Reserve Battle: Remy LeBeau vs Swerve - SWERVE WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Monday , August 3rd 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Remy LeBeau @Swerve

[Useless]

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[Swerve]

Sure

[Useless]

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This racist fag no shows.
So if he swerve.. its to run over a black hobo

If he posts a verse I'll edit one in tomorrow. If he asks for an ext I'll allow it.

[Swerve]

Originally Posted by Remy LeBeau

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This racist fag no shows.
So if he swerve.. its to run over a black hobo

If he posts a verse I'll edit one in tomorrow. If he asks for an ext I'll allow it.

I don't need an extension and I will be posting.

[Useless]

Well then I need an ext lol

[Swerve]

k, ext then

[Swerve]

Originally Posted by Destroyer

remy lebeau = gambit
gam bit
gam ble

coincidence?

Gamble?…no…they wouldn’t do you like this again…would they?....Fuck….

Didn't make the main bracket, but its causing friction,
Since it’s the first time you’re battling a Sub and it’s not your addiction.
You have no shot bud, fact the gun game is sublime,
I’ll put the Eagle at your feet to make you dance like evil Lama the lime.
Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.
I bust gats, bullets split your wig and make you drowsy newbie,
Couple shots will make REM sleep…then have nightmares ‘bout losing to me.
Upsetting a half assed Orc? That’s not “making it” son,
If that was your meal ticket…it’s thanksgiving dinner - party of one.
Dude’ll lose…and no matter what his accomplishments…
Trust that he ain’t leaving the Reserve like Karp’s marital promises.

@Remy LeBeau

[Useless]

Swerve aka Patrick

swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
It was a bad time for nc, that's the only way u ever made a splash.
I liked when Dominatrix him into thinking he could actually take the strap.
Canadians are the lowest form of life, I'd rather be a newborn orphan.
Ur not a saint, patrick.. ur just green with envy cause I'm from new Orleans.
fuckn ugly canadian.. If ur a baller- it would go to extra innings.
The only way u maple girls is by pouring syrup on unsuspecting women.
did I mention u look funny, I bet everyone's always making fun.
if questions mark his appearance.. its because his back is shaped like one.
don't talk shit, u better keep ur cool......
cause if he gets bent out of shape.. that shit is literal.

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Gamble?…no…they wouldn’t do you like this again…would they?....Fuck….

Didn't make the main bracket, but its causing friction,
Since it’s the first time you’re battling a Sub and it’s not your addiction.
Nah didn't like the set up
You have no shot bud, fact the gun game is sublime,
I’ll put the Eagle at your feet to make you dance like evil Lama the lime.
good one
Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.
alright cool
I bust gats, bullets split your wig and make you drowsy newbie,
Couple shots will make REM sleep…then have nightmares ‘bout losing to me.
could have done way more with rem sleep, wasn't feelin the outcome of this one
Upsetting a half assed Orc? That’s not “making it” son,
If that was your meal ticket…it’s thanksgiving dinner - party of one.
nah
Dude’ll lose…and no matter what his accomplishments…
Trust that he ain’t leaving the Reserve like Karp’s marital promises.
had to look up the reference, decent

2.5 on quotes for you



Vs


Swerve aka Patrick

swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
yoo this was nasty son lol
It was a bad time for nc, that's the only way u ever made a splash.
I liked when Dominatrix him into thinking he could actually take the strap.
alright
Canadians are the lowest form of life, I'd rather be a newborn orphan.
Ur not a saint, patrick.. ur just green with envy cause I'm from new Orleans.
u had the concept but finished it bad IMO
fuckn ugly canadian.. If ur a baller- it would go to extra innings.
The only way u maple girls is by pouring syrup on unsuspecting women.
these wp's are starting to get outta hand lmao, decent here
did I mention u look funny, I bet everyone's always making fun.
if questions mark his appearance.. its because his back is shaped like one.
ehh decent at best
don't talk shit, u better keep ur cool......
cause if he gets bent out of shape.. that shit is literal.
alright better than the last one

Edging 4 quotes tallied here


I thought this was gonna go the other way, I'm surprised, but remy came with some good shit and took this quite comfortably in my opinion. Going by quotes I got remy.

Vote: Remy

[Unfukwitable]

Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.
Dude’ll lose…and no matter what his accomplishments…
Trust that he ain’t leaving the Reserve like Karp’s marital promises.

vs.

swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
fuckn ugly canadian.. If ur a baller- it would go to extra innings.
The only way u maple girls is by pouring syrup on unsuspecting women.


Nice read here, this was kind of close a couple hits and misses to me the verse was damn near equal as far as the hit factor, I guess ima edge it to one barely by almost quoteable line imo... v/Swerve

[Orc]

Didn't make the main bracket, but its causing friction,
Since it’s the first time you’re battling a Sub and it’s not your addiction.
don't think he's gamble but still okay line cuz his acc screams gamble albeit without meaning to
You have no shot bud, fact the gun game is sublime,
I’ll put the Eagle at your feet to make you dance like evil Lama the lime.
can't take this serious due to cred's line lol
Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.
this here.. this here is good
I bust gats, bullets split your wig and make you drowsy newbie,
Couple shots will make REM sleep…then have nightmares ‘bout losing to me.
okay flip coulda made the np doper imo but still ok. light jab
Upsetting a half assed Orc? That’s not “making it” son,
If that was your meal ticket…it’s thanksgiving dinner - party of one.
i get the personal ur going for but it fell flat
Dude’ll lose…and no matter what his accomplishments…
Trust that he ain’t leaving the Reserve like Karp’s marital promises.
this is funny to me


swerve you know i hate how bad you rhyme but i look past that lol. this verse was fairly consistent. a lotta light jabs and a couple funny/nice lines. even the misses weren't toooo bad.



Vs


Swerve aka Patrick

swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
the connection ain't good enough to me man. penny for ur thoughts/second best to cash. i get the personal and it's true but the connection is weak imo
It was a bad time for nc, that's the only way u ever made a splash.
I liked when Dominatrix him into thinking he could actually take the strap.
the wp is played on Dominate bro so can't give props here
Canadians are the lowest form of life, I'd rather be a newborn orphan.
Ur not a saint, patrick.. ur just green with envy cause I'm from new Orleans.
this np been done too bro
fuckn ugly canadian.. If ur a baller- it would go to extra innings.
The only way u maple girls is by pouring syrup on unsuspecting women.
hahaha corny but funny as fuck
did I mention u look funny, I bet everyone's always making fun.
if questions mark his appearance.. its because his back is shaped like one.
funny here too
don't talk shit, u better keep ur cool......
cause if he gets bent out of shape.. that shit is literal.
nah man wtf u threw away ya closer

some funny shit here too bro. couple played lines killed ya imo like dominatrix and then the closer

i think Swerve edged it here with better misses

[ill nik-A]

Swerve, Ace and ender was funny on a seen before twist, not ur best verse

Remy, I liked the question mark line... Some stuff I've seen before and that syrup line was baaaad to me

Swerve wins barely

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Swerve

Didn't make the main bracket, but its causing friction,
Since it’s the first time you’re battling a Sub and it’s not your addiction.
wording is a little off to me. idea was cool tho
You have no shot bud, fact the gun game is sublime,
I’ll put the Eagle at your feet to make you dance like evil Lama the lime.
this is ok
Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.
not flipped great. more statement than flip
I bust gats, bullets split your wig and make you drowsy newbie,
Couple shots will make REM sleep…then have nightmares ‘bout losing to me.
this is cool
Upsetting a half assed Orc? That’s not “making it” son,
If that was your meal ticket…it’s thanksgiving dinner - party of one.
didn't like this
Dude’ll lose…and no matter what his accomplishments…
Trust that he ain’t leaving the Reserve like Karp’s marital promises.
this is just mean. but not bad.

Originally Posted by Remy LeBeau

swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
ok. not harsh
It was a bad time for nc, that's the only way u ever made a splash.
I liked when Dominatrix him into thinking he could actually take the strap.
eh. i want to like it, but wording is off to me.
Canadians are the lowest form of life, I'd rather be a newborn orphan.
Ur not a saint, patrick.. ur just green with envy cause I'm from new Orleans.
ok
fuckn ugly canadian.. If ur a baller- it would go to extra innings.
The only way u maple girls is by pouring syrup on unsuspecting women.
ok. setup could have been better
did I mention u look funny, I bet everyone's always making fun.
if questions mark his appearance.. its because his back is shaped like one.
eh.
don't talk shit, u better keep ur cool......
cause if he gets bent out of shape.. that shit is literal.
this is cool if its true

this is a close one to me. I like REM Sleep and Swerve's closer as the best punches of the match, but didn't like much else from him. Remy had a pretty consistent, but light hitting verse. I like his concepts but he didn't have anything to match Swerve's stronger bars. I feel like this could go either way based on preference, but I think I am leaning towards Swerve on the misses. I didn't really like Remy's last 2.

Vote: Swerve

[Cred]

Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.

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swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
Canadians are the lowest form of life, I'd rather be a newborn orphan.
Ur not a saint, patrick.. ur just green with envy cause I'm from new Orleans.

Ok, this battle wasnt the greatest here but both had ok lines. I liked rems new orleans line. Swerve came pretty played here. Alvins girls shit is played to death n so is lama the lime by now. Rem had two bars i liked. He edges this one here

Vote - Remy

[Sharp]

4-2 Swerve

[Sn00p]

Didn't make the main bracket, but its causing friction,
Since it’s the first time you’re battling a Sub and it’s not your addiction.
^cool idea. flip coulda been better, esp the setup
You have no shot bud, fact the gun game is sublime,
I’ll put the Eagle at your feet to make you dance like evil Lama the lime.
^not bad
Saw your week 15 matchup, it was hilarious son,
Gambit is supposed to throw Aces…and you got embarrassed by one.
^nice
I bust gats, bullets split your wig and make you drowsy newbie,
Couple shots will make REM sleep…then have nightmares ‘bout losing to me.
^ooookay. coulda done more w/ that tho
Upsetting a half assed Orc? That’s not “making it” son,
If that was your meal ticket…it’s thanksgiving dinner - party of one.
^lol okay
Dude’ll lose…and no matter what his accomplishments…
Trust that he ain’t leaving the Reserve like Karp’s marital promises.
^okaayyy

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swerve used to be top tier, now he's next to last.
If I give u a penny for ur thoughts.. s'cause u was always second best to cash.
^ehh, connection is kinda loose
It was a bad time for nc, that's the only way u ever made a splash.
I liked when Dominatrix him into thinking he could actually take the strap.
^seen the wp many times before. kinda dece flip
Canadians are the lowest form of life, I'd rather be a newborn orphan.
Ur not a saint, patrick.. ur just green with envy cause I'm from new Orleans.
^again, i see all the connections, but they're not strong enough for a rly good line.
fuckn ugly canadian.. If ur a baller- it would go to extra innings.
The only way u maple girls is by pouring syrup on unsuspecting women.
^lol okay
did I mention u look funny, I bet everyone's always making fun.
if questions mark his appearance.. its because his back is shaped like one.
^woulda worked 2 ways better as "if a question mark's his appearance" i think. still a fresh flip on that i think
don't talk shit, u better keep ur cool......
cause if he gets bent out of shape.. that shit is literal.
^ehh, same concept as the bar before... that's never a good look. spread similar concepts over ur verse or it gets repetitive. also kinda easy/probably played concept

not a bad showing. both had lines i liked. but swerve had less lines i didn't like. remy had some misses that just didn't do anything for me. pat's lines were mostly at least decent. so yea, i got swerve on consistency here. cool battle. props
v/swervey