8. fraze vs 9. Lotto Smirk - FRAZE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 3rd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@fraze @Lotto Smirk

[fraze]

check. how many bars? 12+

[Lotto Smirk]

12 or 14

[Lotto Smirk]

Ext needed incase he shows not seen him about I've got 10 for him

[fraze]

Im here. I could drop tonight, but the ext is cool w/ me

[Lotto Smirk]

Sent 14 to sharp

[Lotto Smirk]

starting to doubt u as a partner cus in battles ya been lookin stupid
don't know what waits worse.. the tourney to start or the one of carryin u thru it
u fucking bum I'd punch u for fun but feel sorry the way u live like a rat
i'd send u a kar package but u havnt a job for me to give u that treatment at
u never winning, got me doubting so in this tag match u best come harder
only time u was ever the last man standing's when I pity picked u as a partner
u wack ghost writer, I'm nicer, cus ur writing skills a wreck
So we cash words? haha yours ain't even worth a welfare check
u a timid fag on the real so I don't know why u brag like u have a bad ass life
but I'll give my partner a beating so bad it'll show why he act like a battered wife
ya girl fucks wi everyone, ur dumb n none of the wiser
she'd die for my hot rod so much I'll send that bitch to roddy piper
u firing blanks, I'm a commando wi real ammo, u'll find out once ya shot
u on the bullet farm? Then it makes sense when Im filling you with live stock

[Sharp]

@fraze

[fraze]

i claim king on these squares... you’re a pawn at best...
but we ain’t playin chess…so if you check here you signed the warrant for your death...
i’ll get medieval on your ass. berserk with a mace.
crowds love gore... so i plan to leave a little smirk on everybody’s face...
run up on me nigggaaaaaaa…… test me if you bulletproof
i’ll put that metal in your mouth and yank… but i ain’t trying to pull a tooth...
the .380 in my right and glock 9 in my second hand
spit flames to keep the chambers hot as every verse from method man…
so duck quick bitch i ain’t nothing to fuck with…
u suck dick... your punches won't hit lotto. they’re as bad as your luck is
smirk’s the simp type. ya girl gets your check and it’s spent.
but she lives in my lap…so i'm pimping while you're paying her rent
you beating me? comical… our skill gap? astronomical…
no bullshit… it's literally wide enough to fly a comet through...

[joog]

Lotto:
The carry you aspect is played in ur opener. But i haven't seen that wait flip
Battered wife was ok. Not crazy about the wording tho.
Livestock worked for me.

Vs

Fraze:
Smirk on faces line was heat
Pull a tooth was dope by my standards. Thats my style
Lotto/luck was good
Closer was dope



This was food for fraze. Lotto, something about ur wording aint hitting for me.
Fraze u had misses too, but a couple of ur joints were smacking.

Vote fraze

[Unfukwitable]

u firing blanks, I'm a commando wi real ammo, u'll find out once ya shot
u on the bullet farm? Then it makes sense when Im filling you with live stock

vs

i’ll get medieval on your ass. berserk with a mace.
crowds love gore... so i plan to leave a little smirk on everybody’s face...

even quotewise but one had the way better verse here a couple things kept me from quoting two bars from him but he had some good shit that needed a tab bit of work, the other came alil dull some good ideas that just didnt have impact and wasnt worded fully... that smirk on everyone face was the haymaker in this to me...very dope... v/Fraze

[Swerve]

starting to doubt u as a partner cus in battles ya been lookin stupid
don't know what waits worse.. the tourney to start or the one of carryin u thru it
u firing blanks, I'm a commando wi real ammo, u'll find out once ya shot
u on the bullet farm? Then it makes sense when Im filling you with live stock

vs.

i’ll get medieval on your ass. berserk with a mace.
crowds love gore... so i plan to leave a little smirk on everybody’s face...
run up on me nigggaaaaaaa…… test me if you bulletproof
i’ll put that metal in your mouth and yank… but i ain’t trying to pull a tooth...
so duck quick bitch i ain’t nothing to fuck with…
u suck dick... your punches won't hit lotto. they’re as bad as your luck is



Lotto: Wording on the wait flip was off, but I dig the fresh flip. Kar package wasn't doing it. Pitty pick was eh, welfare check was eh. Battered wife was okay. Piper line was weak. I liked live stock.

Fraze: Opener was eh. Really liked the smirk on face line. Delivery on the pull a tooth line was hard and I liked it. Chamber was eh. Luck line was solid. Last two were kind of eh. I think your actual style is sick. Very simplistic and its always the best to get your point across in the least amount of words.


Close battle. I felt like Lotto had 2 really hot lines, but Fraze was just really consistent and I'm really feeling the style.

V/ Fraze

[Orc]

I don't know. My vote is against the grain here. I think lotto stepped it up big time. That closer was bonkers. The opener was straight. Kar package was a relevant flip. Pity pick was nice. Battered wife was straight. I basically liked almost the whole verse. You obviously been listening to the tips and advice you have been getting. Fraze had a nice verse too. This could be sleeper botw to me. That gore line was lotb. Fucking sick. Tooth line was okay. Lotto line played angle okay flip. Closer was bad tho man no real wit or sting to it. That was your only bad miss.

I think Lotto got this. He had a couple more bars and was more consistent. The closer from fraze cost him what was otherwise a close match

[8===D~~~~(}:]

starting to doubt u as a partner cus in battles ya been lookin stupid
don't know what waits worse.. the tourney to start or the one of carryin u thru it
decent
u fucking bum I'd punch u for fun but feel sorry the way u live like a rat
i'd send u a kar package but u havnt a job for me to give u that treatment at
nah
u never winning, got me doubting so in this tag match u best come harder
only time u was ever the last man standing's when I pity picked u as a partner
nah weak here man
u wack ghost writer, I'm nicer, cus ur writing skills a wreck
So we cash words? haha yours ain't even worth a welfare check
basic here
u a timid fag on the real so I don't know why u brag like u have a bad ass life
but I'll give my partner a beating so bad it'll show why he act like a battered wife
decent, wording could have made it better
ya girl fucks wi everyone, ur dumb n none of the wiser
she'd die for my hot rod so much I'll send that bitch to roddy piper
the reference doesn't make sense here, I get it but doesn't work for me
u firing blanks, I'm a commando wi real ammo, u'll find out once ya shot
u on the bullet farm? Then it makes sense when Im filling you with live stock
alright cool


Vs


i claim king on these squares... you’re a pawn at best...
but we ain’t playin chess…so if you check here you signed the warrant for your death...
nah weak one
i’ll get medieval on your ass. berserk with a mace.
crowds love gore... so i plan to leave a little smirk on everybody’s face...
haha noiceeee
run up on me nigggaaaaaaa…… test me if you bulletproof
i’ll put that metal in your mouth and yank… but i ain’t trying to pull a tooth...
good I liked it
the .380 in my right and glock 9 in my second hand
spit flames to keep the chambers hot as every verse from method man…
a big no right here
so duck quick bitch i ain’t nothing to fuck with…
u suck dick... your punches won't hit lotto. they’re as bad as your luck is
alright
smirk’s the simp type. ya girl gets your check and it’s spent.
but she lives in my lap…so i'm pimping while you're paying her rent
nah
you beating me? comical… our skill gap? astronomical…
no bullshit… it's literally wide enough to fly a comet through...
corny


Ngl all I liked from lotto was his closer, I've seen him drop way better. Fraze had 3 bars I liked, he takes this one quite comfortably.

Vote: fraze

[Victor.]

This was fucking dope. Both these niggas killed it. Jesus "Little Smirk on everyone face" by Fraze was insane.

Yeah, he edged it but Lotto had fire too.
It come down to the best line and Fraze had it.


Repp to both

[Sharp]

5-1 fraze