|
01-09-2015, 08:14 PM
|
#1 |
|
The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,028
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
Rep Power: 59349678   |
Shenanigans Rule The Mannequins
I get shitfaced and create mixtapes
haven't been this deep until after 6 dates use a board & hit waves on your chicks face I'm a God & you made this mortal like Midway flattery is insane, financially how does my dick taste? I make it rain for 6 days Kip..'Bow to your sensei these writers try so hard, break their wrist & walk away.. swear you would puke at the shit I saw today others just look in awe & praise, others look to God & pray leaving the odd debate uneven due to the draw I made I'm there for resuscitation a certain touch on patience I make moolah stack, I kill bills & you like to rub on patients replace lotions with specimens for reproduction..come on, take it.. that's the irony of the anemic, the second, third, a fourth seeded the legion I've leaded from the bottom to the top... now they here...I don't believe it, all butter, no pop, no secrets I'm Orville Redenbacher in suspenders suspended in the comments sitting next to Michael Jackson, with a pail of bleach & comet... I'm bored, bored, bored, bored with the board of course cause a board is a board if it's aboard starboard on course... huh? I don't know
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you |
|
|
|
01-09-2015, 09:36 PM
|
#2 |
|
consults Lloyd
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 4,075
Battle Record: 0-8
Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast
Rep Power: 39345600 |
Dope.
|
|
|
|
|
02-17-2015, 03:02 PM
|
#3 |
|
The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,028
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
Rep Power: 59349678 |
<3
__________________
.....laugh....and the world laughs with you |
|
|
|
|
02-22-2015, 01:21 PM
|
#4 |
|
Arm the Homeless
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,104
Battle Record: 22-24
Champed - Art of Writing League
Rep Power: 35079719 |
Bow to your Sensei ha! That shit was nice. I would say some of your transitions to different rhyme schemes were a little rusty, but once you got started with them you got going really good. This is some nice braggadocio type of shit. I dig it.
Last edited by Zen; 02-22-2015 at 01:23 PM. |
|
|
|
|
03-05-2015, 11:49 AM
|
#5 |
|
White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,330
Battle Record: 10-15
Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x)
Champed - Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8
Rep Power: 50036758  |
swear you would puke at the shit I saw today
love that
__________________
-A.bove T.he R.est |
|
|
|
 |
|
|
Linear Mode
