Championship Match: Jilti vs. Letterman [Jilti Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 11-01-2014, 08:18 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Letterman · 11-01-2014, 11:03 AM

Ok.

jilti · 11-03-2014, 02:33 PM

sharpen blade. take out the meat cleaver & start chopping away
Butcher Letter worse than mayweather reciting drops from a page

Letterman · 11-04-2014, 07:50 AM

Your skill is undefined. You battle alot but dopeness, you don't come near bro
So I'd tell you to put quality over quantity, but there's no way to divide by zero

Packed Graves · 11-04-2014, 08:18 AM

Current event tied with a personal behind it vs a stretched bar with a shaky concepts.

Champ

Blanco Bishop · 11-04-2014, 09:10 AM

I don't think letter was creative enough here. Jil was smooth n funny

V jil

~RustyGunZ~ · 11-04-2014, 10:52 AM

jil easy

fresh · 11-04-2014, 11:56 AM

Jilti's punch woulda worked if it was against wordz, but butcher letter doesn't work for me.

Letterman was simple, but it actually worked so he's gettin my vote.

v/letter

BROKE LESNAR · 11-04-2014, 04:42 PM

I have tbph here, I thought that the "butcher letter" np was clever, but in the context it was used, I didn't think it worked. I could understand if you put "butcher wordz" but it wouldn't work. Now instead of looking at it like that, I am going to interpret it as Mayweather reading a letter, as in note, reading off of that. All of that aside, I've seen alot of Mayweather play's ever since his reading debacle. I will ignore that, too. When it came to the bar that made me think, really made me delve deeper into it, it would be Letterman's. I actually liked the concept as much as Jilti's irregardless of how critical I might have been. So, I'm going with Letterman.

v-Letterman

Spoken · 11-04-2014, 05:28 PM

I got letterman.

Jilti was a nice concept but I think it was less an impact idk... When I read these bars it's like the punches I see on kotd and such and u know those bars they recite and get the Ohhhh factor... that bar just had the whoo... letter used a generic bar but he kept it personal but also didn't have the ohhhh factor as well but just felt more of a sting on it than jil

Certain · 11-04-2014, 05:31 PM

jilti: Terrible wording on a current-events concept that's already been used a bit, but at least it had the name aspect.

Letterman: Quality over quantity would mean you would be dividing by quantity, which you admit is "alot," not zero.

Vote: jilti

Red Soldier · 11-04-2014, 07:51 PM

V/ letterman... Jils would have worked better if it were butcher words.

YDK · 11-04-2014, 08:54 PM

Both were decent, honestly not as good as I was expecting from a champ match but I got jilti taken it with a smoother flow an funnier concept

Kin · 11-05-2014, 08:33 AM

Jil--- damn...that last line was Fire...made kinda a older topic hot again...nice inner rhyme scheme wit' it an np...yesssiiir..

Letter-
like the idea...juz feel it wasn't as smooth or hitting as hard as J

vote-iLL jiLL

El Muffin · 11-06-2014, 03:04 PM

fkn hated both tbh

jils dsnt work

lettermans dsnt work to me..despite his expos

wat he was getting at is played tho

if its a draw imo the champ retains

v/jikti

11-01-2014, 08:18 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Championship Match: Jilti vs. Letterman [Jilti Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

11-04-2014, 08:18 AM	#5
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777844	Current event tied with a personal behind it vs a stretched bar with a shaky concepts. Champ __________________ back

11-04-2014, 05:28 PM	#10
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	I got letterman. Jilti was a nice concept but I think it was less an impact idk... When I read these bars it's like the punches I see on kotd and such and u know those bars they recite and get the Ohhhh factor... that bar just had the whoo... letter used a generic bar but he kept it personal but also didn't have the ohhhh factor as well but just felt more of a sting on it than jil __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-04-2014, 05:31 PM	#11
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899402	jilti: Terrible wording on a current-events concept that's already been used a bit, but at least it had the name aspect. Letterman: Quality over quantity would mean you would be dividing by quantity, which you admit is "alot," not zero. Vote: jilti __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

11-04-2014, 08:54 PM	#13
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	Both were decent, honestly not as good as I was expecting from a champ match but I got jilti taken it with a smoother flow an funnier concept __________________

11-01-2014, 11:03 AM	#2
Letterman Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 15-11 Rep Power: 374701	Ok.

11-03-2014, 02:33 PM	#3
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816224	sharpen blade. take out the meat cleaver & start chopping away Butcher Letter worse than mayweather reciting drops from a page

11-04-2014, 07:50 AM	#4
Letterman Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 15-11 Rep Power: 374701	Your skill is undefined. You battle alot but dopeness, you don't come near bro So I'd tell you to put quality over quantity, but there's no way to divide by zero

11-04-2014, 09:10 AM	#6
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	I don't think letter was creative enough here. Jil was smooth n funny V jil

11-04-2014, 10:52 AM	#7
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,852 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899402	jil easy

11-04-2014, 11:56 AM	#8
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Jilti's punch woulda worked if it was against wordz, but butcher letter doesn't work for me. Letterman was simple, but it actually worked so he's gettin my vote. v/letter

11-04-2014, 04:42 PM	#9
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I have tbph here, I thought that the "butcher letter" np was clever, but in the context it was used, I didn't think it worked. I could understand if you put "butcher wordz" but it wouldn't work. Now instead of looking at it like that, I am going to interpret it as Mayweather reading a letter, as in note, reading off of that. All of that aside, I've seen alot of Mayweather play's ever since his reading debacle. I will ignore that, too. When it came to the bar that made me think, really made me delve deeper into it, it would be Letterman's. I actually liked the concept as much as Jilti's irregardless of how critical I might have been. So, I'm going with Letterman. v-Letterman

11-04-2014, 07:51 PM	#12
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	V/ letterman... Jils would have worked better if it were butcher words.

11-05-2014, 08:33 AM	#14
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Jil--- damn...that last line was Fire...made kinda a older topic hot again...nice inner rhyme scheme wit' it an np...yesssiiir.. Letter- like the idea...juz feel it wasn't as smooth or hitting as hard as J vote-iLL jiLL

11-06-2014, 03:04 PM	#15
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	fkn hated both tbh jils dsnt work lettermans dsnt work to me..despite his expos wat he was getting at is played tho if its a draw imo the champ retains v/jikti __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople