Vulgar 0-0 vs Swerve 0-0 - VULGAR WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, November 20th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Vulgar @Swerve

[Vulgar]

10

[Swerve]

Yea.

[Vulgar]

I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc

[Swerve]

Awk...quick key

Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.

[Glossy Finish Dick Lips]

I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board

this was cool, actually. I enjoyed it. Not hard hitting but cool.

I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake

setup had nothing to do with the punch which killed this for me. Not to mention, it was stretched and you mention pants being taped then switch it up to hands on a bra? Kind of all over the place for me, wasn't feeling it to much.

From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam

this was cool.

A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces

old concept but, imo flipped nicely. I liked it.

My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc

nah, this was a complete miss, imo.



vs

Originally Posted by LOTB

Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.

solid.

You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.

jab at most. cool personal but could have executed this a little harsher, imo.

Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.

lol, cool.

Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.

nah, didn't like this to much.

Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.

another bags reference in a battle.

you netcee battle rappers loveeeeeeeeee to use discussion references, I see. I thought Kar killed this concept but seems to be what's hot now and days so fuck it, lol. Overall, I think Vulgar had 2 good bars here. The bags steering cam and the stand out were good. Rest were weak/choppy or stretched for me and Swerv had the opener which I thought was nice and the certain reference. Swerve's misses weren't has bad as Vulg's imo so for, he edges this...

Vulgar: 2 Solid & 1 Potential
Swerve: 2 Solid (1 of which was LOTB IMO) & 2 Potential

v/Swerve

[Hush]

Vul got a style man
His wording is no unique and crisp
Swag on 100

The shoelace line was Fire
Chapelle line was good too

Swervw had the questionable threads line
His wording bores me tho
Takes the sting off everything


V vulg

[E Tha Real]

Half baked line was good. A lil lengthy
Shoelace concept was great

Vs.

Court order was solid, set the tone for your verse
Certain personal hit
Hall of fame was good

IMO Swerve took this. His misses werent has ineffective as vulgars. Nice battle fellas, thanks for getting it up early.

Vote- swerve

[Greed]

Shoelace lotb. Half baked was cool as was the bags cam line. the rest was okay.

Vs

Court orders and bags line

I cancel out the bag lines. Felt the certain line was whatever. Seadad and pancake line cancel our too. Liked shoelaces more then court order so

V vulgar

[Bash]

steering wheel cam, shoe laces

vs

court orders, hall of fame

Pretty ok battle. In the end I'll have to go off of who had better misses and in my opinion I think the victor is...

v/Swerve

[tyler]

Hands on a bra & shoelaces

Vs.

Court order & negative results


This battle had good hits and some played misses. The 2 I quoted from both were really good to me. If I had to quote another bar it would probably be the steering wheel cam line from vulgar therefore I'm giving him the nod.

Vote~ vulgar

[Mercules]

VULGAR

I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
-------------DECENT

I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
------------DECENT AGAIN

From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
------------------------MEH

A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces---------------MEH AGAIN

My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc -------------NAH


VS

SWERVE

Awk...quick key

Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
------------OK

You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
---------------DECENT PERSONAL

Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
------------------MEH

Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
---------NAH

Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.
--------------DECENT

PRETTY CLOSE ONE HERE. NEITHER WOW'D ME. EACH HAD 1 LINE I WAS FEELING WITH THE LOTB BEING SWERVES OPENER. BOTH HAD MISSES BUT I LIKED THE WORDING OF FLOW OF SWERVES VERSE MORE AND HIS CLOSER WAS WAY BETTER THEN VULGARS WHO I THOUGHT ENDED VERY WEAK

VOTE SWERVE

[Packed Graves]

Drawing board was decent flip on old concept, shoelaces was dope, other then that your verse seemed rather generic & stretched. Feel you should slim your bars down a little you definitely got some dope concepts but your bars seem to drag on.

Vs

The certain personal, seadad was funny, this wasn't a great verse but you stayed with a personal aspect which kind of gave your jabs a better sting then just being a punch. Nothing was over the top but the ones that connected hit home.

Vote awerve even though Vul had lotb.

[El Muffin]

tied in quotes @ 2 a piece

it was opener n shoelaces 4 vulgy

hof n...seadad 4 sway dough

lotb is hof

v/ swervo

good battle gents

[Alvin Karpis]

This was close

Both came nice however I felt Swerve had a few lines that just were too basic. Vulgar was consistent through out. Shoelace and bra were cool

Overall close battle but I got Vulgar getting it barely

[Sharp]

I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
kinda cheesey but ok
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
ok, still kinda cheesey to me tbh
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
cool lol
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
cool
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc
solid tbh



Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
dope, lotb
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
kinda statementy
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
again idk kinda statementy
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
cool
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.eh


close but I got vulgar. more consistent and overall stronger hitting verse

v/vulgar

[Tic]

Originally Posted by Vulgar

I think I remember you in the 1-2 league gettin' destroyed. What wack & appalling form!
those half baked concepts might bring Dave Chappele back to the drawing board
Probably a played concept but I liked the flip.
I come equipped with the broadest swords to hit you.. in ya tanned face
Your girl must have her pants taped...
cause the last time you had your hands on a Bra, you fought Pancake
I liked this. Lol.
From what I remember about ur pic, u seem like a fratboy who collects beer cans
After I smack the shit out u, you'll have the same perspective as Bag's steering wheel cam
This is alright.
A topical druid, my rune's ancient. Your writ's are crude to the root, basic.
Nothing about you stands out at all... and when it does, you trip on your shoelaces
Cool.
My clan's perilous, plannin' to take the league by storm and stamp celibates
I'm puttin a blemish on ur record with a Vulgar display of power.. w/out scratching a Pantera disc
Nah.

Originally Posted by Swerve

Awk...quick key

Your girl’s way too nice for you, she stay giving cold shoulders,
Told her she was so far from Vulgar…she said thank god for court orders.
Nah.
You make some questionable threads, they’re all for shame,
Like I’m also still asking myself why anyone voted this faggot into the hall of fame.
This is a statement to me.
Been on topicals for a minute, you’ve got a name that few afford,
Yet you still can’t write a good verse without a topic you jerked off Certain for.
This is ok.
Just read that verse, every word had me getting nauseous,
So move along kid…you just shit the carpet worse than Seadad’s dog did.
Nah.
Swerve’ll crush your bones, you don’t want hand to hand slick,
In a battle with me, you’ll end up with more negative results than Bags’ dick.
Nah.

Vulgar you came with some cool lines here and only 1 miss (closer). A couple good lines and a couple ok lines. Swerve I felt like you rushed this. Your wording wasn't on par to the usual and your execution was off.

V/ Vulgar

[Destroyer]

I got vulgar here. swerve kinda fell flat across the verse, just wasn't feeling too much sting from him. vulg had the shoelace bar which was tight and the opener.

v/vulg

[Sharp]

7-6 vulg

[Allen Knight]

opener, shoelace

vs

closer


v/vulgar, i felt like swerve didnt try here n slept on vul.
his closer was cool but i seen swerve drop way better.
vul was more creative here an the shoe lace bar was lotb.
i got vul winning.