Animosi T vs Sharp Nine - SHARP WINS 4-1

[Atomic]

8 lines
House rules
LETS GO
LETS MAKE IT DOPE
HOT FIYAH
SWEG

@Sharp Nine @Animosi T

[Animosi T]

http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=85912&postcount=9

My vote link

[Sharp]

it's two links per person @Animosi T

http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=90316&postcount=9
http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=91563&postcount=5

[Animosi T]

Alright, I will write first then vote on another battle

[Sharp]

lil welcoming key. however this goes, hang around, league and tourney stuff's always a lot faster w/ votes.


I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world

[Animosi T]

Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine

4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer

You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.

My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)


Last bar, Anderson Silva got knocked out by a guy named Chris Wiedman. Silva was dancing around.

[Animosi T]

Second vote link: http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=91601&postcount=6

[Coup]

SN-

I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded

seemed like a forced name play, but w/e animanicsa are crazy like

i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish

ha nice

i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator

I see you

but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world

hmmm..a personal I see, but I ani't in the know..still it works

AnimosiT

Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine

wordy, but yeah man I can fap to this

4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer

hmmm....ok...good concept, just off

You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.

My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)

close one actually.

Edge this out to SN for more smooth and a consistent delivery...

Good luck guys.

[Animosi T]

Thanks for the vote

[Lotto Smirk]

I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world

vs

Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine

ok but well to wordy

vote- sharp

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

lil welcoming key. however this goes, hang around, league and tourney stuff's always a lot faster w/ votes.


I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
K
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in Spanish
lol
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
Ok wordplay, sting was lacking
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
bit mean...

You came laxed.... I already read ahead... you got this

Originally Posted by Animosi T

Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
I see where you were going, waaaaay to much filler, the sting wasn't great, define your concept, for example sex life and time and the age of wine, then set up/punchline which you could of done with half the words here... does this make sense??? hit me up on pm if it doesn't an ill explain better, im trying to do some quick voting

4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer
weak

You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.
weak

My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)
weak


Last bar, Anderson Silva got knocked out by a guy named Chris Wiedman. Silva was dancing around.

Vote Sharp

[Gazette]

I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded

decent

i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish

eh, felt rushed. where ur multies at as well?

i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator

concept decent, execution lazy.

but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world


meh. cant say i enjoyed this, it would read as well skipping every set-up line apart from the first.



vs



Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine

ummm, nice attempt at associative nameplay, didnt come off as i thin you would have hoped

4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer

ok, nothin' to shout about

You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.

kinda liked this, all relevant. not much of a punch, in fact i think u shoulda switched lines, but u kept it relevant enough to be interesting to read

My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)

felt out of place, though the homophone was fine


Imma have to go with Ani here, though not having quite as much skill, it was much more interesting to read, more relevant. nines laziness just annoyed me

v/ Ani

[God Of War]

I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded

vs

nada

dude who isnt sharp needs to work on hs wording n concepts


v,\/nine