Defiant vs. Fresh [Fresh Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 11-06-2014, 06:58 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

fresh · 11-07-2014, 07:00 AM

Check

fresh · 11-07-2014, 09:21 AM

I ether lowlifes, n def is low even in terms of peasantry
So when I combust the door to your soul you’ll surely burn in effigy

Defiant · 11-07-2014, 09:34 PM

0-4, so to have a chance u better be proposing change
So if theyre comparing fresh to def, it's w/ items from the clothing range

jilti · 11-07-2014, 11:44 PM

Liked freshs' bar but gotta go with Def on this one

YDK · 11-08-2014, 12:18 AM

I liked deviants concept a lot but lacked in execution, I got fresh taking this with just a more polished bar

Blanco Bishop · 11-08-2014, 02:01 AM

Fresh's wp works with the burning aspect of his bar but doors to your soul didn't tie in well for me.

Def had a clean np n self play.
I dug it.

V def

El Muffin · 11-08-2014, 12:04 PM

iono.

i think i.got fresh here

i like the wp/effigy angle

the doors to ur soul bit was akward ..cud of just used a home invasion tie in

fresh to def just seems obv played to a fuy named fresh

i know its more relevant because yoyr name is defiant but still..concept was underwhelming considering

i can see it goin both ways

v/ fresh

Tazz · 11-08-2014, 03:39 PM

v/Fresh.. both were pretty decent I think I just felt like fresh's concept was a bit more creative

Spoken · 11-08-2014, 05:21 PM

Fresh felt it was a more decent flip defiant went a little obvious with the np

Kin · 11-09-2014, 05:58 PM

Fresh...nice shit...not predictable at all

Def...even tho kinda obvious name play..u have to use it with ur two names...thought it was dope

Vote...def

Similac · 11-09-2014, 07:48 PM

My vote is fresh.. I felt it was more creative and worded better then defs

Mike Wrecka · 11-09-2014, 09:53 PM

Voted- def

Obvious np but it sort of worked

Tic · 11-10-2014, 02:33 PM

Both bars were cool, but I think Fresh's bar was more creative and the WP worked for me. Def's bar was cool and swaggish, but I think Fresh edges this one.

Unfukwitable · 11-10-2014, 11:20 PM

This is a toss up to a degree but I think Ima go with Def for a smooth execution IMO... nice read here tho.

BROKE LESNAR · 11-11-2014, 07:01 PM

I'm trying to decide whether to go with Fresh's dope concept and wp over a pretty remarkable bar by Defiant. I like the way Defiant put a really fresh (no pun intended) on a tired concept. Playing on both names was impressive. I'm a huge fan of that. The concept Fresh used? I loved it. The "door to his soul" idiom might seem awkward but it really isn't. It was a really clever way to pull the combust wp off. Hard battle to judge knowing that by picking a winner it's really doing the loser a disservice.

v-Fresh

Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 11-11-2014, 07:03 PM

I got fresh here.

Def's bar is a concept I've seen flipped in every which was against fresh and you angle was nothing I haven't seen before, bro. Fresh edges this one.

Clayray · 11-12-2014, 01:20 AM

Vote: Fresh.

Wtf is a clothing range? Reach.

11-06-2014, 06:58 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Defiant vs. Fresh [Fresh Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

11-07-2014, 09:21 AM	#3
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	I ether lowlifes, n def is low even in terms of peasantry So when I combust the door to your soul you’ll surely burn in effigy Last edited by fresh; 11-07-2014 at 02:34 PM.

11-08-2014, 12:18 AM	#6
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181109	I liked deviants concept a lot but lacked in execution, I got fresh taking this with just a more polished bar __________________

11-08-2014, 12:04 PM	#8
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	iono. i think i.got fresh here i like the wp/effigy angle the doors to ur soul bit was akward ..cud of just used a home invasion tie in fresh to def just seems obv played to a fuy named fresh i know its more relevant because yoyr name is defiant but still..concept was underwhelming considering i can see it goin both ways v/ fresh __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

11-08-2014, 05:21 PM	#10
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860410	Fresh felt it was a more decent flip defiant went a little obvious with the np __________________ WP Po'ethics

11-07-2014, 07:00 AM	#2
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Check

11-07-2014, 09:34 PM	#4
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442244	0-4, so to have a chance u better be proposing change So if theyre comparing fresh to def, it's w/ items from the clothing range

11-07-2014, 11:44 PM	#5
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816224	Liked freshs' bar but gotta go with Def on this one

11-08-2014, 02:01 AM	#7
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Fresh's wp works with the burning aspect of his bar but doors to your soul didn't tie in well for me. Def had a clean np n self play. I dug it. V def

11-08-2014, 03:39 PM	#9
Tazz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 22 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 90560	v/Fresh.. both were pretty decent I think I just felt like fresh's concept was a bit more creative

11-09-2014, 05:58 PM	#11
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Fresh...nice shit...not predictable at all Def...even tho kinda obvious name play..u have to use it with ur two names...thought it was dope Vote...def

11-09-2014, 07:48 PM	#12
Similac Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 8 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 0	My vote is fresh.. I felt it was more creative and worded better then defs

11-09-2014, 09:53 PM	#13
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,523 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	Voted- def Obvious np but it sort of worked __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

11-10-2014, 02:33 PM	#14
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137905	Both bars were cool, but I think Fresh's bar was more creative and the WP worked for me. Def's bar was cool and swaggish, but I think Fresh edges this one.

11-10-2014, 11:20 PM	#15
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	This is a toss up to a degree but I think Ima go with Def for a smooth execution IMO... nice read here tho. __________________ WICKeD

11-11-2014, 07:01 PM	#16
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	I'm trying to decide whether to go with Fresh's dope concept and wp over a pretty remarkable bar by Defiant. I like the way Defiant put a really fresh (no pun intended) on a tired concept. Playing on both names was impressive. I'm a huge fan of that. The concept Fresh used? I loved it. The "door to his soul" idiom might seem awkward but it really isn't. It was a really clever way to pull the combust wp off. Hard battle to judge knowing that by picking a winner it's really doing the loser a disservice. v-Fresh

11-11-2014, 07:03 PM	#17
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	I got fresh here. Def's bar is a concept I've seen flipped in every which was against fresh and you angle was nothing I haven't seen before, bro. Fresh edges this one.

11-12-2014, 01:20 AM	#18
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Vote: Fresh. Wtf is a clothing range? Reach.