Kami 1-0 Vs Apeirogon 0-1 - KAMI WINS

Allen Knight · 12-08-2014, 01:33 PM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@kami @Apeirogon

kami · 12-08-2014, 07:12 PM

10. G'luck.

Apeirogon · 12-09-2014, 01:46 AM

you too

Apeirogon · 12-12-2014, 02:01 AM

I'll give this extension to Kam if someone tell me how his name's pronounced

El Muffin · 12-12-2014, 02:05 AM

cahm me

Apeirogon · 12-12-2014, 02:15 AM

Extended.

kami · 12-12-2014, 10:32 AM

Thx keying after work.

Sharp · 12-13-2014, 12:15 AM

@kami @Apeirogon

Apeirogon · 12-13-2014, 12:24 AM

present

Apeirogon · 12-13-2014, 03:25 AM

Time's up.

Listen, I'm not the type of N-bomb to start with Ka...
Just watch ME play the game. You're 'meh'... while I'm trending like #cartmanbra
I can fart and I'll win. Your future in this shit is dark and it's grim
Kami dope? it's always "no uhh....." Well I hope u don't build an arc & can't swim
& you don't get NO kind a pussy. you ain't a G man, you jelq
Never had a jesus piece. Those 40 links in ur chain?
...are all to girls Facebook pages, in emails to yourself
Fuckin loser and sick guy, 'disgusting creature' in chicks' eyes
Maaan, I heard the Walkers round your way don't even fuck wit u... you're Rick Grimes
You're a joke. Poll the votes. I can swag with doper quotes.
These Cali buds'll get you high as fuckin heaven. Holy smokes.

kami · 12-13-2014, 05:05 AM

i'm straight ruthless. my bullets are tailored for fakes when the 8 shoot kid.
so watch this Congo to an early grave in the jungle when I get Ape suited.
this faggot artist will get smashed apart quick when I blast & spark it.
told him, "it's curtains for you!" & he said, " as long as they match the carpet!"
& it may be grim, but his body'll hit the ground so fast when a stray heat in.
that it'll cause the Earth To Echo loud enough to shake stars & contact aliens.
it's hopeless queer, we're tired of reading those shifty quotes you smear.
this ain't his first trip to the rodeo, he's been riding this bull to win his whole career.
I martyr dudes, so you better spar with tools cause my bars are cool.
you'll catch a fade so hard & smooth you'd think I went to barber school.

pardon the tardiness

Vulgar · 12-13-2014, 07:54 PM

Ape I wasn't feeling your verse. The first three bars were very prototypical/forced type battle lines, "no uhhh" was particularly bad. Overall you have a good basis to work with, but yeah, not really feeling it.

Kami's last two bars were pretty solid. Based on that...

Vote - Kami

jilti · 12-13-2014, 08:19 PM

attempts

vs

Earth to Echo, riding this bull, closer was played af but had dope multies & sick flow

V-Kam

Destroyer · 12-13-2014, 10:11 PM

nada

vs

opener, some other stuff too

kami got this handily

Blanco Bishop · 12-14-2014, 03:08 AM

Grimes

Vs

Carpet..rodeo.. aliens

V kam. Fresher wp imo

Orc · 12-14-2014, 06:56 AM

i like Apes wording. just some of the concepts were iffy. the no uhhh bar was dope imo. holy smoke was swagged out as well, felt that. kami the last two were nice. didn't like carpet bar it was probably bordering on corny. the rhyming helped ya verse thruout. last two lines were delivered well & probably edged it to u.

kami won this but barely. by like half a quote lol

Allen Knight · 12-14-2014, 04:52 PM

I can fart and I'll win. Your future in this shit is dark and it's grim
Kami dope? it's always "no uhh....." Well I hope u don't build an arc & can't swim

Vs

im straight ruthless. my bullets are tailored for fakes when the 8 shoot kid.
so watch this Congo to an early grave in the jungle when I get Ape suited.
it's hopeless queer, we're tired of reading those shifty quotes you smear.
this ain't his first trip to the rodeo, he's been riding this bull to win his whole career.

V/kami, this was a decent battle, kami had some good bars the ones i quotes were nice some miss also, ape had ight verse just not as good as last weeks imo felt like he rushed this, ur wording is good. the concepts in this verse were off imo, but no uhh was nice.
props too both.

Cashius · 12-14-2014, 09:59 PM

I agree with Orc that Ape's wording is good, but the concepts weren't there to match it. I hated the holy smokes thing. Kami didn't have any haymakers but every bar was decent so he gets it for consistency.

Kami.

12-08-2014, 01:33 PM	#1
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	Kami 1-0 Vs Apeirogon 0-1 - KAMI WINS Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, December 11th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday EXTENSIONS ARE LIMITED - IF YOU USE YOURS IT WILL BE NOTED Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @kami @Apeirogon __________________ C.O.B

12-12-2014, 02:05 AM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,693 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230531	cahm me __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

12-13-2014, 05:05 AM	#11
kami Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 91 Battle Record: 3-7 Champed - 1-2 Season 2 - 24hr Photo Tournament - Fight Night XXXIV - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 1054902	i'm straight ruthless. my bullets are tailored for fakes when the 8 shoot kid. so watch this Congo to an early grave in the jungle when I get Ape suited. this faggot artist will get smashed apart quick when I blast & spark it. told him, "it's curtains for you!" & he said, " as long as they match the carpet!" & it may be grim, but his body'll hit the ground so fast when a stray heat in. that it'll cause the Earth To Echo loud enough to shake stars & contact aliens. it's hopeless queer, we're tired of reading those shifty quotes you smear. this ain't his first trip to the rodeo, he's been riding this bull to win his whole career. I martyr dudes, so you better spar with tools cause my bars are cool. you'll catch a fade so hard & smooth you'd think I went to barber school. pardon the tardiness Last edited by kami; 12-13-2014 at 05:07 AM.

12-14-2014, 04:52 PM	#17
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,166 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	I can fart and I'll win. Your future in this shit is dark and it's grim Kami dope? it's always "no uhh....." Well I hope u don't build an arc & can't swim Vs im straight ruthless. my bullets are tailored for fakes when the 8 shoot kid. so watch this Congo to an early grave in the jungle when I get Ape suited. it's hopeless queer, we're tired of reading those shifty quotes you smear. this ain't his first trip to the rodeo, he's been riding this bull to win his whole career. V/kami, this was a decent battle, kami had some good bars the ones i quotes were nice some miss also, ape had ight verse just not as good as last weeks imo felt like he rushed this, ur wording is good. the concepts in this verse were off imo, but no uhh was nice. props too both. __________________ C.O.B

12-08-2014, 07:12 PM	#2
kami Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 91 Battle Record: 3-7 Champed - 1-2 Season 2 - 24hr Photo Tournament - Fight Night XXXIV - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 1054902	10. G'luck.

12-09-2014, 01:46 AM	#3
Apeirogon the Ape Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 37 Battle Record: 0-6 Rep Power: 0	you too

12-12-2014, 02:01 AM	#4
Apeirogon the Ape Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 37 Battle Record: 0-6 Rep Power: 0	I'll give this extension to Kam if someone tell me how his name's pronounced

12-12-2014, 02:15 AM	#6
Apeirogon the Ape Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 37 Battle Record: 0-6 Rep Power: 0	Extended.

12-12-2014, 10:32 AM	#7
kami Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 91 Battle Record: 3-7 Champed - 1-2 Season 2 - 24hr Photo Tournament - Fight Night XXXIV - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 1054902	Thx keying after work.

12-13-2014, 12:24 AM	#9
Apeirogon the Ape Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 37 Battle Record: 0-6 Rep Power: 0	present

12-13-2014, 03:25 AM	#10
Apeirogon the Ape Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 37 Battle Record: 0-6 Rep Power: 0	Time's up. Listen, I'm not the type of N-bomb to start with Ka... Just watch ME play the game. You're 'meh'... while I'm trending like #cartmanbra I can fart and I'll win. Your future in this shit is dark and it's grim Kami dope? it's always "no uhh....." Well I hope u don't build an arc & can't swim & you don't get NO kind a pussy. you ain't a G man, you jelq Never had a jesus piece. Those 40 links in ur chain? ...are all to girls Facebook pages, in emails to yourself Fuckin loser and sick guy, 'disgusting creature' in chicks' eyes Maaan, I heard the Walkers round your way don't even fuck wit u... you're Rick Grimes You're a joke. Poll the votes. I can swag with doper quotes. These Cali buds'll get you high as fuckin heaven. Holy smokes.

12-13-2014, 07:54 PM	#12
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604317	Ape I wasn't feeling your verse. The first three bars were very prototypical/forced type battle lines, "no uhhh" was particularly bad. Overall you have a good basis to work with, but yeah, not really feeling it. Kami's last two bars were pretty solid. Based on that... Vote - Kami

12-13-2014, 08:19 PM	#13
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816224	attempts vs Earth to Echo, riding this bull, closer was played af but had dope multies & sick flow V-Kam

12-14-2014, 03:08 AM	#15
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Grimes Vs Carpet..rodeo.. aliens V kam. Fresher wp imo

12-14-2014, 06:56 AM	#16
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	i like Apes wording. just some of the concepts were iffy. the no uhhh bar was dope imo. holy smoke was swagged out as well, felt that. kami the last two were nice. didn't like carpet bar it was probably bordering on corny. the rhyming helped ya verse thruout. last two lines were delivered well & probably edged it to u. kami won this but barely. by like half a quote lol

12-14-2014, 09:59 PM	#18
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257520	I agree with Orc that Ape's wording is good, but the concepts weren't there to match it. I hated the holy smokes thing. Kami didn't have any haymakers but every bar was decent so he gets it for consistency. Kami.