Lecture vs Atomic - LECTURE WINS 4-0

Lecture · 06-27-2013, 12:41 AM

12 Lines. Thats it.
No homosexual shit.

My Links:
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7998
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7797

Atomic · 06-27-2013, 12:42 AM

i'd drop links but i've voted on everything & mods know that, so word.

check.

Lecture · 06-27-2013, 01:45 PM

Lets be serious..

Your not a real emcee, ur the attention whore type
rhyme a few words to get noticed..
but your names the closest A will ever come To a Mic
You wanna act out despite, ur a lame without flare
we all know when you break down an Atom.. E=MC2
Get it a MC whos Square, fuck it,
I didn't even write this shit..
You got 3 wins? then its time for me to right this ship
Cause thinkin its smooth sailin & the W's where u might go
when this bitches flow wouldn't even count as menstrual cycle
I haven't done text in years n thats what makes this sick
I seen shit that'll make your shit look like shit, back in 2006
To find the conclusion to this battle after this faggot chokes
all u have to do is put L before A ND watch me SLIDE the votes

w/e.

Atomic · 06-27-2013, 04:45 PM

quick key b4 work, all i need lolz..

my shit comes correct while you're known to flop more,
w/ your wackness you need to come clean, PLUS this'll be a wash, board.
keep bitching & moping.. i'll start ripping you open,
this will be the funniest upset like conflicting emotions!
ur verse isn't fire u retard, i guess i'll lend u a torch,
part of a driveby?! this faggot might pull up n shoot, either way it'll end up in court.
i'll read ur verse, NO FUCKING QUOTES. i'm sick of it.
ur wack shit needs a character limit, we should have battled on twitter bitch.
you need to take time w/ ur bars, it's ok find ur purpose boss,
so i told him to reach deep down & he started trying to jerk me off.
u fell off, used to be average but now i know it's true you slipped,
kid wouldn't light me up w/ the Tech, NO. it'd be more like strobes&music bitch.

kbye

Flow · 06-28-2013, 04:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lecture

Lets be serious..

Your not a real emcee, ur the attention whore type
rhyme a few words to get noticed..
but your names the closest A will ever come To a Mic
lol that doesn't even rhyme but whatever.. idea was there but the whole set up an punchline was awful
You wanna act out despite, ur a lame without flare
we all know when you break down an Atom.. E=MC2
lol I liked the idea, isn't great though but I like your fresh concepts so im give you this one...
Get it a MC whos Square, fuck it,
I didn't even write this shit..
don't explain or make out like your actually freestyling... this is text, you could easily edit whatever you want before hitting send lol
You got 3 wins? then its time for me to right this ship
Cause thinkin its smooth sailin & the W's where u might go
when this bitches flow wouldn't even count as menstrual cycle
rhyming is off again - wins where you might go was subtle wordplay but menstrual cycle came off to much of a statement for me - wasn't much of a punch either, no sting, would be better in a swag and flow verse
I haven't done text in years n thats what makes this sick
I seen shit that'll make your shit look like shit, back in 2006
statement but again would be good in a s & f
To find the conclusion to this battle after this faggot chokes
all u have to do is put L before A ND watch me SLIDE the votes
meh no

some fresh concepts but bad delivery - either adapt your style or try some s & f battles where your skills may be better placed...
w/e.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Atomic

quick key b4 work, all i need lolz..

my shit comes correct while you're known to flop more,
w/ your wackness you need to come clean, PLUS this'll be a wash, board.
unless I am missing something this is a miss
keep bitching & moping.. i'll start ripping you open,
this will be the funniest upset like conflicting emotions!
see what your trying but no punch
ur verse isn't fire u retard, i guess i'll lend u a torch,
part of a driveby?! this faggot might pull up n shoot, either way it'll end up in court.
no....
i'll read ur verse, NO FUCKING QUOTES. i'm sick of it.
ur wack shit needs a character limit, we should have battled on twitter bitch.
you could of used the twitter character limit thing for something good...this was not
you need to take time w/ ur bars, it's ok find ur purpose boss,
so i told him to reach deep down & he started trying to jerk me off.
not as bad
u fell off, used to be average but now i know it's true you slipped,
kid wouldn't light me up w/ the Tech, NO. it'd be more like strobes&music bitch.

maine this was awful - yes your competition wasn't great but you came well to light with a very clearly rushed verse....

kbye

I cant quote a punch from either....

I am going to have to give this to lecture for some concepts that were fresh and creative.

Minds · 06-28-2013, 08:02 AM

Quote:

Your not a real emcee, ur the attention whore type
rhyme a few words to get noticed..
but your names the closest A will ever come To a Mic

Quote:

we all know when you break down an Atom.. E=MC2
Get it a MC whos Square, fuck it,

Not really the best punch lines cause it didn't rhyme well but the concept was there and the flow wasn't bad.

Quote:

keep bitching & moping.. i'll start ripping you open,
this will be the funniest upset like conflicting emotions!

Definitely the best one IMO out of your verse, still not as hard as I expected since we just battled but this one was creative.

I'm gonna have to give it to lecture having a bit more punches that stood out, both of you had a decent flow and where comparable more or less, except for the punches. Little disappointed in Atomic cause you came harder in our battle and this verse was a step down from yours on ours. I know you can be more creative than that bro.

Lecture

Lecture · 07-01-2013, 02:58 PM

Ramp up 2-0 - votes

Inno · 07-03-2013, 01:16 AM

good battle..

came down to a punch tho...I think that e=mc2 shit was enough to edge atomics emotions line which I thought was the best line from his verse..tbh if lecture would rhymed that atomic flip better that shit would of been dope...doesn't rhyme tho..overall pretty even but I got lecture with the dub

good shit

Sharp · 07-04-2013, 05:38 PM

both of you shut up

Your not a real emcee, ur the attention whore type
rhyme a few words to get noticed..
but your names the closest A will ever come To a Mic
really dated kind of nameflip
You wanna act out despite, ur a lame without flare
we all know when you break down an Atom.. E=MC2
less old but still old. coolish tho
Get it a MC whos Square, fuck it,
I didn't even write this shit..
You got 3 wins? then its time for me to right this ship
this was so unneeded. you can take time to write shit but this is like something you'd say while freestyling in person
Cause thinkin its smooth sailin & the W's where u might go
when this bitches flow wouldn't even count as menstrual cycle
corny idea, rhyme is off, and you addressed him in the second person and third in the same phrase. sloppy mistakes
I haven't done text in years n thats what makes this sick
I seen shit that'll make your shit look like shit, back in 2006
okay idea but delievered as a satement
To find the conclusion to this battle after this faggot chokes
all u have to do is put L before A ND watch me SLIDE the votes
again, not a live battle. pretty corny idea
w/e.

my shit comes correct while you're known to flop more,
w/ your wackness you need to come clean, PLUS this'll be a wash, board.
who were you addressing with this? you were addressing your opponent directly in the setup, then addressed 'board' in the punch. i took it to be the board, but if you're calling him board or saying you'll be board its unclear. also meh idea
keep bitching & moping.. i'll start ripping you open,
this will be the funniest upset like conflicting emotions!
kind of a flex line. okay idea but deliver was lame
ur verse isn't fire u retard, i guess i'll lend u a torch,
part of a driveby?! this faggot might pull up n shoot, either way it'll end up in court.
not too well done
i'll read ur verse, NO FUCKING QUOTES. i'm sick of it.
ur wack shit needs a character limit, we should have battled on twitter bitch.
closest thing to a punch so far but it was mad statementish
you need to take time w/ ur bars, it's ok find ur purpose boss,
so i told him to reach deep down & he started trying to jerk me off.
again, watch who you're addressing. 'you' in the setup and 'he' in the punch. this didnt really work
u fell off, used to be average but now i know it's true you slipped,
kid wouldn't light me up w/ the Tech, NO. it'd be more like strobes&music bitch.
same issue with who youre addressing. Tech, no is an alright idea but the way it was done took a lot away from it

mc2 was corny but the best attempt of the battle. atom couldve had it easily but his concepts were mad rushed and didnt really hit

v/lecture

Atomic · 07-04-2013, 05:53 PM

no U

Atomic · 07-04-2013, 05:54 PM

i was saying this will be a wash, board. as in i'm talking about him to the board. it's pretty simple man.

Sharp · 07-04-2013, 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Atomic

i was saying this will be a wash, board. as in i'm talking about him to the board. it's pretty simple man.

Then you were addressing multiple persons in the same sentence WHATEVER THOS IS DONE

06-27-2013, 12:41 AM	#1
Lecture The Playground Bully Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 34	Lecture vs Atomic - LECTURE WINS 4-0 12 Lines. Thats it. No homosexual shit. My Links: http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7998 http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7797 __________________ creativity, effortless while to yall it be a chore bars be fucking ugly to the point ill nik-A could even score Last edited by Lecture; 06-27-2013 at 02:07 PM. Reason: Added voting links.

06-27-2013, 01:45 PM	#3
Lecture The Playground Bully Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 34	Lets be serious.. Your not a real emcee, ur the attention whore type rhyme a few words to get noticed.. but your names the closest A will ever come To a Mic You wanna act out despite, ur a lame without flare we all know when you break down an Atom.. E=MC2 Get it a MC whos Square, fuck it, I didn't even write this shit.. You got 3 wins? then its time for me to right this ship Cause thinkin its smooth sailin & the W's where u might go when this bitches flow wouldn't even count as menstrual cycle I haven't done text in years n thats what makes this sick I seen shit that'll make your shit look like shit, back in 2006 To find the conclusion to this battle after this faggot chokes all u have to do is put L before A ND watch me SLIDE the votes w/e. __________________ creativity, effortless while to yall it be a chore bars be fucking ugly to the point ill nik-A could even score

07-01-2013, 02:58 PM	#7
Lecture The Playground Bully Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 34	Ramp up 2-0 - votes __________________ creativity, effortless while to yall it be a chore bars be fucking ugly to the point ill nik-A could even score

06-27-2013, 12:42 AM	#2
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	i'd drop links but i've voted on everything & mods know that, so word. check.

06-27-2013, 04:45 PM	#4
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	quick key b4 work, all i need lolz.. my shit comes correct while you're known to flop more, w/ your wackness you need to come clean, PLUS this'll be a wash, board. keep bitching & moping.. i'll start ripping you open, this will be the funniest upset like conflicting emotions! ur verse isn't fire u retard, i guess i'll lend u a torch, part of a driveby?! this faggot might pull up n shoot, either way it'll end up in court. i'll read ur verse, NO FUCKING QUOTES. i'm sick of it. ur wack shit needs a character limit, we should have battled on twitter bitch. you need to take time w/ ur bars, it's ok find ur purpose boss, so i told him to reach deep down & he started trying to jerk me off. u fell off, used to be average but now i know it's true you slipped, kid wouldn't light me up w/ the Tech, NO. it'd be more like strobes&music bitch. kbye

07-03-2013, 01:16 AM	#8
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	good battle.. came down to a punch tho...I think that e=mc2 shit was enough to edge atomics emotions line which I thought was the best line from his verse..tbh if lecture would rhymed that atomic flip better that shit would of been dope...doesn't rhyme tho..overall pretty even but I got lecture with the dub good shit

07-04-2013, 05:53 PM	#10
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	no U

07-04-2013, 05:54 PM	#11
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	i was saying this will be a wash, board. as in i'm talking about him to the board. it's pretty simple man.