Amalgam vs GKillaZ - AMALGAM WINS 4-1

GKillaZ · 05-14-2013, 08:38 PM

Rules:
10 Lines
due an hour from check in (drop links and check in)

lets do this, goodluck.
Battle of the new guys!

Amalgam · 05-14-2013, 08:59 PM

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!

GKillaZ · 05-14-2013, 09:26 PM

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth

quick key, goodluck!

Defiant · 06-03-2013, 03:37 PM

0-0 UPPIN

GKillaZ · 06-05-2013, 05:41 PM

it was 1-0, now 0-0?

Flow · 06-07-2013, 11:35 AM

I tried to break this down but what the knuck....

This wasn't a battle I appreciated.
I preferred one for the read but it had 0 to no sting and the other I dispised specifically for the cap locks but it had the most basic concepts an the punches were weak as....

That being said he still had some punches and it kills me to say it but I have to vote on

Amalgam

Atomic · 06-09-2013, 05:14 AM

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
punch is weak, connection is simple, concept is cool
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
way too simple, okay attempt
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!
haha, dece
Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR!
lol no
Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!
nah man

//

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
meh
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
no
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
wtf? no
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
nah man
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth
okay...thats literally just a statement

1st guy came very simple & only had a few okayish bars, other guy literally just hyped himself up/had punches with literally no impact.

v/ amalgam because he had a verse w/ some punches/okay attempts.

Loast · 06-10-2013, 08:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Amalgam

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
ok
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
ehh
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!
ehh

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
ehh
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!
ehh

Quote:

Originally Posted by GKillaZ

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
its ok... could've worded better
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
ehh
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
ehh
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
pretty straight concept.. couldve hit harder tho
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth
ehh

quick key, goodluck!

vote - gkillaz
agam was bland and boring G had a straight nameplay and the dope line was pretty straight

GKillaZ · 06-21-2013, 05:59 PM

2-2 . someone erased my first vote.

Split · 06-21-2013, 10:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GKillaZ

2-2 . someone erased my first vote.

it was Bleak trolling the new guys. he quoted half a bar from the other guy and voted for you. discounted.

trap. · 06-25-2013, 07:37 AM

2-1, Amal. More votes.

Sharp · 06-25-2013, 12:44 PM

Gam had attempts at wp. killaz was generally statementish except for the dope line, which is pretty played out. Edging to amalgam for I guess having more attempts on the right track. killaz has alright wording but is too statementish to get anything here.

V/amalgam

Gazette · 06-27-2013, 12:40 AM

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!

- good multies, i think u got a bit too caught up in em which made your punches suffer a bit, but the creativity was there. wasn't very personal, 1st 2 bars were too fillerish

vs

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth

man ur ideas were really underdeveloped, some of the concepts had potential but you didnt capitalize at all, impersonal also, you needa orginise ur punches / set-ups better n just think about em more

v/ amalgam

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Amalgam	1	100.00%
GKillaZ	0	0%
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05-14-2013, 08:38 PM	#1
GKillaZ Killin' G'z Join Date: May 2013 Location: CANADA Posts: 318 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 34	Amalgam vs GKillaZ - AMALGAM WINS 4-1 Rules: 10 Lines due an hour from check in (drop links and check in) lets do this, goodluck. Battle of the new guys! __________________ [SIGPIC]http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/116185608/43/43_untitleddd.gif[/SIGPIC]

05-14-2013, 09:26 PM	#3
GKillaZ Killin' G'z Join Date: May 2013 Location: CANADA Posts: 318 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 34	First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma... My scripture will flip your act backwards.... ...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama! Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn gams on a permanent vacation! ...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth quick key, goodluck! __________________ [SIGPIC]http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/116185608/43/43_untitleddd.gif[/SIGPIC]

06-05-2013, 05:41 PM	#5
GKillaZ Killin' G'z Join Date: May 2013 Location: CANADA Posts: 318 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 34	it was 1-0, now 0-0? __________________ [SIGPIC]http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/116185608/43/43_untitleddd.gif[/SIGPIC]

06-21-2013, 05:59 PM	#9
GKillaZ Killin' G'z Join Date: May 2013 Location: CANADA Posts: 318 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 34	2-2 . someone erased my first vote. __________________ [SIGPIC]http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/116185608/43/43_untitleddd.gif[/SIGPIC]

05-14-2013, 08:59 PM	#2
Amalgam Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 9 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 34	I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES! You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE! Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED! Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate" like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!

06-03-2013, 03:37 PM	#4
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	0-0 UPPIN

06-09-2013, 05:14 AM	#7
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES! punch is weak, connection is simple, concept is cool You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE! way too simple, okay attempt Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED! haha, dece Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate" like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! lol no Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG! nah man // First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma... My scripture will flip your act backwards.... ...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama! meh Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose no But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet wtf? no My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn gams on a permanent vacation! ...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking nah man your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth okay...thats literally just a statement 1st guy came very simple & only had a few okayish bars, other guy literally just hyped himself up/had punches with literally no impact. v/ amalgam because he had a verse w/ some punches/okay attempts.

06-25-2013, 07:37 AM	#11
trap. Senior Citizen Join Date: Aug 1997 Posts: 3,871 Battle Record: 4-3 Rep Power: 0	2-1, Amal. More votes.

06-27-2013, 12:40 AM	#13
Gazette Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 186 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 34	I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES! You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE! Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED! Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate" like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG! - good multies, i think u got a bit too caught up in em which made your punches suffer a bit, but the creativity was there. wasn't very personal, 1st 2 bars were too fillerish vs First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma... My scripture will flip your act backwards.... ...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama! Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn gams on a permanent vacation! ...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth man ur ideas were really underdeveloped, some of the concepts had potential but you didnt capitalize at all, impersonal also, you needa orginise ur punches / set-ups better n just think about em more v/ amalgam