05-21-2013, 12:08 PM | #1 |
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Pryde vs Flo - FLO WINS
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05-23-2013, 10:37 AM | #2 |
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05-23-2013, 11:40 AM | #3 |
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Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice! I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut |
05-23-2013, 11:22 PM | #4 |
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Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man
Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks. ... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks Who you lying to chief I been high for a week with a dime thats a freak While Your bitch, always put the sweatpants on and say I'm trying to sleep |
05-24-2013, 12:18 PM | #5 |
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Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts It's not hard hitting but I see where you're going I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice! More of a statement but funny at least lol I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got Pretty nice. The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door lol My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut I didn't like the wording on this one. Better wording could have made it work better imo. Pryde Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan Eh not feeling it. This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery No. Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq Not feeling this one either. Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks. ... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks Really didn't like this bar. Who you lying to chief I been high for a week with a dime thats a freak While Your bitch, always put the sweatpants on and say I'm trying to sleep No. So I really think this is completely one sided towards Flo. No diss just the truth. Vote Flo Real. |
05-28-2013, 09:17 PM | #6 |
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Your opener was a played concept...second bar was ehhh...Ima say the best you had was no pryde....and even that was iffy imo Pryde Opener was ehh...Was feeling the wrestling refernce..closetr made me laugh for some reason.. Overall nothing to eye popping here....both came sort of weak but Pryde had those 2 bars I was feeling and Flo had the No Pryde with bad wording... V/Pryde |
05-28-2013, 10:05 PM | #7 |
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Ill put pryde rock hard in ya bitch I'm the best across the net man
Shit.. you researchin me so much I've already counted you as my next fan Looks like he did....but u aint doin much here.... This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery Lol...aight Bitch you need a lot of sleep. I always got hotties that's jockin me duke Flo jock scottie 2 hottie and land a bitches that look like varuq Ehh Im the truth but nobody cares about flow this sites full of mimicking geeks. ... You aint cool, nobody cares about flo and this sites full of mimicking geeks Okish Who you lying to chief I been high for a week with a dime thats a freak While Your bitch, always put the sweatpants on and say I'm trying to sleep Ehh Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts Lol@a quote from me. Strong quote to work woth....but u aint really hurt him at all....hes only got 73 posts....an u shouldve focused on how much he lost....not posts....specially with a low post count. I don't think if you had 1000 battles you will ever learn how to write Your last league battle with megatron was 9 nil an thats enough votes to lose twice! This is boring I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got Mad.easy....plus after 100battles pride nameplays r played out....u gotta dig deeper The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door Set up was weird? Punch was bleh My mrs loves when im givin it her, pumping her, I fucking blow that bitch up Pryde pumps and blows his mrs up too, but shes a silicone doll as opposed to a slut Whens the last time u told one of ur homies u smashed.sum bitch an blew her up?? Lmfao....stop reachin Only shit i really like was prydes lottery line.....first 2lines set it up....was a 4line punch....if flo dropped any real bangers.or this were close thatd hurt him.....but as itbstands that was the only shit that i felt. V pryde |
05-28-2013, 10:12 PM | #8 |
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even battle cuz both of you need more work,
Vote-p for Lottery line |
05-29-2013, 05:36 AM | #9 |
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06-03-2013, 03:41 PM | #10 |
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06-04-2013, 10:41 PM | #11 |
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Flo Real, Felt got straight to the point, some of his bars were played but I felt Pryde came to basic for his opponent.. Giving the W to Flo for a more all around verse.
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06-05-2013, 09:24 AM | #12 |
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Not surprised you started a fresh Yo old record aint something to boast
shit its a higher number then the number thats currently sitting next to your posts I got smooth moves girls are quick to say yes when I put them on the spot When you ask Bitches they always say no pride - <--- an that's exactly what you've got The bitches I fuck are like a terminators ....they always comes back for more yours always come back too, 20 dollers an hour with an up front payment at the door vs. This nigga got my bibliography and my discography, my stance on the economy A camera in my bathroom. a crystal ball that say my next week picks for the lottery got @Flo Real taking this with ease
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06-05-2013, 06:51 PM | #14 |
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This was like a battle of rhyming statements...didn't see a lot of actual punchlines.
I'll try to break it down though. Flo: first bar referred to his losses as high as his post count, but didn't even connect them that well... on top of the fact that it's one of the most basic lines you can write. Second was just as simple and dry, but at least it was a little more hurtful. The no pride was too obvious to not have been used, not executed fresh either. Come back line was probably ur best, but was still played and lacked execution of a real concept. Blow up dolls are played, and that was not a new twist, and didn't make sense really. Pryde: first bar had negative sting to it. The lottery ticket line wasn't crafty at all but it was aight. Who's varuq? I see what you tried to do there with the repeat line, but that was not good in any sense. Last bar had cool flow but no punchline, just a statement. Really hard to judge. Pryde was a little fresher with a couple concepts but I thought flo had better execution. I see what everyone else is saying but I honestly thought Flo had it, by a pube. V/Flo |
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