than the quote the bars weren't fresh enough flips.

PLOT gets the vote, seemed as tho Strik didn't too much gaf.
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True talk I'll crush ya legs in vices Strik, and that aint the crap this dude talks,
Put you on a crutch 4 the rest of your fucking life & it won't be those newports.
Tells us he'll netflix and chill with scary chicks at will, dudes a fucking disgrace,
If she wants a live-stream so bad bro, just get Bags to piss on her face.
How about stop wanking you dirt, fuck you and your goofball schemes,
& your next thread was "my Redskins turned to Crap"
I din't expect it to be about your football team.


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Learn to take a joke, half da shit I'm sayin ain't true
I've learned to take jokes.. especially in da BA.. & today I'ma take u
& multiple times daily u think things w/ men in mind
U ain't reminiscing bout Goldeneye days when u think of PP7 times
When I look thru da scope u can pray I don't murk u
In a circle w/ a cross that's gon have ya changing up church groups
This is horseshoes.. but it's not that game in a yard
When I put da metal on a plot regardless of his lameness involved



Overall: plot had a decent verse, never seen him battle so I didn't know what to expect and it was better than I expected tbh. But some of his shit was light. Strik had a good verse too, that pp7 times line was stupid funny tho lol. But that in a circle with a cross line was fire imo. This is close but that line got him the win.

Good battle, props to both


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Well I guess it's almost Winter and the question is, how longs it gonna snow?
& Battling Strik's like Groundhog-day, wondering whether this cunt will show.
ok
You stupid weirdo bitch, when it comes to falseness your a diva,
Way your names come to mean half-assed bullshit, lets just call you Pura-Vida.
decent
True talk I'll crush ya legs in vices Strik, and that aint the crap this dude talks,
Put you on a crutch 4 the rest of your fucking life & it won't be those newports.
nope
Tells us he'll netflix and chill with scary chicks at will, dudes a fucking disgrace,
If she wants a live-stream so bad bro, just get Bags to piss on her face.
ddopee
How about stop wanking you dirt, fuck you and your goofball schemes,
& your next thread was "my Redskins turned to Crap"
I din't expect it to be about your football team.
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Learn to take a joke, half da shit I'm sayin ain't true
I've learned to take jokes.. especially in da BA.. & today I'ma take u
nah at this opener
Dicks make em turn red & dis cockboy born to blow
Plot gets flushed after seein a snake like a stopped up toilet bowl
lol nasty but nice
& multiple times daily u think things w/ men in mind
U ain't reminiscing bout Goldeneye days when u think of PP7 times
fireee lotb so far
When I look thru da scope u can pray I don't murk u
In a circle w/ a cross that's gon have ya changing up church groups
dope
This is horseshoes.. but it's not that game in a yard
When I put da metal on a plot regardless of his lameness involved
solid closer


vote; goes to strikta, this was a good battle both had some heat...i think strikta
won with the lotb joint that pp7 line was crazy...plot had a good verse also,
liked the stream bar i lol'd...good shit yah'll.
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halfass, redskins lmao

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joke,snake,pp7,cross

I thought strik actually came pretty hard. cross/church line was creative and dope. Plot had 2-3 nice concepts too, I just thought boa constikta was more consistant

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okay I though that plot came dope here he had a couple dope concepts and I think strikta struggled with wording......just my opinion but I thought plot came harder and more personal......maybe I was missing something but strikta just felt like it didn't flow as deeply as the other voters are saying in this thread...
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