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Old 03-13-2015, 08:46 PM   #1
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Default Hi all. A Verse from just now and last night's

Jesus christ.
Have I been the only one in the world having prob'ems with this website?
How in the hell do you expect me to write?
When all I've been doin is jus tryna get my head right,
,smokin weed&ice.
The only reason I did that was it makes me feel so nice.
Well.
I've learned a lot from you guys.
Congratulations you've all been a part of my meteoric rise.
And after I drop this verse I'll read some things on the Open Mic..
I hope you like this. I spent so much time on it.
There's only a couple lies in it. &other thn that I've rhyme honest.
Fuck mates, I'm guessing you've wanted some updates:
Well, in battle raps I've killed every1 who tried ta stop me..

I've been taking on many more responsibilities at work.
Gosh.That's silly of me. In the long-run I don't think it'll work.
Instead of being a measured genius I should have slacked off, and made my boss, think I was a jerk.
I think that would've worked and it would have kept me from so much work.
Ah well. I guess I should embrace the challenge
although it isn't great for my sanity.
By the way please don't laugh;this isn't even a parody--
this is my life. And I think this is ill, but I can already tell,you'll diss on my style..
And once that happens I won't-even feel motivated to save this in a File.
I will just throw it away in a pile. And then shred the pile or burn it away in the fire.
I've been getting my daily iron from cereal and energy drinks.
i Hope it Helps the Waay i mentally Think.
see @zygote knows about utilizing capitalization. you other Rappers Must Be Wasted to tell me that you didn' like my old Flavor.
I'm sorry. I'm just being obnoxious.
This is because my "being" is toxic.
Oh in other news even though I haven't been reading iny novels,
I plan on Writing My own Novel.
I have a feeling that this would be novel.
However I'm not normal be-cuz I haven't started.
But I keep telling @Buddha all about it.
I've done every thing but shout it
from the highest of the mountains.So yeah
I'll try to get around to it.

And here guys here is another verse I wrote last night to this beat.
And if you ask me fer the instrumental I'll give you the link.

"I am ambassador for under-represented DJs./ That's what it comes Down2 these days./We don't seek fame but rather explore hip hop--un-leash it from it's chains./This shit will never stop, 'cause my spits are never done./ I'm iller than every one./ Why did my daddy make a killer out'viz only son?/ He didn't hand me the gun but ever since he got sent upstate, I've been full of pent-up rage./ &If I didn't sell those drugs my rent would've never got paid./ On the grind every single day 'til the 5-0 had their way./ Threw me away&locked away the key./ This wasn't the way it was 'sposed ta be./ And now I've followed in footsteps, just for a hood rep, and look what's left./ Can't get a job./ My baby'Ma says I'm a slob./ Man this is hard./ Wish I had another start I'd probably play a different part on this stage we call life./ But hey,I'll be alright./ Soon as I sign a record deal 'r make money when I write./ Not easy in this digital age./ I'm one to talk for sheezy I download shit evry day./"
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Old 03-13-2015, 09:00 PM   #2
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The middle section was rad as fuck.
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Old 03-14-2015, 05:03 PM   #3
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This was actually a dope concept. (A Letter To NCS)

Drop some feed on other people shit if you expect anything in return.. around here exists and unspoken rule.. more like an unspoken way of lifee..

Basically it goes like this..
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