3. Tic vs 14. Unfukwitable - UNFUK WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 3rd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Tic @Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

waddup tho, 10 lines. simple

[Tic]

Sup my dude...GL.

[Tic]

@Unfukwitable I have 10, if you need the ext I'm cool with that though.

[Unfukwitable]

@Tic

Original? nah, He'll receive punches since he's a dork & he seems frail,
He'll be a Rolex Replica; Once hands touch Tic in the face & Knockoff every detail.
Step back or Rockets 'll shoot, I'm use to carvin niggas up;
Bullets sizzle guts, he'll be cooking after the shots like Harden in the clutch.
This Outsider mascot is Drake soft, I throw slugs, he can catch it,
everyone In Outlet 'em believe he's Charged up, I'm here to Pull the plug on this faggot.
That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.
U lack personals, I'm a savage with wits, thats here to unravel u're scripts,
He plans to show up w/ Crack Filler?, I plan to bury 'em in a wall, then Spackle the shit!



SQUADDD!!

[Tic]

Tic Tac vs Unfukwitable - TIC WINS

Unfukwitable vs Galactic (Galactic Wins)

GR8 [vs] Tic Tac ((Tic Tac wins via KO))

Let's make it 0-4, shall we?

We know you’re from Africa, you a Beast? Well I’m leavin you stuffed, animal
Nickname Congo – Not because you’re Black, cuz I’m constantly beatin the fuck outta you
You have one solid win lately. Besides that, your progress shows reduction
Success Hinges on Making Moves - & you’re a crash victim w/ loss of all motor function
Suicide Squad? Sound like a Terrorist group, this kid is a shame
Close range shotty Explode On Ya Chest and really have you livin the name
Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight
This dude doesn’t live it. I’m nice w/ arms, provin ya timid
When I cock it back & let the Four-Banger go..it’ll sound like I blew up a Civic

[8===D~~~~(}:]

@Tic

Original? nah, He'll receive punches since he's a dork & he seems frail,
He'll be a Rolex Replica; Once hands touch Tic in the face & Knockoff every detail.
ehh not really feelin this
Step back or Rockets 'll shoot, I'm use to carvin niggas up;
Bullets sizzle guts, he'll be cooking after the shots like Harden in the clutch.
meh
This Outsider mascot is Drake soft, I throw slugs, he can catch it,
everyone In Outlet 'em believe he's Charged up, I'm here to Pull the plug on this faggot.
seen a lot of these but cool flip
That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.
alright cool
U lack personals, I'm a savage with wits, thats here to unravel u're scripts,
He plans to show up w/ Crack Filler?, I plan to bury 'em in a wall, then Spackle the shit!
nah


SQUADDD!!



Vs




We know you’re from Africa, you a Beast? Well I’m leavin you stuffed, animal
Nickname Congo – Not because you’re Black, cuz I’m constantly beatin the fuck outta you
too wordy, not feelin
You have one solid win lately. Besides that, your progress shows reduction
Success Hinges on Making Moves - & you’re a crash victim w/ loss of all motor function
ehhhhh wasn't feelin this either man
Suicide Squad? Sound like a Terrorist group, this kid is a shame
Close range shotty Explode On Ya Chest and really have you livin the name
nah
Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight
dopeeeee
This dude doesn’t live it. I’m nice w/ arms, provin ya timid
When I cock it back & let the Four-Banger go..it’ll sound like I blew up a Civic
decent at best




WOWWWW...I expected this battle to go a completely different way than it did. First off I think both of you came a bit softer than you usually do, unfuk you had 2 good ones and like 1 decent one. Tic, you usually impress the fuck out of me with your bars but I wasn't feelin anything besides the knuck bar tbh..idk man what happened?

Vote: Unfuk

[Bust]

Un

Opener was ok
Harden in th clutch was light on me prolly coulda been better
Out let pull the plug had been done nothin fresh besides using his crew name
Toe to toe with aeros was ok
Closer was ok too

Tic


I didn't really like ur opener much execution wise
Motor function was light, felt lije it was leading up to being dope but softened at the end
Livin the name was ok
Knuckle crack was pretty nice
Closer was a cool bar but not a good hit,

I've seen u 2 drop dope shit but I just felt like both yall were creative but didn't hit ur opponents that hard..man this a hard battle to judge tho but I feel fuk might a slightly edged this by a half a hit.. Could go either way honestly but I got fuk here


Unfuk

[Useless]

That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.
Step back or Rockets 'll shoot, I'm use to carvin niggas up;
Bullets sizzle guts, he'll be cooking after the shots like Harden in the clutch

Ur verse wasn't as good as I was expecting. I thought this was a sleeper for botw. I thought u should've had more personal references. There's a lot and all u did was his crew n a loss on rb from 10 yrs ago lol. U had some decent generics but some of were just bleh...n that crew punch missed too IMO.

You have one solid win lately. Besides that, your progress shows reduction
Success Hinges on Making Moves - & you’re a crash victim w/ loss of all motor function
Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight

U had too many bland gun bars IMO. And u had 0 personals. Wtf. Those two lines I thought were nice but still. That Africa line coulda been flipped wayyy better too, I thought u were gonna ref the lion that just got shot.

This battle was a letdown tbh.

V. Tic

[Mr. J]

Original? nah, He'll receive punches since he's a dork & he seems frail,
He'll be a Rolex Replica; Once hands touch Tic in the face & Knockoff every detail.

This Outsider mascot is Drake soft, I throw slugs, he can catch it,
everyone In Outlet 'em believe he's Charged up, I'm here to Pull the plug on this faggot.
That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.
^^^^^^^
These sections were pretty dope, that opener was pretty nice
I thought harden in the clutch could have been delivered better..still a decent idea
I wasn't really feeling that closer, but you still came correct here
some pretty good stuff here, dope verse

Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight
This dude doesn’t live it. I’m nice w/ arms, provin ya timid
When I cock it back & let the Four-Banger go..it’ll sound like I blew up a Civic
^^^^^
I felt like you really picked up towards the end, the opening was alright
the whole beginning felt like it was too wordy & the set ups were ok at best
if you took the time to work out your verse like the above quoted it would have worked
otherwise I felt like the end was your strongest part of your performance
the motor function line would have been dope if you worded a little better imo
decent verse...

v/Unfuk, I felt he had a better string of punches as apposed to Tic
Tic came decent but he really picked up at the end, but by then it was too late
nice battle fella's

[Swerve]

Original? nah, He'll receive punches since he's a dork & he seems frail,
He'll be a Rolex Replica; Once hands touch Tic in the face & Knockoff every detail.
Step back or Rockets 'll shoot, I'm use to carvin niggas up;
Bullets sizzle guts, he'll be cooking after the shots like Harden in the clutch.
That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.

vs.

You have one solid win lately. Besides that, your progress shows reduction
Success Hinges on Making Moves - & you’re a crash victim w/ loss of all motor function
Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight


Tic really only had the Knuckle line. The other line I quoted was decent, but not hard hitting really. Rolex line from Unfuck was nice, Harden was okay. Aero line was nice.

V/ Unfuck

[Sn00p]

Original? nah, He'll receive punches since he's a dork & he seems frail,
He'll be a Rolex Replica; Once hands touch Tic in the face & Knockoff every detail.
^okay. seen the tic/clock concept a lot tho
Step back or Rockets 'll shoot, I'm use to carvin niggas up;
Bullets sizzle guts, he'll be cooking after the shots like Harden in the clutch.
^had to look it up, but it's okay
This Outsider mascot is Drake soft, I throw slugs, he can catch it,
everyone In Outlet 'em believe he's Charged up, I'm here to Pull the plug on this faggot.
^solid word connections. decent
That RB loss was like Dance Revolution, u got cooked cause ur stuff is weak;
He tried going toe to toe with Aero's and still looked like a fuckin geek.
^nice
U lack personals, I'm a savage with wits, thats here to unravel u're scripts,
He plans to show up w/ Crack Filler?, I plan to bury 'em in a wall, then Spackle the shit!
^never seen this before, but it might be played. giving u the benefit of the doubt. solid closer

vs.

We know you’re from Africa, you a Beast? Well I’m leavin you stuffed, animal
Nickname Congo – Not because you’re Black, cuz I’m constantly beatin the fuck outta you
^overworded. good concept tho
You have one solid win lately. Besides that, your progress shows reduction
Success Hinges on Making Moves - & you’re a crash victim w/ loss of all motor function
^okayyy. kinda overworded again
Suicide Squad? Sound like a Terrorist group, this kid is a shame
Close range shotty Explode On Ya Chest and really have you livin the name
^eh, seen better suicide squad flips already
Ya Punches are weak & lite. “Up & coming?” Don’t believe the hype…
Listen. Your Knuckle crack & bleed - Mine the type to make Karaoke leave the sight
^lol nice. *site tho
This dude doesn’t live it. I’m nice w/ arms, provin ya timid
When I cock it back & let the Four-Banger go..it’ll sound like I blew up a Civic
^cool concept again, but kinda overworded. focus on the four-banger wp and make that work both ways. still dcent tho

i have unfuk with the upset here. he had some clean hits (aero toe to toe was lotb imo) and his unquotes were still decent. tic had the knuckle line i thought was good and then some lines that had problems. i think it's closer than the votes might show, because tic had a lot of dope concepts that just weren't worded as effectively as they cud've been. the wording wasn't even that bad, it just wasn't streamlined and concise enough to be effective and impactful. good battle tho. props
v/unfuk