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Old 08-11-2015, 07:12 PM   #1
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Old 08-11-2015, 07:46 PM   #2
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check sir. how many bars do you want?
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Old 08-12-2015, 01:13 AM   #3
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Dunno really, I'll let you know when I drop
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Old 08-13-2015, 12:03 AM   #4
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EDIT --I don't kill soloist, only kill squads....

yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong
a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke
you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh
but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah
yah schemes are botched, but we read your plots knowing it's a fuckin loss
by the time we peep your drop! them weak setups have us all feeling double crossed
niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck
when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up
happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup!
I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures
God violence and MMA<<< Oats wrote his essay about me
cuz I'll send u to yah maker when I hit you with this razor and you won't make it to round 3
and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars
I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle of the barn
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Old 08-17-2015, 11:39 PM   #5
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sorry bout the late drop, i was getting bitches naked

keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating…
with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating
guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs
got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….)
clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please
no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze
screeeeech. bratatatat. pop pop. kaching. vroooom…
it’s easy killing ya dude… ive handled onomatopoeia waaay better than YOU….
bad bitches i.pull.on.ya... purified in Lake Minnetonka…
your girl’s got an oompa loompa shape that could only work for Willy Wonka
i’m an illuminati agent sent to infiltrate the text crowd.
gullibe fuck... still more chance thats true than you making the next round.
come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace.
i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space
i'll embrace the dark side by throat punching this whore
so hard he chokes from the force while i watch like im Darth Vader the Sith Lord...
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Old 08-18-2015, 11:42 AM   #6
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong
a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke
you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh
but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah
happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup!
I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures


keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating…
with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating
clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please
no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze
come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace.
i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space

Overall chyeah started out strong but then his verse fell off. But i think it was enuff to get the win cause there wasn't much I liked in fraze's verse. He had a few good lines but he had more misses than hits imo.

V. Chyeahhh
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong
a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke
niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck
when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up
and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars
I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle o

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keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating…
with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating
guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs
got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….)
clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please
no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze

This was a nice battle to keep it a buck. Way better then I expected. Chyeah had sum nice shit imo n i never really read any of dudes verses, i fucks wit it tho. Fraze came correct too though. This a close one but chyeahhhh edged this one

Vote - chyeahhhh
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Old 08-20-2015, 07:17 PM   #8
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong
Cool
a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke
nice
you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh
but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah
Clever af but execution coulda been harsher
yah schemes are botched, but we read your plots knowing it's a fuckin loss
by the time we peep your drop! them weak setups have us all feeling double crossed
you just rhyming multis?
niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck
when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up
kinda funny
happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup!
I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures
cool idea but awkward wording
God violence and MMA<<< Oats wrote his essay about me
cuz I'll send u to yah maker when I hit you with this razor and you won't make it to round 3
would've really liked context for this cause I don't follow discussion or mma. But I can put it together from what you've said and if every component is what I think it is (razor and round 3) that could be dope
and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars
I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle of the barn
cool idea but a little stretched



keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating…
with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating
funny
guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs
got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….)
funny and clever. almost wanna say the expo wasnt needed but it was a good way to double check
clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please
no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze
cool
screeeeech. bratatatat. pop pop. kaching. vroooom…
it’s easy killing ya dude… ive handled onomatopoeia waaay better than YOU….
not feeling that
bad bitches i.pull.on.ya... purified in Lake Minnetonka…
your girl’s got an oompa loompa shape that could only work for Willy Wonka
funny but light. I think dudes are gonna miss how 'work for willy wonka' works as a flip
i’m an illuminati agent sent to infiltrate the text crowd.
gullibe fuck... still more chance thats true than you making the next round.
this is just old joke delivery
come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace.
i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space
cool
i'll embrace the dark side by throat punching this whore
so hard he chokes from the force while i watch like im Darth Vader the Sith Lord...
ok


This feels close so if I pull quotes I got

insemination
crew
(lot)
water
(razor)

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trampoline
adlibs
trapeze
tungsten
(sith)


but fraze had one more bar I thought whiffed so... fuck

I could totally see this go any way for me but I thought chyeahhh was funny but fraze was a hair more direct. I read through this 5 times and thought fraze got it 3 of those... out of a hundred times I know it'd be close but I'll just stop there

v/fraze so barely
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong
This was cool to me.
a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke
Ok.
you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh
but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah
Ehh.
yah schemes are botched, but we read your plots knowing it's a fuckin loss
by the time we peep your drop! them weak setups have us all feeling double crossed
Cool flow, not a big connection tho, imo.
niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck
when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up
Lol ok, I liked this.
happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup!
I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures
Umm, nah.
God violence and MMA<<< Oats wrote his essay about me
cuz I'll send u to yah maker when I hit you with this razor and you won't make it to round 3
Ehh, not feeling.
and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars
I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle of the barn
Not the best closer, u could've done more w/ the C.C. concept/idea.

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keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating…
with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating
Ok.
guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs
got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….)
Ok.
clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please
no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze
Nice.
screeeeech. bratatatat. pop pop. kaching. vroooom…
it’s easy killing ya dude… ive handled onomatopoeia waaay better than YOU….
No.
bad bitches i.pull.on.ya... purified in Lake Minnetonka…
your girl’s got an oompa loompa shape that could only work for Willy Wonka
Not feeling.
i’m an illuminati agent sent to infiltrate the text crowd.
gullibe fuck... still more chance thats true than you making the next round.
Ok.
come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace.
i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space
Cool.
i'll embrace the dark side by throat punching this whore
so hard he chokes from the force while i watch like im Darth Vader the Sith Lord...
Decent at best closer

This battle was verrry close imo, but not a very good one. Chyeah is getting better w/ his execution.. that I can see. Fraze did alright here.. some misses he had hurt him tho. I actually have Chyeah edging this... I just preferred his bars more... & his misses weren't as bad as Fraze's. I could see Fraze getting votes tho... but to me this comes down to personal preference a lil too.. & I just think Chyeah just barely edged this. Props to vote. Keep elevating.

Vote- Chyeahhh
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I have chyeahh here. I thought his first two were cool, then the cringe line... After that it fell flat, imo.


I like frazes trapeze line. Tungsten rods n the gullible personal were straight shots, nothing too spectacular.

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I've given it to Chyeahhh as well here. Not the best i've seen from either camp, Chinyeahhh's usual creativity was lacking this time out. The opening line was a complete miss for me, though the joke one that followed up was kinda cool. I literally LOL'd at "when the water splashes up" but not in a good way. Some of his lines wayyy too many syllables long too, I don't care for that shit. Fraze has the better wording, just no real fire concepts or delivery of them. They dont sting. They're just like lovetaps. The ompa loompa line maybe could have been something, as well as the tungsten one, but as it is they just read bland to me.

Kinda close battle as neither really hit the other to TKO them, but I had Chyeahhh barely ahead on points.
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Opener, water splashes up

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Jeezy adlibs, trapeze, tungsten rods

V/Fraze... Close, good battle from both but i got Fraze here
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a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke
you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh
but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah

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keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating…
with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating
guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs
got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….)


One had the better material here, I seen a bunch of dope concepts that wasnt executed to the full potential, BUT the winner had better hits and better misses in my opinion v/Chyeah
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Chyeah that opener and follow up were dope IMO, good shit... U fell off a bit after that

Fraze, opener was cool and I thought ur trapeze flip was cool (no pun intended) on a played concept... Some of ur wording choices come across a bit awkward

I think chyea got it by an inch
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