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Old 05-21-2013, 12:08 PM   #1
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Old 05-23-2013, 10:37 AM   #2
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Old 05-23-2013, 11:40 AM   #3
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I propose that pryde keeps his record of 17-68 here also
Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts
I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write
Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice!
I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot
When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got
The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more
yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door
My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up
Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut
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Old 05-23-2013, 11:22 PM   #4
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Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man
Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan
This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy
A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery
Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke
Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq
Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks.
... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks
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Old 05-24-2013, 12:18 PM   #5
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Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts
It's not hard hitting but I see where you're going
I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write
Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice!
More of a statement but funny at least lol
I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot
When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got
Pretty nice.
The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more
yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door
lol
My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up
Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut
I didn't like the wording on this one. Better wording could have made it work better imo.

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Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man
Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan
Eh not feeling it.
This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy
A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery
No.
Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke
Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq
Not feeling this one either.
Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks.
... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks
Really didn't like this bar.
Who you lying to chief I been high for a week with a dime thats a freak
While Your bitch, always put the sweatpants on and say I'm trying to sleep
No.

So I really think this is completely one sided towards Flo. No diss just the truth. Vote Flo Real.
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Old 05-28-2013, 09:17 PM   #6
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Your opener was a played concept...second bar was ehhh...Ima say the best you had was no pryde....and even that was iffy imo


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Opener was ehh...Was feeling the wrestling refernce..closetr made me laugh for some reason..

Overall nothing to eye popping here....both came sort of weak but Pryde had those 2 bars I was feeling and Flo had the No Pryde with bad wording...

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Old 05-28-2013, 10:05 PM   #7
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Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man
Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan

Looks like he did....but u aint doin much here....

This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy
A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery

Lol...aight

Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke
Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq

Ehh

Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks.
... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks

Okish

Who you lying to chief I been high for a week with a dime thats a freak
While Your bitch, always put the sweatpants on and say I'm trying to sleep

Ehh

Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts

Lol@a quote from me. Strong quote to work woth....but u aint really hurt him at all....hes only got 73 posts....an u shouldve focused on how much he lost....not posts....specially with a low post count.

I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write
Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice!

This is boring

I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot
When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got

Mad.easy....plus after 100battles pride nameplays r played out....u gotta dig deeper

The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more
yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door

Set up was weird? Punch was bleh

My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up
Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut

Whens the last time u told one of ur homies u smashed.sum bitch an blew her up?? Lmfao....stop reachin



Only shit i really like was prydes lottery line.....first 2lines set it up....was a 4line punch....if flo dropped any real bangers.or this were close thatd hurt him.....but as itbstands that was the only shit that i felt.

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even battle cuz both of you need more work,
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Flo Real, Felt got straight to the point, some of his bars were played but I felt Pryde came to basic for his opponent.. Giving the W to Flo for a more all around verse.
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Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts
I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot
When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got
The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more
yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door

vs.

This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy
A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery

got @Flo Real taking this with ease
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Old 06-05-2013, 11:29 AM   #13
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i have either one winning but based of my interests and who intrigued me with there content and punch being on a smooth transition of such. i aint dogging no body as camp came nice . both ideals were VAST .... i felt like that this battle was straight forward battle. but i have zen taking this with a tad more creative
So even though this was a match Flo vs Pryde

Your voting Zen, But Camp came nice???

Lol - wrong battle dude
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This was like a battle of rhyming statements...didn't see a lot of actual punchlines.
I'll try to break it down though.

Flo: first bar referred to his losses as high as his post count, but didn't even connect them that well... on top of the fact that it's one of the most basic lines you can write.
Second was just as simple and dry, but at least it was a little more hurtful.
The no pride was too obvious to not have been used, not executed fresh either.
Come back line was probably ur best, but was still played and lacked execution of a real concept.
Blow up dolls are played, and that was not a new twist, and didn't make sense really.

Pryde: first bar had negative sting to it.
The lottery ticket line wasn't crafty at all but it was aight.
Who's varuq?
I see what you tried to do there with the repeat line, but that was not good in any sense.
Last bar had cool flow but no punchline, just a statement.

Really hard to judge. Pryde was a little fresher with a couple concepts but I thought flo had better execution. I see what everyone else is saying but I honestly thought Flo had it, by a pube.

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Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts
ehh
I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write
Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice!
i chuckled
I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot
When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got
it's cool
The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more
yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door
ehh
My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up
Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut
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Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man
Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan
ok
This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy
A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery
i like
Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke
Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq
ehh
Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks.
... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks
couldve worded this better
Who you lying to chief I been high for a week with a dime thats a freak
While Your bitch, always put the sweatpants on and say I'm trying to sleep
ehh
reading twice i think pryde got this just cuz i like the crystal ball line the best... and i think some of his lines were a tad better not much tho..
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