08-11-2015, 07:12 PM | #1 |
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16. Chyeahhh!!! vs 8. fraze - CHYEAHHH WINS
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08-11-2015, 07:46 PM | #2 |
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check sir. how many bars do you want?
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08-12-2015, 01:13 AM | #3 |
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Dunno really, I'll let you know when I drop
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08-13-2015, 12:03 AM | #4 |
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EDIT --I don't kill soloist, only kill squads....
yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah yah schemes are botched, but we read your plots knowing it's a fuckin loss by the time we peep your drop! them weak setups have us all feeling double crossed niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup! I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures God violence and MMA<<< Oats wrote his essay about me cuz I'll send u to yah maker when I hit you with this razor and you won't make it to round 3 and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle of the barn
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08-17-2015, 11:39 PM | #5 |
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sorry bout the late drop, i was getting bitches naked
keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating… with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….) clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze screeeeech. bratatatat. pop pop. kaching. vroooom… it’s easy killing ya dude… ive handled onomatopoeia waaay better than YOU…. bad bitches i.pull.on.ya... purified in Lake Minnetonka… your girl’s got an oompa loompa shape that could only work for Willy Wonka i’m an illuminati agent sent to infiltrate the text crowd. gullibe fuck... still more chance thats true than you making the next round. come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace. i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space i'll embrace the dark side by throat punching this whore so hard he chokes from the force while i watch like im Darth Vader the Sith Lord...
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08-18-2015, 11:42 AM | #6 |
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup! I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating… with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace. i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space Overall chyeah started out strong but then his verse fell off. But i think it was enuff to get the win cause there wasn't much I liked in fraze's verse. He had a few good lines but he had more misses than hits imo. V. Chyeahhh |
08-20-2015, 08:45 AM | #7 |
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle o Vs keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating… with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….) clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze This was a nice battle to keep it a buck. Way better then I expected. Chyeah had sum nice shit imo n i never really read any of dudes verses, i fucks wit it tho. Fraze came correct too though. This a close one but chyeahhhh edged this one Vote - chyeahhhh |
08-20-2015, 07:17 PM | #8 |
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong Cool a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke nice you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah Clever af but execution coulda been harsher yah schemes are botched, but we read your plots knowing it's a fuckin loss by the time we peep your drop! them weak setups have us all feeling double crossed you just rhyming multis? niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up kinda funny happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup! I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures cool idea but awkward wording God violence and MMA<<< Oats wrote his essay about me cuz I'll send u to yah maker when I hit you with this razor and you won't make it to round 3 would've really liked context for this cause I don't follow discussion or mma. But I can put it together from what you've said and if every component is what I think it is (razor and round 3) that could be dope and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle of the barn cool idea but a little stretched keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating… with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating funny guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….) funny and clever. almost wanna say the expo wasnt needed but it was a good way to double check clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze cool screeeeech. bratatatat. pop pop. kaching. vroooom… it’s easy killing ya dude… ive handled onomatopoeia waaay better than YOU…. not feeling that bad bitches i.pull.on.ya... purified in Lake Minnetonka… your girl’s got an oompa loompa shape that could only work for Willy Wonka funny but light. I think dudes are gonna miss how 'work for willy wonka' works as a flip i’m an illuminati agent sent to infiltrate the text crowd. gullibe fuck... still more chance thats true than you making the next round. this is just old joke delivery come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace. i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space cool i'll embrace the dark side by throat punching this whore so hard he chokes from the force while i watch like im Darth Vader the Sith Lord... ok This feels close so if I pull quotes I got insemination crew (lot) water (razor) vs trampoline adlibs trapeze tungsten (sith) but fraze had one more bar I thought whiffed so... fuck I could totally see this go any way for me but I thought chyeahhh was funny but fraze was a hair more direct. I read through this 5 times and thought fraze got it 3 of those... out of a hundred times I know it'd be close but I'll just stop there v/fraze so barely |
08-20-2015, 09:41 PM | #9 |
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yah whoremoans in my Lab, I aint tryna breed that bitch at all, dog
Sharp fucked u when he seeded you with me, this is artificial insemination gone wrong This was cool to me. a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke Ok. you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah Ehh. yah schemes are botched, but we read your plots knowing it's a fuckin loss by the time we peep your drop! them weak setups have us all feeling double crossed Cool flow, not a big connection tho, imo. niggas say you nice...I disagree...you wack as fuck when you drop yah shit I cringe, like when the water splashes up Lol ok, I liked this. happy belated b day, hope you had a lavish getup! I'd a been outside waitin to catch u coming out that bitch like a proud dad snapping pictures Umm, nah. God violence and MMA<<< Oats wrote his essay about me cuz I'll send u to yah maker when I hit you with this razor and you won't make it to round 3 Ehh, not feeling. and yah crew is all bitch, you Farmer's remember this when you scribble yah bars I'll turn this into a crucial conflict, when I leave you smoking on hay in the middle of the barn Not the best closer, u could've done more w/ the C.C. concept/idea. Vs. keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating… with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating Ok. guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….) Ok. clown thinks hes safe when this cannon is packed? …please no sir.cuz i’m gripping the metal, swinging and catching bodies like the trapeze Nice. screeeeech. bratatatat. pop pop. kaching. vroooom… it’s easy killing ya dude… ive handled onomatopoeia waaay better than YOU…. No. bad bitches i.pull.on.ya... purified in Lake Minnetonka… your girl’s got an oompa loompa shape that could only work for Willy Wonka Not feeling. i’m an illuminati agent sent to infiltrate the text crowd. gullibe fuck... still more chance thats true than you making the next round. Ok. come get obliterated. you’ll disappear without a trace. i’ll hit you with bars so hard you’ll think they’re tungsten rods from outer space Cool. i'll embrace the dark side by throat punching this whore so hard he chokes from the force while i watch like im Darth Vader the Sith Lord... Decent at best closer This battle was verrry close imo, but not a very good one. Chyeah is getting better w/ his execution.. that I can see. Fraze did alright here.. some misses he had hurt him tho. I actually have Chyeah edging this... I just preferred his bars more... & his misses weren't as bad as Fraze's. I could see Fraze getting votes tho... but to me this comes down to personal preference a lil too.. & I just think Chyeah just barely edged this. Props to vote. Keep elevating. Vote- Chyeahhh |
08-20-2015, 10:08 PM | #10 |
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I have chyeahh here. I thought his first two were cool, then the cringe line... After that it fell flat, imo.
I like frazes trapeze line. Tungsten rods n the gullible personal were straight shots, nothing too spectacular. V/Chyeah |
08-21-2015, 07:33 AM | #11 |
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I've given it to Chyeahhh as well here. Not the best i've seen from either camp, Chinyeahhh's usual creativity was lacking this time out. The opening line was a complete miss for me, though the joke one that followed up was kinda cool. I literally LOL'd at "when the water splashes up" but not in a good way. Some of his lines wayyy too many syllables long too, I don't care for that shit. Fraze has the better wording, just no real fire concepts or delivery of them. They dont sting. They're just like lovetaps. The ompa loompa line maybe could have been something, as well as the tungsten one, but as it is they just read bland to me.
Kinda close battle as neither really hit the other to TKO them, but I had Chyeahhh barely ahead on points. |
08-21-2015, 08:30 PM | #12 |
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Opener, water splashes up
Vs Jeezy adlibs, trapeze, tungsten rods V/Fraze... Close, good battle from both but i got Fraze here
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08-22-2015, 01:52 AM | #13 |
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a black guy, a white guy and a jew?... I'm snickering yo
cause yah crew just walked right into that bar and I didn't even get to the joke you teamed with Lot after you beat him? for that ya'll should win an award bruh but ya'll will lose and you'll walk away feeling salty like Sodom and Gomorah vs keeping it 100 chyeaah. i’ll give you Props for Elevating… with a Trampoline on a helipad while the copter blades are still rotating guard your grill & i’ll go crazy w/ hooks til i crack ribs got punches for days...you’ll get dropped guaranteed like jeezy doing adlibs… (chyeeeeah….) One had the better material here, I seen a bunch of dope concepts that wasnt executed to the full potential, BUT the winner had better hits and better misses in my opinion v/Chyeah
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08-22-2015, 05:38 AM | #14 |
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Chyeah that opener and follow up were dope IMO, good shit... U fell off a bit after that
Fraze, opener was cool and I thought ur trapeze flip was cool (no pun intended) on a played concept... Some of ur wording choices come across a bit awkward I think chyea got it by an inch
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